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Beyond - Legends Family Ties (Sequel to Just Yesterday and Trickster Twins) J/J *May 19, 2005: THE END*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by NYCitygurl, Mar 6, 2004.

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  1. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Glad to hear about the long post coming up!

    :D

    Sad to hear it will be the last.

    Me too!! I can't believe it's ending!!

    I'll miss this story, Nat. (Except that I'll be re-reading it!)

    Thanks!!! :D Lol they're be sequels :)
     
  2. Mirax_Corran

    Mirax_Corran Jedi Master star 4

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    *doesn't want it to end*

    I wish that there was more. It's sooooooooo good. And I know, I did about a three day marathon read. Took me that long...
    Myra
     
  3. Jaina_Solo_59

    Jaina_Solo_59 Jedi Master star 4

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  4. FelsGoddess

    FelsGoddess Game Host star 5 VIP - Game Host

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    Yay! They're here! I'm glad Jaina and Jag are getting married.
    Natasha rolled her eyes. ?You only did the fun part. I did all the hard work. And you weren?t exactly helpful while they were trying to kill me on their way out.? LOL!!! Great!
     
  5. hollynkesten

    hollynkesten Jedi Master star 3

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    awww so glad its not over yet, and very pleased that the twins are healthy and 'perfect'... more soon!
     
  6. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Myra: Lol its a long story :)

    Kat: Yeah :(

    FelsGoddess: Thanks!!! :D

    hollynkesten: Thanks!!! :D I'm putting more up now.
     
  7. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Only one more post!! *cries*

    ~~~~~~

    ?Nerf steak!?

    ?Salmon!?

    ?Nerf steak!?

    ?Salmon!?

    Celeste had about had it. Jaina and Leia had been arguing for over an hour about what to serve at Jaina?s wedding reception. Celeste was sick of it. Jaina and Jag had been engaged for three months and all Jaina and Leia had done was fight.

    Celeste sighed and shifted uncomfortably. The stupid baby was going to be born any day now, and Celeste couldn?t wait to get rid of it. She certainly didn?t want it any longer than she had to. Her father and grandmother were forcing her to give birth to it, but she didn?t have to like it. Especially since it?s father had taken off without a word.

    Troy, however, was ecstatic. He couldn?t wait for the baby to be born. He was constantly hovering around Celeste and putting his hand on her stomach, waiting for the baby to kick?something that Celeste enjoyed not at all.

    Ever since he had come back from the Dark Side, he was a poster boy for good behavior. He was constantly babysitting for Natasha Rhysode?s twins and Malisia. It was sickening.

    She wouldn?t let Troy, or anyone else, know if the baby was a boy or a girl. She didn?t know herself, and didn?t want to. She wasn?t sure what would happen to the baby once it was born, and she didn?t care.

    Celeste groaned when a baby started whimpering. Jaina and Leia were babysitting for the twins, and one of them was getting upset at the arguing.

    Leia sighed. ?Jaina, now you?ve made Ian cry.?

    ?I have not! It was you!?

    ?If it was me, Sara would be upset.? The little girl was lying quite contently in Leia arms.

    Jaina sighed. ?Troy, would you mind taking Ian for a while??

    ?Of course not,? her cousin replied, grinning. He walked over to Jaina and took the little baby from her arms. Ian instantly calmed down as Troy rocked and soothed him.

    Celeste started feeling uncomfortable, but she figured it was just the baby acting up again. She shifted, but the pain got worse. She felt a trickle of water down her legs.

    Troy noticed. ?Celeste, your water just broke.?

    ?What??

    ?The baby is coming!?

    Celeste groaned as Troy, Leia, and Jaina swarmed around her. Great.

    ******

    Troy paced in the med bay. Celeste had been in labor for a long time. He was getting worried, and he wasn?t the only one. His father and uncle were sitting in the uncomfortable chairs, looking concerned.

    Leia walked in and sat down by her brothers. ?Any sign??

    Karis shook his head. ?None.?

    ?We?re getting worried,? Luke added. ?She?s been in labor for a long time.?

    ?Too long,? his sister replied. ?It?s getting dangerous.?

    The Skywalker triplets looked toward the door where Celeste, Padme, and Nycola Skywalker were.

    Troy felt his heart race. There was a very good chance that both his sister and her baby would die.

    ******

    Several hours later, Troy reached out to his sister to help with the pain. It was enormous. Troy didn?t see how Celeste was standing it. Then he realized that she wasn?t?it was killing her.

    There was a final stab of pain. Troy cried out, and dimly felt the cold floor under him and concerned voices surrounding him. Then . . . nothing.

    His sister was gone.

    ******

    A few minutes later, Padme came out of the room. ?Celeste is dead.?

    Karis roared in pain, but Troy felt nothing. His emotions were numbed with shock. His sister, the person her had known since before they were born, was dead. He knew he would feel the pain later.

    He stood up slowly and met his grandmother?s eyes. ?I know.?

    Padme nodded. She had thought that Troy had been with Celeste during her final moment. ?Troy,? she said softly. ?It?s not over.?

    ?It?s not??

    Padme shook her head, and Troy realized that she was holding something in her arms. ?Celeste died, but the baby didn?t.?

    Troy walked over to his grandmother and took the little child from her arms. Even through his shock, he felt a stab of love for the child. He had loved her since before she was born.

