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Beyond - Legends Eyes of Ice (post-NJO J/J/Z) *COMPLETED 8/8*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by NYCitygurl, Jun 11, 2005.

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  1. Zonoma

    Zonoma Jedi Master star 5

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    Well written and, I think, very believable. Good post, though sad in a going-to-your-high-school-reunion-and-seeing-your-old-sweetheart-and-then-meeting-his-wife kind of way. Good job!

    Oh, and thanks for the PM. Unexpected but very appreciated!

    Zonoma
     
  2. cheersweetie27

    cheersweetie27 Jedi Master star 3

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    Yay, she still loves Jag! Great post. I liked how you resolved her feelings for Zekk and showed how it was time for both of them to move on. Nice job.
     
  3. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    Great Post.

    Glad Jaina finally came to her decision. Yes I'm tickled pink that it was Jag. And I do feel bad for Zekk. But he'll find love. With Stephanie or someone else.

    One more post? *rubs hand in anticipation* hopefully it will be a J/J reunion and one of the Jedi boys getting the trollop. Oops. I mean Stephanie.
     
  4. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *snaps fingers* dang it's a lost cause with this girl *continues to read in hopes of something changing*

    Fireyforce
     
  5. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Awwww. She finally got there. Great post!
     
  6. Rogue_Pilot_2347

    Rogue_Pilot_2347 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    But what about Zekk! He can't go with Stephanie! She's a bit of a brat, don't you think?
     
  7. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Zonoma: Well written and, I think, very believable.

    Thanks!!! :D I hoped it would be; I was worried about it.

    Good post, though sad in a going-to-your-high-school-reunion-and-seeing-your-old-sweetheart-and-then-meeting-his-wife kind of way. Good job!

    Thanks!!! :D I never thought of it that way, but that's a good comparison.

    Oh, and thanks for the PM. Unexpected but very appreciated!

    You're welcome :)


    cheersweetie: Yay, she still loves Jag!

    I couldn't resist ;) [face_love]

    Great post.

    Thanks!!! :D

    I liked how you resolved her feelings for Zekk and showed how it was time for both of them to move on. Nice job.

    :D


    Lola64: Great Post.

    Thanks!!! :D

    Glad Jaina finally came to her decision. Yes I'm tickled pink that it was Jag.

    [face_laugh] ;)

    I do feel bad for Zekk. But he'll find love. With Stephanie or someone else.


    Me too, but he'll be okay :)

    One more post?

    Yep.

    *rubs hand in anticipation*

    [face_laugh]

    hopefully it will be a J/J reunion

    Of course :)

    and one of the Jedi boys getting the trollop. Oops. I mean Stephanie.

    [face_laugh] Zekk will :)


    Fireyforce: *snaps fingers* dang it's a lost cause with this girl *continues to read in hopes of something changing*

    Nothing will change, sorry.


    Elfsheen: Awwww. She finally got there. Great post!

    Thanks!!! :D Yep :)


    Rogue: But what about Zekk! He can't go with Stephanie! She's a bit of a brat, don't you think?

    [face_devil] Of course I do; I created her. As Jenn said, I seem to have a knack for creating b****es ;)
     
  8. Zonoma

    Zonoma Jedi Master star 5

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    Thanks!!! :D I never thought of it that way, but that's a good comparison.

    [face_laugh][face_laugh] Of course you wouldn't be likely to think of it that way immediately! You're still IN high school instead of stressing out about losing the last of the belly you were blessed with at the same time you were blessed with children before you have to face all of your old classmates, whom you have not so much as sent a postcard to in ten years, and hope the sum of your life comes even close to the sum of theirs! Can you tell I'm freaking out here about my upcoming reunion? o_O Oh no, I don't have issues at all!!8-} You know what the ironic part is? In high school I had a reputation for not caring one iota what others thought of me... my nickname was Ice Queen because I didn't need anyone's approval to be me. (I guess that ticked off the guy who liked me when I told him to go jump in a lake or something) *sigh* Ungh. The more I think about it, the more I don't owe these people anything... thank you, Nat, You are sooooo theraputic! [face_laugh][face_laugh][face_laugh]

    Zonoma

    I guess I have officially lost it.=P~I am a drooling lunatic.
    Thank you for coming.
     
  9. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    [face_laugh] [:D] Glad I could help :) Good luck!!!
     
  10. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Here it is: the last post. Thank you all very much for sticking with me, especally you J/Zers who got disappointed. I promise I'll make it up to you :)

    Jacen will have a story that takes place a few years after this about his own search for love. I don't know what it's called or when it will be up, but if you're die-hard J/TK or J/D I wouldn't advise reading ;)

    Without further ado . . . the post!!


    ~~~~~~

    Jag was just coming out of his meeting when I found him. I think he got a pretty big shock when I ran up to him and threw my arms around him. It took him a few seconds to figure out what was happening and return my embrace.

    ?Wow, what?s that for?? he asked.

    I tilted my head up to meet his eyes. ?I love you.?

    ?That good, because I love you too,? he replied, and met my lips with his own.

    We broke apart when we heard someone whistle. I glared at Jag?s uncle. ?Go away, Wedge.?

    Wedge Antilles laughed. ?Get a room.?

    I stuck my tongue out at him as was about to retort, but Jag stopped me with another kiss. ?Don?t egg him on, or Wes will show up.? I shivered, and it wasn?t because of the cold. If Wes Janson saw me kissing Jag, I would be teased for the rest of the day, and then my father would be told.

    ?Are you going to ask??

    Jag frowned. ?Ask what??

