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  1. DARTH_MU Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Feb 9, 2005
    star 4
    Twentieth Century Fox fanfare blares.
    Twentieth Century Fox logo.
    LucasFilm Limited Logo.
    STAR WARS
    Knights of the Old Republic: Episode V

    Boring Opening Scrawl.

    Space.

    [voice of Jennifer Hale]
    I need you to be the beacon, T3. If he is lost out there, on the edge of the galaxy, if he finds whatever terrible thing he has seen, then he may not survive. If he doesn't make it back, then I need you to return to the Empire, find help. If you cannot find me, then seek out other Sith, the Empire...
    [pause]
    I can't lose him, even if he believes he is protecting me.
    [/voice of Jennifer Hale]

    A KDY manufactured frigate leaves space port over Dantooine.

    [Large Letters in Gold]

    A Brentus of Gath Production
    fades, replaced by

    A Darth Mu film
    fades, replaced by

    Directed by Darth Mu
    fades, replaced by

    Executive Producer: Brentus of Gath

    [/Large Letters in Gold]

    [face_whistling] A new hope [face_whistling]

    A Fosh appears in the centre of the screen

    [Boos and hisses from audience] {That means you!)

    [Danny Seagren]
    I am here to tell you the story of Malak and Bastila. Historians from Coruscant 4000 years later will tell you that I am a liar...
    [/Danny Seagren]

    [oranges, bananas, and eggs are thrown toward the Fosh] (what are you waiting for? Join in already)

    Fosh with Danny Seagren's voice is driven off the stage.

    Screen fades yet again.

    screen refocuses

    Malak on hospital bed.

    Where am I? Where's Bastila? Is she all right?

    [Master Lamarr]
    Revan has her.
    She has... returned to the Light Side of the Force.

    [Malak]
    No. That's not true, that's impossible! She saved me from the Light, she would never...

    [Lamarr]
    We underestimated the Light Side of the Force, Malak.

    [Malak]
    Where are they? I must find them.

    [Lamarr]
    You will not find her

    [Malak]
    And why not? I can feel the hate flowing through me, I am ready. I can go and possess her like the prophecy said.

    [Lamarr]
    She is lost, Malak, accept it.

    Screen fades out.

    [Voice of Jennifer Hale]
    Revan... Where are you?

    Screen fades out for the final time.

    "The looking glass is broken, where the hell is my Gizka?"

    Coming a long time later, to a galaxy not so far away.

    Playing on the Before the Saga Board


  2. Katana_Geldar Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Mar 3, 2003
    star 8
    Shot of Obi-Wan in holographic form.

    Obi-Wan: My long-range transmitter has been knocked out. I need you to transmit this message to Coruscant.

    Music: strains of Duel of the Fates, soft then growing louder

    Text: The Republic stands on the edge of a knife.

    Shot of Nalanda?s ship exploding on Coruscant.

    Text: The Galaxy stands on the brink of war.

    Shots of Jedi fighting droids

    Text: Only one can save them all?

    Shot of Senator Nalanda addressing the Senate.

    Nalanda: My only concern is that we may stop the storm which is about to break.

    Text: Yet something lurks beneath the surface.

    Shot of Obi-Wan captured with Dooku talking to him.

    Dooku: What if I were to tell you that the Senate is in control of a Dark Lord of the Sith?

    Close-up of Obi-Wan?s face.

    Obi-Wan: I don?t believe you, and why should I?

    Shot of Obi-Wan looking at the clonetroopers on Kamino

    Shot of the politicians around a round table in a dark room.

    Bail Organa: Any action taken now will be taken as an act of war

    Shot of Count Dooku

    Dooku: War can sometimes be necessary.

    Shot of Obi-Wan?s hologram before the Jedi Council

    Obi-Wan: There seems to be something going on that I haven?t yet been able to place.

    Text: Yet someone will betray them all?

    Quick succession of close-up shots, Anakin, Palpatine, Obi-Wan, Count Dooku, Renust Nju, Mace Windu, Padmé...

    Obi-Wan: Traitor!

    Shot of Padmé?s hologram projected on the garage floor.

    Padmé: Obi-Wan sent this message to me from Geonosis, I thought you might want to take a look at it.

    Text: Everything changes

    Attack of the Clone AU ? Jedi Padmé

    Now playing in Saga

    Fade to black
  3. chaotic-force Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Feb 20, 2006
    star 1
    First attempt at a preview. This is for my action story Empty Knights
    [Open in Space]

    we see hundreds of stars. We see one of the faint stars moving and zoom in to reveal the Spaceship Lightning Rod. The camera zooms into the interior and we see Zekk meditating. There is only silence as the camera zooms ever closer to his face, until the silence is broken by a screaming disembodied voice.