    ?It?s a girl,? Padme said softly, ?and she?s yours. You w
     
  8. Blondie_JediKnight

    Blondie_JediKnight Jedi Youngling star 2

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    *gasps* Celeste died?! I don't know if thats good now. It probably is. Poor baby though. Good Troy taking care of her! =D=
    Blondie^..^
    ps First post!! [face_dancing]
     
  9. NYCitysinger

    NYCitysinger Jedi Youngling

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    Yep :D It is. Troy will be a good Daddy :)

    EDIT: sorry, posted on my songfic sock
     
  10. Mirax_Corran

    Mirax_Corran Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm kinda sad that Celeste died. I really feel sorry for her. Troy is so sweet, though. Great post!
     
  11. FelsGoddess

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    Wow, she died. It's better Troy gets the baby. Good post.
     
  12. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :eek:
    You've finally killed her, and no one is celebrating!
    :eek:

    [face_dancing]

    I don't feel sorry for her at all. Not after everything she did and what she thought about poor, innocent Dawn.

    I love the name Dawn... Poor blind baby :( At least Troy will be a good daddy.
     
  13. Liz_09

    Liz_09 Jedi Youngling

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    Oh my gosh it brought tears to my eyes! I have read every post of every story,that was in the trilogy and this was by far the best one you have ever done! Sweet,yet gut wrenchingly sad! Dawn...beatiful name...
    A great ending to a great story ( or near ending!)
     
  14. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Lovely, Nat.

    A very touching post - poor, beautiful little Dawn. I'm glad Troy's taking her.

    Somehow I feel like Celeste is out of her misery. **mean thoughts**

    oldj
     
  15. hollynkesten

    hollynkesten Jedi Master star 3

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    awesome!!! Sorry that celeste died, but its a little ok b/c she was a brat from the start so i dont really feel all that bad about it! awesmoe post, love Troy's protectiveness and the baby's name...

    more soon
     
  16. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Myra: I'm kinda sad that Celeste died. I really feel sorry for her.

    Really? I don't. I've been waiting for over a year to do this [face_devil]

    Troy is so sweet, though.
    He's my darling :) I'm glad I didn't kill him :)

    Great post!

    Thanks!!! :D

    FelsGoddess: Wow, she died. It's better Troy gets the baby. Good post.

    Thanks!!! :D Yeah, that's why she died.

    Gina: You've finally killed her, and no one is celebrating!

    I know, I"m totally shocked. Everyone hates her.

    I don't feel sorry for her at all. Not after everything she did and what she thought about poor, innocent Dawn

    Me either [face_devil]

    I love the name Dawn

    Me too :)

    Poor blind baby At least Troy will be a good daddy.

    Yep :) And he'll help her :)

    Liz 09: Oh my gosh it brought tears to my eyes!

    Thanks!!! :D

    I have read every post of every story,that was in the trilogy

    Wow you've had quite a marathon.

    this was by far the best one you have ever done!

    Thanks!!! :D It was one of my favorites to write :)

    Dawn...beatiful name...

    Thanks :)

    A great ending to a great story ( or near ending!)

    Thanks!!!! :D Nope, one more post :)

    oldj: Lovely, Nat.

    Thanks!!! :D

    A very touching post - poor, beautiful little Dawn. I'm glad Troy's taking her.

    Thanks!!! :D He'll raise her right.

    Somehow I feel like Celeste is out of her misery. **mean thoughts**

    Well . . . . .

    hollynketsen: awesome!!!

    Thanks!!! :D

    Sorry that celeste died, but its a little ok b/c she was a brat from the start so i dont really feel all that bad about it!

    Really?? I'm not the least bit sorry.

    awesmoe post, love Troy's protectiveness and the baby's name...


    Thanks!!!! :D

    more soon

    There won't be any until this weekend at the very earliest.
     
  17. CodeName_Targeter

    CodeName_Targeter Jedi Master star 5

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    Wow, I fell behind. Whoops... [face_blush]

    Awesome job though Nat! I can't believe that it's almost over.

    However, on the subject of Celeste...


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    Sorry, it'll have to serve until they get a party face. :p
     
  18. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Thanks!!! :D Lol [face_laugh]
     
  19. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I'm working on the last post. It's going to be pretty long, so I'm think about splitting it into two segments.
     
  20. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Okay, I don't think I'm going to split it up. It will be up Sunday or Monday :)
     
  21. Mirax_Corran

    Mirax_Corran Jedi Master star 4

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    Hey! Sunday is tomorrow! [face_dancing]
     
  22. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Master star 4

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    Hi to all!


    Nat:

    wow, I like what you did with that story...
    Zekk left, Celest died (I admit I am not really sorry), Troy turned around, Jaina and Jag in the middle of wedding preparations, war is over...
    Have I forgotten something? :p

    only one post left :(


    ~Mag~
     
  23. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Mag: Thanks!!! :D Lol I don't think so.


    Okay, I think I'm grounded but I might get out of it Anyway, I'm not on my computer so I can't work on the story. The last post will be up . . . sometime.
     
  24. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm sad that it's ending. :( But we have sequels to look forward to! Yay!
     
  25. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    :D

    The trilogy won't be up until summer starts, preferibly after the move, but I'll get to work on the short stories as soon as I finish this. Unfornately I'm not on my computer and therefor have to way of getting to the document.
     
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