Wonderful chapter, Valairy! As obimom commented, everything came together extremely well in this chapter: the end of Obi-Wan's time on Serenno and the beginning of another phase of recovery. Hm, I didn't understand this comment here... I love the wisdom contained in Dooku's words here. Many of us, I'm sure, have been guilty of judging others too quickly, whether or not we subsequently acted on that judgement before realising its falsity, or have the victim of such judgements; it's important not to be too critical of people before we've actually had much experience interacting with them. Love how Yoda sounds like a naggy elder here. Oh yes, dessert does make up for it. Valairy, this is going into my personal Yoda file! Overall, I think you're doing a great job tying up loose ends - don't worry about it so much!