    Voice: FIND ME.

    Zekk opens his eyes and gasps for several seconds before closing his eyes again. As his eyes shut, the camera goes to black.

    Voice over Luke: It's getting louder.

    Zekk: Every day. Something is calling me. I have to find out what it is.

    Luke: Are you going to call her.

    Cut to a crowded ballroom. Jaina is sitting at the head table, Jag next to her holding her hand.

    Zekk: Of course I will.

    Cut to Zekk in gray robes sneaking out of the ballroom.

    Cut to black.

    Voice over Jaina: You dissapeared for so long. You abandoned all of us, just tell me why?

    Cut to a crowded shipping dock. A black hooded Jedi ignites a red lightsaber.

    Zekk: All my life I have had to feel guilty. I am always the survivor. I live, and people hate me for it. Now. I've found a way to make up for it all. This is my chance to prove something to everyone.

    Cut to Zekk. He is standing on the exit ramp of the Lightning Rod. He has landed on an Ice planet. In the horizen is a destroyed building. A shattered Imperial crest can be seen amongst the rubble.

    Jaina Voice Over: Prove what?

    Zekk: That I deserve to live.

    The camera zooms into the imperial base. We cut through winding blue hallways, untill we enter a room that is shrouded completley in darkness. We linger for a moment, until a rasping female voice breaks the silence.

    Female Voice: Find Me.

    The darkness is broken by a red lightsaber, revealing a pale clawlike hand.

    Cut to black. The words EMPTY KNIGHTS appear in Red letters.

    Comming in 2006
  4. Star_Angel Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Jan 18, 2006
    star 4
    <In the Light>

    Luke- ?Mommy, could you tell us a story?
    Padmé-?Of course I will, Okay, so once upon a time, a brave and handsome Jedi was sent to watch over a young Senator??

    Sabé- ?Obi- Wan, Where are we going??
    Obi- Wan- ?You?ll see in a minute, besides, if I told you, it wouldn?t bee a surprise,
    Sabé-?Oh, Obi- Wan, it?s beautiful!?
    Obi- Wan- ?Well, it?s not as beautiful as you but it is our wedding day?.

    Vader- ?Padmé, I will never bee the man I once was; my body is too destroyed for that?.
    Padmé- ?I don?t care, I love you and I will always love you, no matter how you look?.

    <And In the Dark>

    Palpatine- ?I can take everything from you, Padmé?.
    Padmé- ?You already have?

    Padmé- ?Obi- Wan, what happened??
    But the tears in his eyes were enough for them to know the answerer before he said it.
    Obi- Wan- ?She is gone, she?s truly gone?.

    Vader- ?We?ve located the rebels, my Master; their fleet is near Yavin 4?.
    Palpatine- ?You?ve done well, my apprentice, you may do as you please with them?.

    <With our Hopes>

    Porter ? ?So, how is the two little love birds??
    Padmé- ?You don?t want to know, believe me?.

    Palpatine- ?Amidala is dead and Skywalker belongs to me, and soon, really soon, the whole Galaxy will bee at my feet??

    Padmé- ?What do you say Luke, is it a good ship?? ?I take that as a yes, you know what, I?ll bet that one day, you?ll bee sitting in one of these and just like your daddy once did, I?ll know that you?ll be an incredible pilot?.

    <And our Fears>

    Padmé- No, no, no, no this can?t bee happening, I can?t lose my children, they are all I live for.

    Palpatine- ?She can?t bee alive, how is that possible, why can?t I sense her in the Force???

    Vader picked Padmés dead body in his arms, and walked away.

    <Through Peace>

    ?We did it, Padmé, the Imperial fleet is leaving?.

    <And through war>

    Obi- Wan and Padmé both turned on their lightsaber?s and deflected the blaster bolts that came toward them.

    Padmé felt sick when she saw the bodies that lied around their feet.

    <In the end, it all comes down to one thing, The Final Show Down>

    Padmé felt the dagger pierce her arm time after time but she was too tired to fight, to even scream.

    The end was near, but welcomed?

    <In the end, even the brightest candle will die out>

    The lost that the Galaxy suffered was only a small piece of what a few pepole felt, at the lost of the light?

    ***

    Obi- Wan- ?Everything will be okay?.
    Padmé- ?No it won?t, but thank you for telling me that it will??

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


    The Light of an Angel, now in the_saga board.




