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Saga Fall Into Darkness (Short Ani/Vader Poem)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by darla101, May 11, 2003.

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  1. darla101

    darla101 Jedi Master star 3

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    This is my first ever poem I've posted. Little nervous, but here goes...

    Fall Into Darkness

    I'm falling into the darkness
    I don't know where to turn
    Life just seems so wasted
    Im at the point of no return
    Why won't someone help me?
    Do you hate me like i thought?
    The Darkness is so empty
    The vastness of my thoughts.
    Why am I leaving now?
    Will I die too young?
    Im just another shadow
    I'll always be alone.
     
  2. Yazid_Skywalker

    Yazid_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 10, 2002
    Nice poem. And darla... U'll never be alone :D
     
  3. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 1, 2001
    deep down poem, darla. my favorite stanza, Life just seems so wasted

    ~aeryn
     
  4. darla101

    darla101 Jedi Master star 3

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    Feb 11, 2003
    LOL!

    I should hope I won't be alone!

     
  5. Yazid_Skywalker

    Yazid_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 10, 2002
    A girl as sweet and talented as you will never be alone. ;)
     
  6. darla101

    darla101 Jedi Master star 3

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    Awww *goes red*
     
  7. Ra_Skywalker420

    Ra_Skywalker420 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Mar 11, 2003
    thats really pretty, you got anymore poems up your sleeve?
     
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