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Discussion in 'Greenville, NC' started by Master_Dante_Jarmeck, May 3, 2005.

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  1. Master_Dante_Jarmeck

    Master_Dante_Jarmeck Jedi Youngling star 1

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    hey everyone, i just found a story that ive been working on for a loooong time. i thought it had been deleted, but its still around. i told Robby about it and he thought it sounded cool, so im gonna post the link to the story and if anyone wants to read it please do and give me some feedback.

    http://f2.pg.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/newageknight18/lst?.dir=/stories&.order=&.view=l&.src=bc&.done=http%3a//f2.pg.briefcase.yahoo.com/

    just dont be too harsh with your feedback, please. oh and another thing, i started this story when i was 15 and finnished when i was 18 or 19, so youll notice my age progression in the writing. the timelines dont add up too well and im working on fixing that. any suggestions will be graciously accepted.
     
  2. The_Green_Ranger

    The_Green_Ranger Jedi Youngling star 1

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    the link is screwed up
     
  3. Master_Dante_Jarmeck

    Master_Dante_Jarmeck Jedi Youngling star 1

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    http://f2.pg.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/newageknight18/lst?.dir=/stories&.order=&.view=l&.src=bc&.done=http% 3a//f2.pg.briefcase.yahoo.com/
     
  4. Jedi_Master_Kel

    Jedi_Master_Kel Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Still having trouble with the link.

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  5. Master_Dante_Jarmeck

    Master_Dante_Jarmeck Jedi Youngling star 1

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    i guess, try copying and pasting it, if that soeant work ill have to stick it somewhere else.
     
  6. Master_Dante_Jarmeck

    Master_Dante_Jarmeck Jedi Youngling star 1

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    ok, hmmm, i dont know where to put it, i cant even get to it right now. d@mn yahoo,
     
  7. Master_Dante_Jarmeck

    Master_Dante_Jarmeck Jedi Youngling star 1

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    if it wont click, copy and paste, its working... for now. its the unedited version so its still a bit cheesy.



    http://f2.pg.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/viewanbeleck/lst?.dir=/My+Documents&.view=l
     
  8. Master_Dante_Jarmeck

    Master_Dante_Jarmeck Jedi Youngling star 1

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    nevermind, i guess ill have to get it posted here first. anyone know any beta-readers?
     
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