Beyond Family Ties (Sequel to Just Yesterday and Trickster Twins) J/J *May 19, 2005: THE END*

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  1. FelsGoddess Game Host

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    Great post! Yes, hiding her weapons is a great idea, I have to agree.
  2. NYCitygurl NSWFF Manager

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    Myra: pats Troy on the head* Good boy, Troy. <--That rhymes!!

    Lol [face_laugh]

    I'm glad that he's being nice now.

    :)

    Maybe Celeste will come to her senses too, and stop chasing Jag...



    Yeah . . . . no.

    Great post! Enjoy your time off!

    Thanks!!! :D I had a great time--and still a week to go :D

    Gina: Lol exactly :D

    Whisper: I'm quite proud of Troy actually. It takes guts to wake Mara up in the middle of the night like that. I'd be terrified to have to apologize to Jaina and Jag.

    Lol. Thanks!!! :D

    Starlan: Thanks!!! :D Oh wow, that sucks :(

    Sam: Thanks!!! :D I'm getting grounded from Thusday to Sunday :(

    hollynkesten: Thanks!!! :D All questions will be answered in the next few posts.

    Jordan: Thanks!!! :D

    And I'm happy Luke forgave Troy.
    Troy really is good deep inside of him.


    Yep :)

    Also I can't wait to see what happens to Celeste.
    I hope she face Jaina!


    . . . . not exactly . . .

    FelsGoddess: Thanks!!! :D
  3. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    Still a week off? NOT FAIR!!!!! I'm back on Monday. :_| :_| :_|

    Hey, when do you think the next post will be?
    Myra
  4. hollynkesten Force Ghost

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  5. NYCitygurl NSWFF Manager

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    Myra: :p I've got about half of it written, so today or tomorrow.

    hollynkesten: I'm hurrying, I'm hurrying :p
  6. Jedi_Whispers Jedi Master

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    At least you guys still get a Spring Break, I haven't had one for *cringes* five years now... Oy, I'm starting to feel old now.

    Can't wait for your update, Nat.

    ~*Whisper*~
  7. NYCitygurl NSWFF Manager

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    *enjoys high school a lot*

    Sorry for the shortness.

    ~~~~~~

    Harrar looked over the Shamed Ones gathered near the Citadel. ?The Goddess Yun Harla has given us her blessing!? he told the crowd. ?Now is the time to attack!?

    ?We shall overthrow the Overlord!? the crowd screamed back.

    Harrar replied, ?Go!? The crowd surged as they headed into the Citadel.

    The High Priest smiled. Jaina Solo hadn?t exactly given her blessing?she didn?t even know about the civil war he had just started. If h had his way, by the end of the day he could send her a message that the Yuuzhan Vong High Command was gone.

    He didn?t know what would happen to the Yuuzhan Vong once he had control. He only knew that he would surrender the entire species to the goddess.

    ******

    Zekk surveyed the controls of the Lightning Rod. His old ship had been given to him by Peckhum, the man who had raised him. It had served both of them well, and would now serve Zekk once again.

    He couldn?t stay here. He wanted nothing to do with Celeste or the baby, and Jaina had made it clear that she did not love him. My lost love.

    Jaina was happy with Jag and Malisia. She had told him that she thought that he should marry Celeste and raise the baby. I can?t do that, love. I can?t stay here and be with someone else, and watch you love another man.

    No, this way was best. He would just leave. Celeste could do whatever she wanted with the baby; he didn?t care.

    Zekk didn?t know what he would do. He couldn?t be a Jedi, or a bounty hunter. He would find something, he always did. Maybe a supply hauler. The Rod had done that before.

    Zekk took off, leaving the military base far behind. Once he was out of the atmosphere, he entered in hyperspace coordinates. He pulled the lever, and the Lightning Rod shot into hyperspace.

    That was the last they ever saw of Zekk.

    ******

    The attack had taken them by surprise. They had gotten over it quickly, however, and fought back. But what the army had in strength, the Shamed Ones had in numbers. It was a bloody battle that lasted three days instead of the one that Harrar had predicted.

    After what seemed like a lifetime, it was over. They had killed Warmaster Nas Choka and Onimi, the Supreme Overlord?s pet. Shimrra himself was a captive, and being held in the throne room by a strong guard.

    It was time to contact the Goddess.

    ******

    Jaina?s comlink buzzed, and she frowned. She really wanted to spend time with her daughter. Jag leaned over and kissed her forehead. ?Better see if it?s important, sweetheart. Besides, Malisia is asleep.?

    Jaina nodded and answered the comlink. ?Solo here.?

    ?Goddess, there is a message down here marked as urgent.?

    ?It can?t wait??

    ?No, Great One.?

    Jaina sighed. ?Who is it from??

    ?High Priest Harrar.?

    ******

    Oh most supreme goddess,

    My Shamed Ones and I have taken the Citadel in which the High Command resided. The Warmaster is dead, and the Supreme Overlord ha been captured. All Yuuzhan Vong forces have been ordered to surrender. WE are yours, Goddess.

    Your most loyal servant,
    Harrar


    The technicians were surprised when Jaina fainted.

