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Falling into the pit...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by baritonep1aya, Feb 8, 2003.

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    baritonep1aya Jedi Youngling star 1

    Aug 24, 2002
    Through a course of highly complicated events, Anakin becomes fustrated and starts with Obi Wan Kenobi.

    Obi Wan is stunned to see how reckless Anakin is. Losing all technique, relying on pure hatred in each swing of the lasersword. Anakin continues, each swing releasing more and more hatred and bent up fury. Obi Wan loses footing, and starts backing away from the new terror. Anakin puts all his strength into a lunge from the top down, and Obi moves out of the way, circling around to Anakin's other side. Obi Wan swings at him, and it catches Anakin off guard, his torso is bleeding, perhaps cut off.

    Anakin collapes in the middle of a small V shaped rock formation on the side of the narrow walk way. He saw his lightsaber on the ground, but so shooken up with anger and pain could not summon the force to grab it. So he just hung there.

    "Anakin! Don't give in to your hate!" He stuck his arm, hoping Anakin would let him help. "We can get you help! Please Anakin! Don't let me lose you to the Darkside of the Force!"

    Anakin couldn't stand what he was hearing. This man, he hated him, he couldn't stand the fact he ever called this man "friend". All he knew is that he couldn't let him win. He had to whatever he could. He looked down, a smoltering lava pit. He knew what he had to do.

    He took one final last breath, and plummeted to his death. Obi Wan ran to the edge, shocked and overwhelmed with emotion. What a fool he was, he thought... What a fool...

    He picked up Anakin's lightsaber, and walked to his ship. But not without giving one more gaze back to the fiery grave of Anakin Skywalker.

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