Beyond - Legends **Eyes** a poem - A/T

Title: Eyes
Author: Arwen_Djo
Category: ????
Characters: Anakin/Kunra, Tahiri/Riina
Timeline: NJOish, I guess
Notes: I love any kind of comments! Also, I kinda stole Ani/Kunra from McEwok, though I didn't know it. For the real record, they're not the same person, though in this they are.
Disclaimer: Sigh, I wish it was mine...


(Tahiri)
He's leaving now
He said no goodbyes
I'm not understanding how
I'm not understanding why
Ice blue eyes shut the door
Ice blue eyes don't answer
I'm hurt, far beyond the core
I'm falling, he left me for her
Please, don't stop
Please, wait for me
I'm wanting you to stop
I'm wishing you would see

(Anakin)
I'm walking out slow
I'm not leaving
She's perfect from head to toe
She's heavily, painfully breathing
I'm not quite human
I'm too shaped for perfection
Green eyes tear, they shine with lumin
Green eyes know Yuuzhan Vong correction
Please, let's leave our unshaped bodies here
Please, this will not change who we are
I'm not Ani. They are both dear
I'm Kunra and Riina's like me, with mar.

***

So, tell me what ya think...

 

Nice job! I like the Anakunrahiri.

 

Very nicely done!

 

SilSolo
Nice job! I like the Anakunrahiri.

Thanks Master.

VaderLVR64
Very nicely done!

*Bows* Thank you!

 

Nice little poem there.

 

Thanks, Jaya.

 

Very good Really like the contrast

 

Hey, thank you YodaKenobi! I guess contrast is good.