  5. DarthNightfire Jedi Youngling

    Member Since:
    Apr 3, 2006
    star 3
    Ok, this ia later on in the sstory, but oh well.
    Series: 501st Legion
    Book: 3
    Title: The New Apprentice
    ***************************************************************
    "Rise, Darth Nightfire," Stormslayer said.
    *Nightfire gets up, switch to next scene*
    *Fight between two Siths and Nightfire* *Stromslayer walks in and helps.*
    Stormslayer-I sense much of Darth Maul in you
    *switch next scene. stick fight between 15 kids and Darth Nightfire in boy form. Nightfire wins b contacting the Force***

    Stormslayer- I would like the 2 billion credits you owe me

    gambler-I lost everything!

    Stormslayer- you dont gamble unless you are sure who wins

    gambler-you cheated! you knew the kid was a going to win. somehow you knew it!

    *gang comes near Nightfire. They quickly take him, and flee*

    leader of gang-I told you we would get you*pulls out a knife*

    leader-any last words? With you pinned, I dont think you are going to even try to escape. I can see you're scared

    *Nightfire struggles*

    Nightfire- I fear nothing! *kicks outwards. they all engage in awesome fight. Finally, Stormslayer comes and helps, along with a Zabrak girl*

    black skin. like Nightfire, except he had light red. They both had a crown of horns.

    *later on*

    Stromslayer puts thumb on Nightfires chin

    stormslayer-were you afraid?

    nightfire- I.. yes

    stormslayer- good. fear can make you strong. obedient. in this there is power. understand?

    nightfire-yes, my master.
    ***************************************************************


    end trailer
  6. ophelia Cards Against Humanity Host. Ex-Mod

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    Member Since:
    Jun 25, 2002
    star 6
    Okay, I wrote this story an eternity ago, but I made a trailer for it anyway, <Monty Python>joost ta shoo 'em!</Monty Python>.

    Well, okay, actually, it was because oquidaun has such cool ones for her fics, and *I* wanted one *too.* Mooooooom!!! I *want* one!! :p

    The file is in MS Mediaplayer format, and it's optimized for high-bandwidth connections using IExplorer.

    Spirit Warriors Trailer

    The link above should theoretically take you straight to the file, but in case it doesn't, you can go to: http://www.padawanslacker.neptune.com and go to the "SWOA_sound" album. (There's also a version with no sound, but that's not as interesting.)

    Here's a link to a Word document version of the story in question, too: Spirit Warriors of Angharad. There's a link to the board version in my bio, for those who just can't get enough 2-year-old reader replies.
  7. ZebulaNebula Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Feb 10, 2005
    star 5
    *Fade-through of LFL logo*

    *martial-sounding music begins playing*

    *Scene: Space above Mon Calamari: Bothan Assault cruisers trade massive broadsides with Mon Calamari Star Cruisers and Hapan Battle Dragons while starfighters weave through the fray.*

    VO(Announcer): History has a way of repeating itself in the worst ways.

    *Scene: an open field on Telos, Day: Backed against an overturned landspeeder, Danni Quee deflects the blasterfire from unseen troops while Chak Fel fires two DL-86 heavy blaster pistols from the cover of her lightsaber*

    VO(Bel Iblis): Two civil wars have struck the galaxy in my lifetime; I sincerely hope we can prevent a third from coming to pass. My instincts, however, tell me I hope in vain.

    *Scene: Bothauwi, int. day. Admiral Kre'Fey stands on an interior balcony in the Combined Clans Building, giving a speech to a hundred thousand beings.*

    Kre'Fey: Ten years ago, we declaired A'krai on the Yuuzhan Vong! Has it been carried out?

    Crowd: No!

    Kre'Fey: Why not? Because the weaklings in the Galactic Alliance government coddle these butchers. So what do we do? *brief pause* we secede from the Alliance and carry out justice on our own! Vengeance for the Martyrs! *Kre'Fey slams his fist onto the railing*

    Crowd: Vengeance!!

    Kre'Fey: *Salutes crowd* I will not rest until Justice has been carried out in full!

    Crowd: Justice!!!

    *Scene: Interior, President Bel Iblis' office, evening. Luke, Mara, Leia, Jacen, Tenel Ka, and Han sit in a semi-circle in front of Bel Iblis' desk.*

    Bel Iblis: General Solo, I'm promoting you to Supreme Commander of our armed forces. I don't like doing this, Master Skywalker, but I'm also offering every Jedi Knight and Master a commision as an Admiral or General, making them an official part of our military. I'm only doing this because we've lost two thirds of our best commanders to defection.

