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Beyond - Legends Falling, Declining, Diminishing, Beginning - A Riina Kwaad / Tahiri Veila poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Elfsheen, May 10, 2003.

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  1. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    This is a poem that makes no sense, yet all the sense in the world, capice ;)

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    Falling, Declining, Diminishing, Beginning


    Stars are burning
    Like the sun rising
    The moon dying
    I come around
    To swim in a sea
    That has lost its appeal


    Morning has broken
    Like the moon rising
    The sun dying
    I go to sleep
    To walk in a world
    That has a ghost image to it


    The harbour is at the horizon
    Like a sea drained
    The fish falling
    I start to fall
    To move in a fiery circle
    That has neither end nor beginning


    The city is building before my eyes
    Like a stone crumbling
    The pieces burning
    I lie around
    To feel the ice gathering
    That will freeze my passing to yours


    ~FIN~
     
  2. aelie

    aelie Jedi Youngling star 3

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    excellent ! Very good ! :D


    me
     
  3. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Unlike other times, I actually read this one aloud to myself. I like the whole poem, so I can't pick out a specific stanza I like the best.

    ~aeryn
     
  4. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    aelie - Thanks!!!

    AERYN_SUN - Thanks to you too. It's a very weird poem and I have no idea how I feel about it. But thanks for eading. You're my loyal poem reader ;)
     
  5. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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  6. Kyp_side_of_TheForce

    Kyp_side_of_TheForce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was nice... one of those poems that just makes you stare at the computer screen for a while after it's over...
     
  7. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Hahaha, it made me stare too. Thanks for reading Kyp-Side!
     
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    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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