Saga Fall Into Darkness (Short Ani/Vader Poem)

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  1. darla101 Jedi Master

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    Feb 11, 2003
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    This is my first ever poem I've posted. Little nervous, but here goes...

    Fall Into Darkness

    I'm falling into the darkness
    I don't know where to turn
    Life just seems so wasted
    Im at the point of no return
    Why won't someone help me?
    Do you hate me like i thought?
    The Darkness is so empty
    The vastness of my thoughts.
    Why am I leaving now?
    Will I die too young?
    Im just another shadow
    I'll always be alone.
  2. Yazid_Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Jul 10, 2002
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    Nice poem. And darla... U'll never be alone :D
  3. AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight

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    Apr 1, 2001
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    deep down poem, darla. my favorite stanza, Life just seems so wasted

    ~aeryn
  4. darla101 Jedi Master

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    Feb 11, 2003
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    LOL!

    I should hope I won't be alone!

  5. Yazid_Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Jul 10, 2002
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    A girl as sweet and talented as you will never be alone. ;)
  6. darla101 Jedi Master

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    Feb 11, 2003
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  7. Ra_Skywalker420 Jedi Youngling

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    thats really pretty, you got anymore poems up your sleeve?
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