    *Scene: The bridge of the Hapan Battle Dragon Red Dawn, the Graveyard of Alderaan visible through the viewport. Tenel Ka surveys the field from her command chair*

    Tenel Ka: On this day, we fight against a foe who is cunning and ruthless, who utterly lacks honor, hiding in cover created by unspeakable atrocity. They would see the Alliance shattered as Alderaan was shattered. We will not permit this."

    *Fade to black*

    *The words "Renewal III" sparkles into existance, golden and majestic*

    VO(Announcer): The Galactic Alliance faces a trial from the past. Will it rip the galaxy in two, or unite it?

    *As the music builds to a crescendo, red letters saying "Season of Pain" flash to life beneath the first phrase.*

    VO(Announcer): Coming this fall to TF.N: Beyond the Saga.
  8. Darth_Father-in-law Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Jul 17, 2005
    star 4
    *20th Century Fox and Lucasfilm logos appear and fade*

    *Battle of the Heroes starts to play*

    TEXT: They were best friends...

    *shot of young Anakin and Qui-gon watching the knighting of Obi-wan Kenobi*

    Anakin: What will happen to me now?

    Qui-gon: I?m going to train you, Anakin. You?ll be a Jedi, I promise.

    TEXT: They were like a family...

    *shot of Anakin and Obi-wan in the grave of Shmi Skywalker*

    Obi-wan: I?m so sorry for your loss, Anakin. I really am...

    TEXT: They shared a bond...

    *shots of Anakin, Obi-wan and Qui-gon fighting in the Clone Wars*

    TEXT: That bond will break...

    *shot of Palpatine and Obi-wan standing in Palpatine?s office.

    Palpatine: You are wise man, Obi-wan. You must do what you feel is right. But...don?t tell anything to your former master.

    Obi-wan: I won?t, Chancellor. Thank you for your help.

    *shot of Palpatine with mischievous smile on his face*

    TEXT: And everything what they underwent becomes meaningless...

    *shot of Qui-gon and Anakin sitting in the empty Jedi council room*

    Qui-gon: You can?t help him better than anyone else, though you are the Chosen One.

    Anakin: Why couldn?t I? Why doesn?t anyone believe in me?

    TEXT: One choice...

    *shot of Anakin and Padme standing in the soil of Mustafar*

    Padme: You are a good person, Anakin. I know you can do it.

    Anakin: You don?t know me, Padme. Even I don?t know. I?m sorry...I have to do what he wants.

    TEXT: Will lead to another...

    *shot of Anakin, talking to Obi-wan with tears in his eyes*

    Anakin: Why are you doing this to me?

    TEXT: One deed...

    *shot of Obi-wan and Mace Windu battling against each other*

    Mace: Obi-wan, you must understand! He is the one to blame!

    Obi-wan: LIAR!

    TEXT: Will make everyone pay...

    Padme: Qui-gon, what am I going to do?

    Qui-gon: Just hold your head high, Padme. Have faith for him.

    TEXT: Everything has a meaning...

    HIGHER THAN HOPE

    By Darth_Father-in-law

    Coming to your galaxy on May 2006


  9. Princess_Elisabeth Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Mar 2, 2006
    star 3
    Coming soon...

    She?s beautiful...

    Royal...

    A Princess...

    And forced to marry someone she doesn?t love...

    (v.o.) ?She will marry soon...?

    She?s beautiful...

    Royal...

    A Princess...

    And hates the life she lives...

    (v.o.) ?I don?t love him! In fact, I hate him!?

    When her feelings are going to speak...

    (v.o.) ?I love you?

    They won?t accept it...

    (v.o.) ?You will do exactly as we say?

    She stands by her own...

    Apart from this one person...

    (v.o.) ?I won?t let you down, no matter how think they about me?

    Her true love.

    The life of a Royal Princess. Coming soon.
  10. JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jun 3, 2002
    star 4
    for people reading this fic, be warned that there are spoilers at the end of the trailer regarding the ending of the fic.

    Read at your own risk.







    Will of the Force



    <Twentieth Century Fox Fanfare blasts in the background>


    <Fox Logo appears against a black screen>

    <Lucasfilm Logo appears>

    A Long time ago in a galaxy far, far away?

    <Luke?s Theme begins playing low in the background>




    V.O: Two men, brothers?

    The screen morphs into a shot of Anakin Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi walking down a hallway in the Jedi Temple together, laughing.

    V.O:?will be separated by death.

    Screen fades into a shot of Padme?s office interior.

    (Bail Organa): I?m afraid it?s bad news. There?s been a casualty.

    (Padme Skywalker): Which one?