    ?Don?t play stupid. I saw you fingering something in your pocket when you asked me to go home with you. Something about the size of a ring box.?

    He blushed. ?I though you weren?t ready for that yet.?

    ?I wasn?t,? I agreed, ?but I did some serious thinking, and I?m ready now. I want to spend the rest of my life with you. I love you.?

    Jag gave me a goofy grin that I had only seen on him a few times before. ?I don?t have the ring with me right now.?

    ?I don?t care. You can put it on later. Ask now.?

    ?In front of all these people??

    I realized that we weren?t alone, but most of the people around us were pretending to talk to each other. I knew that I would get teased, and that this was far from romantic, but I didn?t care. I just wanted Jag. ?Yes.?

    Jag grinned again. He took both my hands in his and dropped to one knee in the cold snow. ?Jaina Solo, will you marry me??

    ?Yes.?

    ~~~~~~


    ~Natalie
     
  11. jedi_of_ennth

    jedi_of_ennth Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thank you all very much for sticking with me, especally you J/Zers who got disappointed.

    That's okay. We're used to disappointment. ;)

    We broke apart when we heard someone whistle. I glared at Jag?s uncle. ?Go away, Wedge.?
    Wedge Antilles laughed. ?Get a room.?
    I stuck my tongue out at him as was about to retort, but Jag stopped me with another kiss. ?Don?t egg him on, or Wes will show up.? I shivered, and it wasn?t because of the cold. If Wes Janson saw me kissing Jag, I would be teased for the rest of the day, and then my father would be told.


    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Great post! :)
     
  12. Zonoma

    Zonoma Jedi Master star 5

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    *sighing* That was very sweet... thank you, Nat. And the way Jaina "proposed" was too funny!:D

    Zonoma
     
  13. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    jedi_of_ennth: That's okay. We're used to disappointment.

    [:D]

    Great post!

    Thanks!!! :D


    Zonoma: *sighing* That was very sweet... thank you, Nat. And the way Jaina "proposed" was too funny!

    Thanks!!! :D You're welcome [:D]
     
  14. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    Nice ending NYCitygurl

    Wedge Antilles laughed. ?Get a room.? [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    I often think that when I read some of these fics.

    But there was no Stephanie/Zekk? Oh well. Maybe some other time.

    Can't wait to see who Jacen falls for in your next fic. Maybe you can have him do what Lando does. Have Luke join him in his search and almost marry a witch, literally.

    Anyhow, I'll look out for it.

    And again, great job on this.
     
  15. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Owh, that was a perfect ending. I love it. Hahaha Jag and a goofy grin, that is a picture I really want to see!
     
  16. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    is cute even though it wasn't zekk. I'll probably read you Jacen fic cause it should be interesting to see who you pair him with.

    fireyforce
     
  17. cheersweetie27

    cheersweetie27 Jedi Master star 3

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    :_| It's over! I'm so sad. Great ending though!! They're gettin married...
     
  18. NYCitygurl

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    Lola64: Nice ending NYCitygurl


    Thanks!!! :D

    I often think that when I read some of these fics.

    [face_laugh] Me too ;)

    But there was no Stephanie/Zekk? Oh well. Maybe some other time.

    No, because it's told from Jaina's POV and she just wanted to marry Jag :)

    Can't wait to see who Jacen falls for in your next fic. Maybe you can have him do what Lando does. Have Luke join him in his search and almost marry a witch, literally.

    [face_laugh] Nope, not a witch *tries not to start quoting Monty Python* It'll be obvious from pretty much the first post :)

    Anyhow, I'll look out for it.

    :D

    And again, great job on this.

    Thanks!!! :D


    Elfsheen: Owh, that was a perfect ending. I love it.

    Thanks!!! :D

    Hahaha Jag and a goofy grin, that is a picture I really want to see!


    Me too :D


    Fireyforce: is cute even though it wasn't zekk.

    Thanks!!! :D

    I'll probably read you Jacen fic cause it should be interesting to see who you pair him with.

    :D


    cheersweetie27: It's over! I'm so sad. Great ending though!! They're gettin married...

    Thanks!!! :D *hands over tissues* Don't cry!!
     
  19. Rogue_Pilot_2347

    Rogue_Pilot_2347 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great ending...despite the J/J-ness. I'm going to hold you to that J/Z story. :)
     
  20. ZekksGoddess

    ZekksGoddess Jedi Master star 4

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    That's okay. We're used to disappointment.
    I must echo that statement.

    I'm going to hold you to that J/Z story.
    That makes two of us! :D

    Very nice job with the story though. It was nicely done although I do prefer J/Z.
     
  21. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Rogue: Great ending...despite the J/J-ness.

    Thanks!!! :D

    I'm going to hold you to that J/Z story.

    I'll post it as soon as I get a bunny :)


    ZekksGoddess: I must echo that statement.

    I'm sorry :(

    That makes two of us!

    Lol I promised and I'll deliver :)

    Very nice job with the story though. It was nicely done although I do prefer J/Z.

    Thanks!!! :D
     
  22. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Very sweet Nat, maybe a bit too sweet... *shifty eyes*



    Where is the real NYCgirl? hmmm? :p



    Sam
     
  23. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Very sweet Nat

    Thanks!!! :D

    Where is the real NYCgirl? hmmm?

    [face_laugh] [face_devil]
     
  24. skywalker64089

    skywalker64089 Jedi Knight star 3

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    Very nice. I thought the introspection was very impressive.

    S.
     
  25. Mirax_Corran

    Mirax_Corran Jedi Master star 4

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    *jumps with joy* Yay! :D (But somehow I knew it would end like this. :p )

    Great work, Nat!
     
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