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Story [Everworld] Together (M*A*S*H Quotation Roulette Challenge)

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by DaenaBenjen42, Aug 27, 2011.

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  1. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    May 15, 2005
    Title: Together
    Author: DaenaBenjen42
    Fandom: Everworld
    Characters: David Levin, Jalil Sherman, April O?Brien, Christopher Hitchcock
    Disclaimer: I happily borrowed from K.A. Applegate.
    Notes: Everworld is, to paraphrase a beloved ad for something else, fun to read but tough to explain. This takes place after book #12. W.T.E? Welcome to Everworld.

    In answer to a quote from the M*A*S*H Quotation Roulette Challenge?

    #27: Potter: I'd watch the dimwit talk Burns; your bulb's been out since I met you.

    ~*~*~*~

    It is the morning after their rescue of Thor and Baldor from Hel?s underworld and he can?t help but watch her as she eats her breakfast and listens intently as Christopher and Jalil discuss the finer points of some very random piece of comic book trivia.

    She?s different, somehow, between last night and this morning. Almost as if? no. Not her. She?d have chosen to stay in the Old World, their former home. Right? It just didn?t make any sense for her choice to be to stay here, among them.

    April glances away from the other two boys and frowns at him, clearly not pleased with his scrutiny. ?What??

    ?You chose,? was all he was able to say. All he trusted himself to say.

    April stares at him for a moment or two before nodding, even though it wasn?t really a question. ?I did.?

    ?Why?? He barely notices that Christopher and Jalil have stopped their discussion and are now listening intently, as if they too are waiting for her answer.

    April sighs and glances at each one of them in turn, studying their faces. He knows before she says anything that the answer is not going to be entirely truthful. ?Because there is nowhere else I?d rather be? and where else do you get the opportunity to die multiple times before breakfast or rescue ancient Immortals who believe themselves all-powerful??

    Christopher snorts in muted laughter. ?We?re all cracked, aren?t we??

    Jalil was obviously trying to resist the urge to roll his eyes and David couldn?t blame him. At all. ?You started out cracked, Christopher.?

    April chuckled. ?We all did.?

    David suddenly felt the urge for an affirmation. He stuck his hand out over the table, and slowly, they put theirs on top of his, April last. They?d started out on this journey as faces in the crowd to one another, strangers who barely knew one another from school, but who knew the same person, Senna, in different ways. The popular girl who was going to be in the school play, RENT, the reluctant clown, the new kid in school, and the nerd. Now, after all this time, they were friends, hard won. He couldn?t imagine wanting anyone else by his side for the coming battle with Ka Anor. ?Together.?

    Christopher, April, and Jalil nodded as one. ?Together,? they agreed.

    And together, they finished their breakfast. There were things to do, and an evil immortal who ate other immortals, to take care of.


    fini?
     
  2. MiralukaJedi

    MiralukaJedi Jedi Knight star 4

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    May 15, 2008
    Very nice. Now just to find where that quotation page is to update the list. [face_whistling]
     
  3. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Miraluka [face_laugh] -- [face_mischief]

    Daena - what a cool name for a fandom - everworld -- :cool:

    And great quote you got -- always ribbing Burns weren't they? :p

    Great theme for the viggie -- friends forged through trials and triumphs, earning respect, affection, and trust.

    @};-

    On a side note, yesterday, I think I got even more gray hairs with the protracted pizza run -- the only thing longer is a debate in Congress [face_laugh]

    Hugs!

     
  4. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    May 15, 2005
    Mirakula: You? I had to go back more than fifty pages in my PM cache to find it! [face_laugh] Thank you, Mirakula. :)

    Jade_eyes: W.T.E., Jade_eyes. :D (This is the fandom with a wolf the size of the Harry Potter Knight Bus.)

    I've got a quote memorized having to do with Hawkeye's refusal to carry a firearm, and he was speaking to Frank at the time, so... yes!

    Great theme for the viggie -- friends forged through trials and triumphs, earning respect, affection, and trust.

    You're making me happy I got attacked by plot bunnies at work again... [:D]

    On a side note, yesterday, I think I got even more gray hairs with the protracted pizza run -- the only thing longer is a debate in Congress

    It's funny. I was actually trying to post this on Thursday night when the boards went down for that maintenance pizza run, which is how I know when they did that to us, practically down to the minute. (It was after 10:30!) And you're right. It was long! (But it was awesome to watch everyone band together last night on Facebook. Hee.)

    Thank you, Jade_eyes. :)
     
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