    V.O:?Goodbyes will be said?

    <Luke?s Theme fades in the gentle tones of Funeral pyre for a Jedi>

    Fade to a shot of Yoda resting his hand on Obi-Wan?s chest.

    (Yoda): Sleep well, youngling.

    Black covers the screen before morphing into a scene of Padme leaning down and softly kissing Obi-Wan?s cheek.

    (Padme): Rest well, my friend.

    Cut to a scene of Anakin standing in a doorway looking back at Obi-Wan?s still body.

    (Anakin): It is in dying we awake to eternal life. I?m going to miss you.

    V.O:?and decisions will be made.

    <Funeral pyre for a Jedi gives way abruptly to Force Theme>

    The screen closes in on the Jedi Council chambers where Anakin is standing before the Council.

    (Anakin): I?ve decided to leave the Jedi Order.

    (Yoda): Too upset you are to make this decision.

    (Anakin): I failed in my most basic duty. It was my responsibility to be there as his friend. I wasn?t and because of that, he?s dead.

    (Yoda): The Chosen One, you are!

    Again, the screen fades to black before coming back to focus tightly on Anakin?s face.

    V.O:?Secrets will be revealed?

    <The Force Theme fades as Across the Stars builds>

    (Anakin): I?m married. Senator Amidala now carries my child.

    V.O:?as one man begins his manipulation.

    <Across the Stars shifts effortlessly into the Emperor?s Theme>

    Scene shifts to Palpatine?s office.

    (Palpatine): If you allow yourself to develop your powers to their true potential, you can learn the secret to manipulating life itself.

    (Anakin): It doesn?t matter. I can?t bring back my mother or Obi-Wan.

    (Palpatine): No, but you can keep from losing anyone else.

    V.O:?A friend will return?

    Cut to a shot of Anakin sitting alone in a grassy field.

    (Obi-Wan): Anakin.

    (Anakin): Master!. But how??

    (Obi-Wan): I?ve come to help you with your future.

    (Anakin): I?m not worthy of being a Jedi anymore. I failed you, Master.

    V.O:?a loved one will disappear?

    Screen rapidly shifts to the villa the Skywalker?s are staying in.

    (Palpatine): Good afternoon, Padme. I?m here to speak with Anakin if he?s available.

    (Padme): He?s not here right now. Would you like to come in and wait?

    (Palpatine): I?ve become aware of a plot to overthrow me as Chancellor. I need your help.

    (Padme): I?m sorry, Chancellor.

    Cut to a close-up shot of a sneering Palpatine.

    (Palpatine): No, but you will be.

    V.O:?a web of lies will be spun.

    Shot of the interior of the villa.

    (Palpatine): Oh Anakin, thank goodness you?re here.

    (Mace Windu): What happened here?

    (Palpatine): Several men clad in black broke down the door and grabbed Padme.

    V.O:?A battle will begin?

    (Palpatine): Anakin, I know I?m you?re best chance at finding Padme before she?s harmed.

    (Yoda): All lies you have told. Know where Senator Skywalker is you do.

    (Palpatine): Anakin...you...can?t...believe...It?s a mistake, Anakin. I don?t know where Padme is.

    (Mace): Anakin, search your feelings and you?ll know who?s telling the truth.

    Cut to Anakin meditating alone in a grassy field as visions begin assaulting his s
  11. NerdWOMAN Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Feb 5, 2005
    star 2

    Both Sides of Revenge


    [opening shot]
    A cloaked woman ignites a green lightsaber in the fog.
    [fade to black]

    A man tied to a chair, sweating and wounded speaks in a raspy voice.
    "You're a very wanted woman...a murderer and a thief."
    [fade to black]

    shot of an imperial General surrounded by bounty hunters.
    "You have explicit instructions, bring her to me....dead or alive."
    [fade to black]

    Once again the shot of the man tied to a chair, a beautiful woman holds her green lightsaber to his neck and he speaks once more...
    "If you kill me.... it won't stop him."

    [dissolves once more to black and remains there-sound over black]
    Woman's voice...
    "Perhaps once would call me an enforcer of justice....."


    Both Sides of Revenge
  12. aurrasingrules101 Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Apr 13, 2003
    star 4
    [Lucasfilm logo fades in and out]

    [Leia?s theme plays softly in the background]

    TEXT: From the director who brought you Dubious Engagement?

    [Image of a young girl running along a Coruscant walkway laughing, her father trying to catch her]

    TEXT: Comes the anticipated, breath-taking sequel?

    [A pregnant Jaina sits on the edge of her bed while Jag paces]

    JAINA: I can?t give him that, Jag. None of us can. You have to let him live.