    ~~~~~~
  8. SwordoftheJedi Force Ghost

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    Oh most supreme goddess,

    My Shamed Ones and I have taken the Citadel in which the High Command resided. The Warmaster is dead, and the Supreme Overlord ha been captured. All Yuuzhan Vong forces have been ordered to surrender. WE are yours, Goddess.

    Your most loyal servant,
    Harrar


    There is only one word for that, WOAH!

    That was the last they ever saw of Zekk.

    Huh? Zekk is gone forever?

    Good post Nat!
  9. Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Master

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    WOW!

    Go Harrar! Go overthrowers! WooT! I can just see the look on Jaina's face, getting that message.... *whistles* Wow!

    ZEKK! Bad! Bad! Turn your bum around! :mad:

    :D :D Awesome!
  10. oldjedinurse Jedi Master

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    :D

    Great post, Nat! Short, but very sweet.

    I agree with Smuggler_Shidakis, Zekk is a bad boy.

    Harrar, however, =D=!

    And our Goddess - its been a wild ride for her.

    More, more!

    ojn
  11. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    Great post! So, the Overlord is gone? Is this drawing to a close?

    Great postie. Loved it.
    Myra
  12. Anastasia_Fel Jedi Master

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    W00t, Zekkie gone bye, byes :)


    Though he abandoned Celeste, is that smart for leaving her or bad for leaving the baby? :confused:
  13. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    That just proves what I thought all along. Zekk is a heartless evil-doer!!

    Glad he's gone, though. I actuall feel sorry for Celeste, though. I mean, I would want to steal Jag, too. Such a hottie...

    Forgot you were reading this, Sam
    Myra
    Still love the post!
  14. NYCitygurl NSWFF Manager

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    Jordan: There is only one word for that, WOAH!

    Yeah, that did happen a bit fast.

    Huh? Zekk is gone forever?

    Yep

    Good post Nat!

    Thanks!!! :D

    Gina: Go Harrar! Go overthrowers! WooT! I can just see the look on Jaina's face, getting that message.... *whistles* Wow!

    Lol thanks!!! :D

    ZEKK! Bad! Bad! Turn your bum around!

    I thought you wanted him gone.

    Awesome!

    Thanks!!! :D

    ojn: Great post, Nat! Short, but very sweet.

    Thanks!!! :D

    More, more!

    Soon :)

    [bMyra:[/b] Great post!

    Thanks!!! :D

    So, the Overlord is gone? Is this drawing to a close?

    Yes and yes.

    Great postie. Loved it

    Thanks!!! :D

    Sam: Though he abandoned Celeste, is that smart for leaving her or bad for leaving the baby?

    That is the question, isn't it.
  15. hollynkesten Force Ghost

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    Odd post, keep up the good work!
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  17. SwordoftheJedi Force Ghost

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  18. Exploded-Girl Force Ghost

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    I'm alive!!! Though I don't feel like it...ugh! I am exhausted. Met Rob at Downtown Disney for dinner on Saturday; went to Universal Studios on Sunday (ran into Rob after lunch); spent the entire day Monday at Epcot (met Rob before lunch, went back to their hotel to go swimming, then went back to Epcot for the fireworks show); on Tuesday we went to Magic Kingdom in the morning and MGM at around 2-ish (met Rob at MGM); went to Animal Kingdom Thursday morning (met Rob there too!!)!!!!!!!

    We were s'posed to leave Thursday afternoon but decided to stay another day so we went back to MGM Thursday afternoon, but had to leave at about 5:15 because it started raining! And today we just drove for over 15 hours!!!!! [face_tired] [face_tired] [face_tired] [face_tired] [face_tired]


    EDIT: Oh, and excellent posts Nat!!! I would have better responses but my brain is dead right now......................................
  19. Nomad-2 Jedi Master

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    Just incase you couldn't tell Kels met me while i was in Florida....... I hate jetlag....

    For all i've missed, Great posts Nat...

    Just a friendly BOOM!!! to keep you going!
  20. Jagsgrl412 Jedi Knight

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    Nat great posts!

    So Rob Kels how was Disney? That would rightfully explain why neither of you have been on YIM or AIM in a while.

    Update on me: I broke my ankle last week!
  21. Anastasia_Fel Jedi Master

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    *mutters about no one visiting Australia*



    Anyways, sorry bout your ankle jagsgurl, make sure you make everyone else do your chores ;)
  22. Exploded-Girl Force Ghost

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    I would come visit you, Sam!!...but I'm broke!!
  23. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    I would too but I'm a broke minor.

    Nobody vists North Carolina!
  24. NYCitygurl NSWFF Manager

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    Jordan: As soon as I get through my snapload of homework.

    Kels: Lol lucky!! Thanks!!! :D

    Rob: Thanks!!! :D Yeah, I guessed.

    Tess: Thanks!!! :D Oh, poor you!! That really sucks :(

    I've got you all beat--Indiana!! We have nothing but corn!! But we're getting daylight savings time (mutters angerily)
  25. Jaina_Solo_59 Force Ghost

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    I'm going to florida next week.
    Nobody visits CT!!!
    But i think Nat won.
    Sam I know someone who went to australia for a year!
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