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Saga Everything burns (Mara Jade song fic based on Ben Moody's Song)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jadie, Aug 8, 2005.

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  1. Jadie

    Jadie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 9, 2005
    Title:Everything burns
    Author:Jadie
    Timeframe:During the Original Trilogy
    Characters:Mara Jade, the Emperor and Vader (the last two aren't even mentioned, but they are there)
    Genre:Angst, sadness
    Keywords:Mara Jade, fire, anger, revenge.
    Summary:Mara Jade doesn't like particular missions, neither how she is treated.
    Notes: I heard the fantastic music and I decided to write this. I hope I can make Ben Moody justice...
    Disclaimer:Mr.Lucas owns this Galaxy, Mr.Zahn owns Mara, and Ben Moody wrote this beautiful song, which I love.


    Here is Everything Burns' video.


    Everything Burns

    She sat in the corner of the room, her knees against her chest and her face on her hands. Through the darkness of the unfamiliar apartment, a fireplace brought life to its surroundings.

    She took a deep breath, letting her eyes rest upon the far light. Blood and sweat over her face covered a frozen expression. No emotion was showed, but memories made their way to her head.

    *It will pass, child, and you will believe me. Follow my command, and you will not regret it...*

    *You must obey our Master. If he says it's the best, then it is.*

    And then screams, cries, the voices started begging her to stop, again.

    She wanted to go away, to run, to forget, to sleep and never to wake up.

    She sits in her corner
    Singing herself to sleep
    Wrapped in all the promises
    That no one seems to keep
    She no longer cries to herself
    No tears left to wash away
    Just diaries of empty pages
    Feelings gone astray
    But she will sing


    Flames were reflected on her green eyes, as rage burnt inside her. They had made her do it again, against her will. She hated them. And now, pain took over her. A revenge that she would never have came to her mind.

    She licked the blood on her lips, savouring the flavour of cruelty.

    Til everything burns
    While everyone screams
    Burning their lies
    Burning my dreams
    All of this hate
    And all of this pain
    I'll burn it all down
    As my anger reigns
    Til everything burns

    _____________________________________________________________________________________________

    Through the Great Hall, she walked behind her Master, mask over her face. Everyone congratulated him for ending the conflicts on various planets, for finishing off dictators, for being such a gifted mind.

    However, it had been her who had been commanding stormtroopers on various battles, it had been her who had murdered those politicians, it had been her who had architected plans to infiltrate herself on numerous organisations. And the worst is that it had been her who had been bruised, who had bled, who had suffered.

    Walking through life unnoticed
    Knowing that no one cares
    Too consumed in their masquerade
    No one sees her there
    And still she sings


    As she backed off to some dark place in the large room, a familiar feeling, a familiar warmth rose inside her. Her eyes darkened, the fire came back and it burnt all the injustice, all the remorse, all the regret, all the hopes, all the dreams she had. Only the fire remained.

    Til everything burns
    While everyone screams
    Burning their lies
    Burning my dreams
    All of this hate
    And all of this pain
    I'll burn it all down
    As my anger reigns

    _____________________________________________________________________________________________

    Through her mind she felt it. She knew it. He heard and saw it.

    The greatest weapon of all times was no more.

    Til everything burns
    Everything burns
    (Everything burns)


    Hope, regret, happiness, sadness, anger, fear, power, love... revenge burnt. It all burnt with the Death Star. Consumed by the fire in her eyes.

    Everything burns
    Watching it all fade away
    (All fade away)


    Her life was over with her Master's death. The v
     
  2. Eirate_rules

    Eirate_rules Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 22, 2005
    I looooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeee it!!!!!!!!!

    Through the Great Hall, she walked behind her Master, mask over her face. Everyone congratulated him for ending the conflicts on various planets, for finishing off dictators, for being such a gifted mind.

    However, it had been her who had been commanding stormtroopers on various battles, it had been her who had murdered those politicians, it had been her who had architected plans to infiltrate herself on numerous organisations. And the worst is that it had been her who had been bruised, who had bled, who had suffered.


    Walking through life unnoticed
    Knowing that no one cares
    Too consumed in their masquerade
    No one sees her there
    And still she sings

    As she backed off to some dark place in the large room, a familiar feeling, a familiar warmth rose inside her. Her eyes darkened, the fire came back and it burnt all the injustice, all the remorse, all the regret, all the hopes, all the dreams she had. Only the fire remained.

    Til everything burns
    While everyone screams
    Burning their lies
    Burning my dreams
    All of this hate
    And all of this pain
    I'll burn it all down
    As my anger reigns


    Tht was awsome right there!!!!!!
     
  3. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Feb 5, 2005
    Awesome, Jadie! =D= Glad to read something else from you! [:D]
     
  4. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2005
    Wonderful work, Jadie!

    I especially like the way The Emperor gets all of the praise, while it was Mara who had done all of the work, who had been bruised, who had bled, who had suffered
     
  5. americantragedy

    americantragedy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 6, 2005
    As she backed off to some dark place in the large room, a familiar feeling, a familiar warmth rose inside her. Her eyes darkened, the fire came back and it burnt all the injustice, all the remorse, all the regret, all the hopes, all the dreams she had. Only the fire remained.
    ^Best line ever^
    wow. i have no words. this was awesome jadie.
    -mia-


     
  6. Jadie

    Jadie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 9, 2005
    Eirate Rules: Thank you so much for reading this! I very glad you liked it! :)

    Idrelle: It's nice to know you found this! You liked this one? Then you'll love I'm Ok. ;)

    Jade Lotus: The first two parts take place early in Mara's life, when she was something like 12, 13... so her feelings are a little off-character... 8-}
    I'm very happy you liked it!


    AmericanTragedy: Thank you so much for your words! [face_batting]



    Has someone heard the song? It's beautiful! :D
     
  7. LaYa_

    LaYa_ Jedi Knight star 5

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    Jul 21, 2003
    You did a wonderful job in this one. As you'll always do :) Great songfic! ;)
     
  8. Jadie

    Jadie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 9, 2005
    Laya: Thank you so much for reading it (and for upping it :D ). I'm really glad you liked it! ;)

     
  9. Jadie

    Jadie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 9, 2005
    I hate to do this, but I need to Up this fic... :rolleyes:
     
  10. MirandaFair

    MirandaFair Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 13, 2005
    Beautiful incorporation of the song with the fic. It's spooky how well they fit together. Very cool!

    Loved how you took us through a journey through Mara's early life till after the Death Star went 'boom'.

    As she saw her world disappear, she felt free. So free, that she felt lost.

    Til everything burns
    Everything burns

    All her emotions burnt.

    Watching it all fade away
    (Oooh, ooh)

    Her soul was gone.

    Everything burns

    Mara Jade watched, as the Emperor's Hand burnt.

    Watching it all fade away.


    Loved this whole passage. It blended very well together.
    A brilliant job, as always Jadie. So happy I found this! [face_dancing]
     
  11. Jadie

    Jadie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 9, 2005
    Thanks Miranda! :)

    I love writing little stories about Mara's life ;) .
     
  12. Jadie

    Jadie Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 9, 2005
    I wrote Parents Suffer as a response to the "Are we there yet?" Challenge. ;)
     
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