    JAG(angrily): He doesn?t know how.

    JAINA: That?s why you have to let him learn. Take him home, Jag.

    TEXT: Where everything you thought was real?

    [switches to Jaina and Hanna in the hatchway of a freighter, dressed in winter clothes]

    [music switches to a dramatic, anxious thudding]

    JAINA: Do you remember what I taught you?

    HANNA: Yes.

    JAINA: Stay close to me. Things aren?t the same here as they once were.

    [changes to Jaina and Jag embracing in the docking bay of a Star Destroyer]

    JAINA: I missed you.

    JAG(smiling): I missed you, too. All three of you.

    [two soldiers approach, and pull Jag away, locking him in binders]

    JAINA(alarmed): What?s going on?

    SOLDIER: This man is under arrest for treason against the New Republic and Galactic Federation of Free Alliances.

    JAINA: This has to be a mistake!

    JAG: Are you sure you have the right man?

    SOLDIER: If this is General Jagged Fel I do.

    JAG(to Jaina): Don?t worry, it had to be a misunderstanding. I?ll be home by dinner.

    [scene changes to Jag sitting behind a glass wall, Jaina on the other side]

    JAINA: I can?t go on like this, Jag. I won?t.

    JAG: We have no choice.

    TEXT: Could be lost in a sea of lies.

    [scene changes to Jaina and Leia in a plush room]

    [music softens to a sinister murmur]

    JAINA: I can?t even leave here! I can?t help him because I?m stuck in this damned apartment!

    LEIA: These walls shouldn?t hold back a Jedi.

    JAINA: I stay for my children. Where would they go if I left Coruscant?

    LEIA: Give Hanna to me.

    TEXT: No destiny is certain.

    [changes to Jacen and Danni on a Coruscant rooftop]

    DANNI: What do you want me to do, Jacen? I can?t wait for you forever.

    JACEN: If you loved me you would wait until I was ready.

    DANNI: If you loved me you would let me go! Don?t hold me back, Jacen. If you don?t want me, let me move on.

    TEXT: And the most basic trusts

    [changes to Syal Antilles Fel holding a newborn, crying]

    [music builds, beating louder]

    SYAL: Will this child ever know peace?

    TEXT: Will be shattered forever

    [changes to Jaina running through the Coruscant night, holding a bundle in one arm and pulling Hanna along behind her. Jaina stops and hands her the bundle.]

    [dramatic musical crescendo]

    JAINA: Run, Hanna, don?t look back!

    HANNA(crying): Mommy, don?t make me go!

    [Jaina draws her lightsaber]

    JAINA: Don?t make me tell you again! Run!

    [screen cuts suddenly to all black. Opens slowly to see a Chak Fel and Cem Fel, walking through the aisles of the Chiss library]

    [music dies to single drum beat]

    CHAK: I remember.

    CEM: What do you remember?

    CHAK(haunted): I remember the breaking.

    [scene ends abruptly, and large gold type appears]

    LIES ABOUT LOVE
    Coming soon to a Beyond the Saga thread near you?
  13. mastermeg_0228 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jan 24, 2006
    star 4
    OH MY GOSH, Aurra!!!!!

    OH MY GOSH!!!!!:eek: :eek: :_| [face_worried] :_| :eek: :eek:

    I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    meg
  14. Kidan TFN EU Staff

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    Jul 20, 2003
    star 5
    The following is a trailor for what happens after the events of my fic Japor.



    Black screen

    (White text on black background, ?AotC ?Love Pledge and Arena Theme?? is playing) ?They were brought together in a time of pain and death.?

    <Fade in from black>
    <Ben kneeling in front of Jysella, holding her head in his hands, both of them sweating and dirty from fighting, she is vsiibly crying>
    <Fade out to black>

    (White text on black background) ?They are happy?

    <Fade in from black>
    <Luke, Mara and a two-year old little girl, watching the Skate as 17 yo Ben and 20 yo Jysella walk down the ramp, holding hands>
    <Fade out to black >

    (White text on black background) ?They are safe?

    <Fade in>
    <Ben and Jysella sitting in the common room of the Skate, Ben smiling at Jysella, as she is laughing>
    <Fade out to black >

    (White text on black background) ?For now.?

