Eyes Can Deceive, JA AU, 5/24

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  1. Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master

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    Obi saved them all, and he's blind!
  2. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    WHOA POOR OBIWAN FANTED WELL HEY AT LEAST QUIGON WIL LEARN HE'S MORE THEN WHAT HE GIVES OBIWAN CREDIT FOR!!!!!
  3. Sticks-Solo Jedi Knight

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    Yeah, Obi saves the day again. :)
  4. TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master

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    When I get the next couple posts up you guys are going to kill Qui-Gon. That's all I'm going to say but it was probably too much.

    ~Swede [face_devil]
  5. Ginger_Jedi Jedi Grand Master

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    *delurks*

    Great posts!

    :eek: Poor Obi!!!

    I NEED to know what happens NOW!!!!!

    Sorry...I'm a tad impatient today...
  6. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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  7. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Where's my daily fix???? :(
  8. TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master

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    Coming. I'm coming. I've been busy tonight. Up in a minute.
  9. TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master

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    Ok, so here is your daily fix KenobisGirl. :D

    hehe. I have addict. [face_devil]
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    Clat?Ha helped Qui-Gon up and to the med bay on the ship. He swayed a little as he walked but he gathered the Force and continued forward. The med bay was full though and despite Clat?Ha?s insistence, the Jedi Master waited until the nurse and droid could get to him.

    After his shoulder was bandaged he and Clat?Ha headed to his room only to run into a very frustrated and tired Si Treemba.

    ?Master Jedi, Clat?Ha! Master Jedi, Clat?Ha!?

    The two turned toward the voice.

    ?Yes, Si Treemba?? Clat?Ha asked.

    The young Arconan reached them then doubled over as he tried to catch his breath.

    ?It?s? Obi? Wan.? He said in between breaths. Qui-Gon turned his full attention to the young boy. ?He? I don?t? know. He? was? he just? collapsed.?

    ?What?!?

    ?Obi-Wan collapsed. I don?t know what happened.?

    ?Where is he?? The Jedi Master asked.

    ?In the bridge.?

    Qui-Gon nodded once then took off down the hall. Clat?Ha looked at Si Treemba then both ran to catch up.

    ?You need to rest, Qui-Gon.? Clat?Ha said as she put a hand on his good shoulder.

    ?I?ll rest later.?

    ?What happened?? Si Treemba asked Clat?Ha.

    ?He had a slight run-in with a lit vibro-ax and doesn?t know when to call it quits.?

    Qui-Gon just ignored her.

    They finally got to the bridge only to find it empty.

    ?Where is he, Si Treemba?? Qui-Gon asked as he turned to the Arconan. ?If he has collapsed it could be serious.?

    Si Treemba looked flustered. ?He was here when I left. I didn?t want to but I had to get help.?

    ?Where was the pilot??

    Si Treemba looked at the ground.

    ?Si Treemba??

    ?Obi-Wan piloted the ship.?

    ?What!? How?? Clat?Ha exclaimed.

    Qui-Gon just stood there for a minute staring at the floor by the pilot seat. Then he spun around and strode out the door.
  10. Jenn-Kenobi Jedi Knight

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  11. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Whew... I feel so much better!! What's wrong with being addicted? [face_devil]

    Well, I'm not mad at Qui yet, he seems concerned, but I'm sure I'll want to kick his butt in the next post. Especially from what you've been hinting!!!!! ;)
  12. Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master

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  13. Jedi_Borme Jedi Master

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    Where Obi-dear? Where Qui going? I like this story, can't wait to read more.
  14. Abbi_Cee Jedi Master

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    Now where could Obi have gone? Did the pilot wake up and take him to the medbay? Did a pirate sneak in and kidnap him? Or maybe it was the disgusting Hutt out for revenge? Drat. I have to go into the city tomorrow, I won't be able to read until late.
  15. TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master

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    Where's Obi? What's Qui doing?

    heehee [face_devil]

    KenobisGirl, there's nothing wrong with being addicted. In fact it's good. Means there's a steady group of victims reading this. :D







    You know the cruelest thing I could do right now is say that there is no more story and this is the end. [face_devil] Mwhahahahaha!

    I don't know, I'm feeling cruel and mean tonight.

    ~Swede :p
  16. Ginger_Jedi Jedi Grand Master

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    NOOOO!!! You have to post more!! PLEASE don't me cruel! I CAN'T HANDLE IT!!!!!!!!

    :eek:
  17. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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  18. jedi_master_gimpy Force Ghost

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    Oh, no!! Where did Obi disappear to? :(
  19. TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master

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    Jenny the Jedi didn't I see you using that post on another story?

    Don't worry, Ginger, I wouldn't be so cruel.

    And since I'm in a good mood because my classes are all done, I might post another one later tonight. But only if I get a lot of feedback. :D
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    Qui-Gon strode down the corridor. He wasn?t storming down it because he was a Jedi and was able to keep his face and stride calm looking. So no, he wasn?t ?storming?.

    He marched through the Offworld?s side of the ship. The halls all seemed deserted and Qui-Gon followed the Force to where the majority of the signatures were. He paused outside the large mess hall. His shoulder still ached and sweat beaded at his forehead.

    He finally opened the door and stepped into a room full of Jemba?s men and the giant Hutt himself. He then noticed that the other side of the room was full of the Arconan miners.

    ?So,? Boomed Jemba. ?The Great Jedi Jinn shows himself. And after so bravely defending the ship from those fierce pirates too.? The Hutt?s laugh echoed through the room and was quickly joined by his men.

    ?What?s going on here??

    Qui-Gon turned then moved over slightly as Clat?Ha and Si Treemba came into the room.

    ?Why are all the Arconans here on Offworld?s side?? Clat?Ha asked.

    ?I was wondering the same thing.? Qui-Gon asked in his quiet voice.

    ?Hoo hoo,? Jemba boomed again, his great mass jiggling with his laugh. ?We are merely working out a business deal. It nothing that concerns you, Jedi.?

    ?Maybe not him,? Clat?Ha said, pushing past Qui-Gon. ?But if it?s about the Arconans then it most certainly deals with me.?
    Jemba turned his bulging eyes on the women doing his best to stare her down. But Clat?Ha stood her ground and simply gazed back.

    ?This does not deal with you either Human. You I don?t care about. Only the Arconans.?

    Frustrated, Clat?Ha turned to the nearest Arconan and asked him what was going on.

    ?The dactyl is missing.? The miner said softly. ?Jemba has said he will give it to us if we sign with him and join Offworld.?
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    What more? Only if I hear from you.
  20. Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Hey! What about Obi?

    More.
  21. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    :D :D :D
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    You know what i want so give give giveeeeeee!
  22. ewen Jedi Master

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    WOWW??????????????Wait a minute,OBI IS MISSING,QGJ get out there and find him for us.PEACE Ewen
  23. TheFallen Jedi Master

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    Yeah! Hold it! ((screech))

    Obi's just chillin' somewheres... poor kid.

    Oh, I beg of you, more!
  24. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Where's Obi? :(

    More soon please!!! :D

  25. Jedinight-A Jedi Knight

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    Jedinight-A delurks
    Post more :) I must know what happened to poor, adorable Obi. I'm addicted,says in a shakey tone post more soon. :D

    ~Jedinight-A
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