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Saga Episode Three

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Obi-Trice-Kenobi, Mar 8, 2004.

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  1. Obi-Trice-Kenobi

    Obi-Trice-Kenobi Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Camera pans down on the largest space battle to ever occur in Star Wars. Republic Acclamators have formed a perimeter around the Seperatist fleet. A new generation Jedi starfighter-one piloted by two Jedi-approaches a large
    Seperatist battleship. It is being pursued by a triad of Droid Fighters. Obi-Wan(Gun-man) is yelling at Anakin (pilot) to pull up. Anakin ignores him and plunges closer to the battle-ship. He scrapes it, and Obi-Wan reprimands him. Obi then shoots the two of the three Droid Fighters. The third gets the Jedi 'in his sights,' and is ready to shoot them when another Jedi-Starfighter, an older model piloted by Plo Koon, takes him out. Plo Koon, Ani, and Obi, land on the Seperatist battlecruiser. They evacuate their ships and battle a large amount of droids. Eventually the three reach Count Dooku. Plo rushes him first, but Dooku uses the Force to pull of his breathing-mask. Plo suffocates in a graphic (but very cool) shot. Ani and Obi run at Dooku. He summons Plo Koon's purple saber and then uses two sabers to battle the Jedi. The ship spins out of control, causing gravity to change very often. They fight for awhile, then Dooku uses force lightning to throw Obi-Wan back into a circuit board. It breaks, messing up the electric system. Anakin and Dooku leap onto a catwalk and Ani knocks away Dooku's purple saber. They battle in total darkness. The only thing the audience sees is two lightsabers moving (a red and a blue) except when the two lightsaber's connect. When they connect, they produce a flash of light illuminating the fighting enviorment for a second or so. They end result looks very cool. Dooku then forces Ani onto another catwalk. The lights in this one are arranged periodacly: two meters of light, two meters of dark, two meters of light, and so on. The lightsabers always meet in the light areas, making that clashing noise. In the dark no blows are made, only the lightsabers hum is heard. This goes on for a short while. Meanwhile, the ship flies into the atmosphere of the planet Coruscant. The ship catches fire as it hurdles throught the atmoshpere. Ani and Dooku battle through the burning ship. Anakin throws Dooku into a corner. Dooku Force-controls the fire, and sends fire balls at Ani. Ani blocks them. Just then, the ship hits Corusant. The two ends of it have hit two buildings, and the ship lies as a bridge between them. A large plaza is before the ship. There are thousands of Coruscanti onlookers, both on the plaza and in the buildings, watching.Dooku climbs out of the ship onto the hull, and the onlookers look afraid; they know who Dooku is. He is Force-choking Anakin, who is weakened by the preceding battle. There are cries of sympathy for Anakin from the onlookers, whose number grows. Then, Obi-Wan rises behind Dooku. Tyranus turns to face him, but Obi cuts him down. Cheers erupt.

    The next scene is a ceremony on Coruscant, in a Madison Square Garden type of place. For killing Count Dooku, Obi Wan is made a Hero of the Republic, and numerous other honors from the Jedi. Mace delivers a short speech, as does Yoda. Ani is staring daggers into Obi-Wan. When they return to the Jedi Temple, Anakin bursts and starts flipping out on Obi-Wan, saying that Obi just lay there uncoincess while he, Anakin, battled Count Dooku. Obi Wan tries to apolagize but Anakin cuts him off. The usual "life just isnt fair." Anakin storms of the his room. There, Padme comes in. She comforts Anakin, and they discuss there secret marriage and Padme's baby, which is hidden under her clothes. Obi-Wan, meanwhile, goes to Dex's bar. He enjoyes a few drinks and has a deep meaning of life conversation with Dex, and decides he must make it up to Anakin. The camera switches to the Jedi Council room, where Mace, Yoda, Palpatine and Bail are discussing the war. C-3PO is serving drinks. They agree that they must launch a decisive attack on the last fortress of the Sepratists, on the planet Kashyyk. Suddenly, Obi-Wan Kenobi walks in. He tells them that he is politely rejecting the Hero of the Republic, saying "this should go to
     
  2. _JM_

    _JM_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    A little difficult to read with the lack of paragraph spacing but it works quite well. Glad I read it.
     
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