    <Duel of the Fates begins>

    <Flash scene to: Ben looking down at his saber, a look of worry and concern on his face>

    <Flash scene to: A flight of X-Wings, flying against a flight of Raptors>

    <Flash scene to: Adumari blastsword duel>

    <Flash scene to: The Pulsar Skate in the midst of a space battle dodging turbolaser fire.>

    <Flash scene to: A raptor 32 crash landing>

    <Flash scene to: Ben and Jysella back to back sabers ignited, deflecting blaster fire>

    <Flash scene to: A governmental building exploding>

    <Flash scene to: Ben and Jys in the Pulsar Skate?s cockpit, watching as the ground comes up at them, as they are in the middle of a crash landing. They reach across to each other and grasp hands>

    <Just before the Skate hits, the music stops, and the scene switches to black.>

    <?Padme?s funeral song? plays. Fade into a Scene of Adumar from space, there is an explosion on the surface visible from the viewer?s perspective. The cloud system pulses out from ground zero, with firestorms on the ground chasing the fleeing clouds. About a quarter of the largest continent is consumed in the explosions>

    <fade to black>

    <Gold text appears on the background:>Blastswords of Adumar


    Coming soon to the Beyond Board

    />/>
  15. JediMasterRev Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Dec 2, 2004
    star 4
    For my readers who have asked if there's going to be a sequel to The Naboo Chronicles. Thought I'd give you all a glimpse of things to come!

    A soft version of Luke?s theme is playing in the background.

    [Voiceover]: Destiny stops for no one.

    Anakin stands quietly by the shore of Varykino Lake watching the sun set, which is followed by Queen Amidala standing at a podium opposite Count Dooku, locked in a fierce debate as they point at one another. Ilianya Tro hesitates briefly before entering into the Jedi Temple. The shot switches abruptly to a teenaged Dahlia attacking a cloaked figure but is suddenly suspended in mid-air before she can strike.

    [Voiceover]: Choices are made

    Sabé and Obi-Wan exchange sad glances before he reluctantly pulls away and heads to his ship. The scene shifts to the Jedi Council?s chambers where Obi-Wan gives a nod of acceptance, followed by Siri walking along side a young Padawan in one of the Temple?s large corridors. Anakin and Ilianya are then seen standingin the middle of a dense forest with several beings, both human and alien surrounding them, wielding lightsabers or vibroswords.

    Sudden shift to Duel of the Fates

    [Voiceover]: Lines are drawn

    Dooku and Valkin watch on as a giant flash of light precedes an earth-shattering explosion, which is followed by Naboo Senator Mar proudly shaking hands with Palpatine in the Supreme Chancellor?s office. The scene shifts to the Jedi Council engaged in a fierce debate with Yoda sighing deeply as he sadly shakes his head. Meanwhile, Jango Fett rockets away just before a large detonation rocks a Senate residence.

    [Voiceover]: Heroes are again called to serve.

    With his lightsaber brandished, Obi-Wan deflects several blast bolts as he extends his hand to use the Force. The scene abruptly changes to Anakin piloting the Angel Queen through a series of explosions as several droid starfighters chase him through space. Finally, Ilianya is seen calling her lightsabers into her hands as Darth Tyranus attempts to strike her down.

    Music transitions into Across the Stars.

    [Voiceover]: But will it be love that saves the galaxy?

    Anakin and Padmé draw close to one another as their eyes close in anticipation. The scene shifts to Obi-Wan with his arms wrapped around Sabé as they lay together in a field near several waterfalls, which is followed by Shmi and Cliegg smiling at one another as they work on a moisture vaporator near their homestead. The final scene is of Anakin standing on a large mountain top, peering over a deep valley with the lady Force next to him with her hand on his shoulder.


    [Voiceover]: The Naboo Chronicles was only just the beginning.

    Flashback to a younger Anakin being presented his ship by Padmé, followed by him racing his pod on Malastare. The scene ends with the fight against the assassins? attack at Padmé?s coronation.

    [Voiceover]: Join us again as we witness the continuation of Anakin?s adventures, but this time he faces unrest both from the galaxy and from within.

    Whirling two sapphire hued lightsabers in his hands, Anakin fights through several attacking warriors within a narrow passageway, which is followed by him standing several feet behind Padmé who is staring out at Theed from her bedroom veranda. The last glimpse is of Anakin whirling his lightsaber from behind his head as he attacks three handmaidens wielding vibroswords.

    Music crescendos with the Star Wars theme finale.

    [Voiceover]: The future is uncertain as is the fate of the Chosen One.

    [Padmé Voiceover:] Anakin No!!

    FOR THE LOVE OF THE QUEEN?Coming soon to the Saga boards nearest you!
  16. jmsbndgrl Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Dec 31, 2004
    star 4
    Title: Always in Motion

    An accident will send a Jedi to a new world?

