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Eyes Can Deceive, JA AU, 5/24

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by TheSwedishJedi, Nov 15, 2001.

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  1. Lonewolf89

    Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Obi saved them all, and he's blind!
     
  2. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    WHOA POOR OBIWAN FANTED WELL HEY AT LEAST QUIGON WIL LEARN HE'S MORE THEN WHAT HE GIVES OBIWAN CREDIT FOR!!!!!
     
  3. Sticks-Solo

    Sticks-Solo Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Yeah, Obi saves the day again. :)
     
  4. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    When I get the next couple posts up you guys are going to kill Qui-Gon. That's all I'm going to say but it was probably too much.

    ~Swede [face_devil]
     
  5. Ginger_Jedi

    Ginger_Jedi Jedi Knight star 6

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    *delurks*

    Great posts!

    :eek: Poor Obi!!!

    I NEED to know what happens NOW!!!!!

    Sorry...I'm a tad impatient today...
     
  6. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    More? Please? :)
     
  7. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Where's my daily fix???? :(
     
  8. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    Coming. I'm coming. I've been busy tonight. Up in a minute.
     
  9. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    Ok, so here is your daily fix KenobisGirl. :D

    hehe. I have addict. [face_devil]
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    Clat?Ha helped Qui-Gon up and to the med bay on the ship. He swayed a little as he walked but he gathered the Force and continued forward. The med bay was full though and despite Clat?Ha?s insistence, the Jedi Master waited until the nurse and droid could get to him.

    After his shoulder was bandaged he and Clat?Ha headed to his room only to run into a very frustrated and tired Si Treemba.

    ?Master Jedi, Clat?Ha! Master Jedi, Clat?Ha!?

    The two turned toward the voice.

    ?Yes, Si Treemba?? Clat?Ha asked.

    The young Arconan reached them then doubled over as he tried to catch his breath.

    ?It?s? Obi? Wan.? He said in between breaths. Qui-Gon turned his full attention to the young boy. ?He? I don?t? know. He? was? he just? collapsed.?

    ?What?!?

    ?Obi-Wan collapsed. I don?t know what happened.?

    ?Where is he?? The Jedi Master asked.

    ?In the bridge.?

    Qui-Gon nodded once then took off down the hall. Clat?Ha looked at Si Treemba then both ran to catch up.

    ?You need to rest, Qui-Gon.? Clat?Ha said as she put a hand on his good shoulder.

    ?I?ll rest later.?

    ?What happened?? Si Treemba asked Clat?Ha.

    ?He had a slight run-in with a lit vibro-ax and doesn?t know when to call it quits.?

    Qui-Gon just ignored her.

    They finally got to the bridge only to find it empty.

    ?Where is he, Si Treemba?? Qui-Gon asked as he turned to the Arconan. ?If he has collapsed it could be serious.?

    Si Treemba looked flustered. ?He was here when I left. I didn?t want to but I had to get help.?

    ?Where was the pilot??

    Si Treemba looked at the ground.

    ?Si Treemba??

    ?Obi-Wan piloted the ship.?

    ?What!? How?? Clat?Ha exclaimed.

    Qui-Gon just stood there for a minute staring at the floor by the pilot seat. Then he spun around and strode out the door.
     
  10. Jenn-Kenobi

    Jenn-Kenobi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Aug 3, 2001
    oh no! WHERE is Obi?!
     
  11. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Whew... I feel so much better!! What's wrong with being addicted? [face_devil]

    Well, I'm not mad at Qui yet, he seems concerned, but I'm sure I'll want to kick his butt in the next post. Especially from what you've been hinting!!!!! ;)
     
  12. Lonewolf89

    Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Where is he?????!!!!!
     
  13. Jedi_Borme

    Jedi_Borme Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Where Obi-dear? Where Qui going? I like this story, can't wait to read more.
     
  14. Abbi_Cee

    Abbi_Cee Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Now where could Obi have gone? Did the pilot wake up and take him to the medbay? Did a pirate sneak in and kidnap him? Or maybe it was the disgusting Hutt out for revenge? Drat. I have to go into the city tomorrow, I won't be able to read until late.
     
  15. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    Where's Obi? What's Qui doing?

    heehee [face_devil]

    KenobisGirl, there's nothing wrong with being addicted. In fact it's good. Means there's a steady group of victims reading this. :D







    You know the cruelest thing I could do right now is say that there is no more story and this is the end. [face_devil] Mwhahahahaha!

    I don't know, I'm feeling cruel and mean tonight.

    ~Swede :p
     
  16. Ginger_Jedi

    Ginger_Jedi Jedi Knight star 6

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    NOOOO!!! You have to post more!! PLEASE don't me cruel! I CAN'T HANDLE IT!!!!!!!!

    :eek:
     
  17. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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  18. jedi_master_gimpy

    jedi_master_gimpy Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh, no!! Where did Obi disappear to? :(
     
  19. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    Jenny the Jedi didn't I see you using that post on another story?

    Don't worry, Ginger, I wouldn't be so cruel.

    And since I'm in a good mood because my classes are all done, I might post another one later tonight. But only if I get a lot of feedback. :D
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    Qui-Gon strode down the corridor. He wasn?t storming down it because he was a Jedi and was able to keep his face and stride calm looking. So no, he wasn?t ?storming?.

    He marched through the Offworld?s side of the ship. The halls all seemed deserted and Qui-Gon followed the Force to where the majority of the signatures were. He paused outside the large mess hall. His shoulder still ached and sweat beaded at his forehead.

    He finally opened the door and stepped into a room full of Jemba?s men and the giant Hutt himself. He then noticed that the other side of the room was full of the Arconan miners.

    ?So,? Boomed Jemba. ?The Great Jedi Jinn shows himself. And after so bravely defending the ship from those fierce pirates too.? The Hutt?s laugh echoed through the room and was quickly joined by his men.

    ?What?s going on here??

    Qui-Gon turned then moved over slightly as Clat?Ha and Si Treemba came into the room.

    ?Why are all the Arconans here on Offworld?s side?? Clat?Ha asked.

    ?I was wondering the same thing.? Qui-Gon asked in his quiet voice.

    ?Hoo hoo,? Jemba boomed again, his great mass jiggling with his laugh. ?We are merely working out a business deal. It nothing that concerns you, Jedi.?

    ?Maybe not him,? Clat?Ha said, pushing past Qui-Gon. ?But if it?s about the Arconans then it most certainly deals with me.?
    Jemba turned his bulging eyes on the women doing his best to stare her down. But Clat?Ha stood her ground and simply gazed back.

    ?This does not deal with you either Human. You I don?t care about. Only the Arconans.?

    Frustrated, Clat?Ha turned to the nearest Arconan and asked him what was going on.

    ?The dactyl is missing.? The miner said softly. ?Jemba has said he will give it to us if we sign with him and join Offworld.?
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    What more? Only if I hear from you.
     
  20. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey! What about Obi?

    More.
     
  21. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :D :D :D
    :D :D

    You know what i want so give give giveeeeeee!
     
  22. ewen

    ewen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    WOWW??????????????Wait a minute,OBI IS MISSING,QGJ get out there and find him for us.PEACE Ewen
     
  23. TheFallen

    TheFallen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah! Hold it! ((screech))

    Obi's just chillin' somewheres... poor kid.

    Oh, I beg of you, more!
     
  24. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Where's Obi? :(

    More soon please!!! :D

     
  25. Jedinight-A

    Jedinight-A Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jedinight-A delurks
    Post more :) I must know what happened to poor, adorable Obi. I'm addicted,says in a shakey tone post more soon. :D

    ~Jedinight-A
     
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