    Obi-Wan jumped into hyperspace with no problems, but two minutes into the jump, sirens started blaring within his ship. ?Blast, this is why I hate flying!? Obi-Wan exclaimed as he checked the ship?s readouts to determine the problem. Nothing appeared to be wrong with the ship, but when it gave a violent lurch, Obi-Wan knew he was in trouble.

    ?If I survive this, I am never racing Anakin again!? Obi-Wan stated as he called upon the Force to help him. However, his meditations were interrupted when the ship gave another violent lurch. He looked out his view port to see that he appeared to have escaped the wormhole and was heading towards a bright blue planet.

    Fear crept into Obi-Wan?s voice as he sent one more distress call, ?This is Obi-Wan Kenobi, my ship has escaped the wormhole and is now approaching an unknown planet. My ship is badly damaged and is not functional. It appears that I will crash! Please send assistance!? Obi-Wan finished with desperation.


    He will meet a woman?

    Aila rolled her eyes at the man, ?Last I checked, ships do not fly. Now who are you, and what is that pile of junk you have put in my yard?? She stated with irritation.

    ?Oh, sorry milady, I am Jedi Knight Obi-Wan Kenobi. Like I said my ship has crashed and?.?

    Obi-Wan was interrupted when Aila burst into laughter. Now she knew where she recognized the man and the ship. He looked almost exactly like Obi-Wan Kenobi from ?Star Wars Episode II: Attack of the Clones? and the smoldering wreckage behind him slightly resembled a Jedi Starfighter. ?Who put you up to this?

    ***

    ?This is the weirdest dream I have ever had.? Aila whispered in awe.

    ?A dream? Milady, I assure you this is not a dream.?

    Aila laughed, ?Definitely a weird dream. I hope I remember this when I wake up because this is hysterical.?

    ?Milady, why do you think you are dreaming??

    ?Hmmm?? Aila pretended to seriously contemplate Obi-Wan?s question before she sarcastically replied, ?Well maybe the fact that you don?t exist would be my first clue.?

    Obi-Wan had a confused look on his face as he stated, ?I don?t exist??

    ?That?s right.? Aila said with a smile as she got up from the sofa.


    An emotion will emerge?

    With this plan, Aila slowly opened the door a little wider and stepped inside. She was about to quickly throw the blanket over Obi-Wan, but instead, gasped at the sight on the bed. Obi-Wan had stripped off his Jedi tunics and was only sleeping in his trousers. His muscular chest, sculpted by years of Jedi training, was on display.

    Aila could not stop herself from staring at him. Her houseguest was definitely easy on the eyes. She watched the steady rise and fall of his chest as he continued to sleep, noting that there was a light spattering of hair across his upper chest. Aila just stood there silently holding the blanket she was planning on returning as she continued to stare at Obi-Wan.

    She probably would have stayed like that until he woke up, but he shifted slightly in his sleep and the movement caused Aila to break her gaze. Aila shook her head, embarrassed by her behavior. She was a Star Wars fan, but she was acting like a silly fan girl fawning over her favorite Jedi Knight.

    Aila knew she was being silly because she had just met Obi-Wan, so although he looked nice she had not developed an emotional attachment to him. Besides, being a Star Wars fan, Aila knew that Jedi were not allowed to love.

    ***

    Obi-Wan was grateful for Aila?s kind words, it helped keep him motivated to keep working. However, he also found that he was developing strange feelings towards the woman. He did not understand what these feelings were, but he was pretty sure that as a Jedi Knight he should not be having them. As a result, he tried to stay out of the house and away from her as much as possible.

    Obi-Wan felt that distance would help him get rid of these strange feelings and keeping busy with hi
  17. ZaraValinor Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    May 31, 2002
    star 4
    This is the teaser to a fic I'll be writing at the end of July.


    ?Somethings coming, Dad. Something big,? Ben told him solemnly.

    They stood together on the balcony of the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, watching as the sun dipped below the horizon. Below Luke could hear the burgeoning sound of nocturnal creatures awaking to the dark night.

    He looked over at his son, his finely formed features, dimmed by the failing light, only his eyes, a bright blue, stood out against the shadow. ?Have you sensed this??

    ?Seen it,? Ben answered shaking his head and shutting his eyes away beneath thin layers of flesh. ?A shadow, forming over the galaxy. It shrouds stars and planets, lights that should glow for millions of years, disappear.?

    Luke swallowed against he sudden dryness in his throat, then asked, ?Are you sure??

    ?I wanted to believe that it was just a dream, a strange nightmare. But its real, Dad. I see it happening during my waking hours.? Against his nature, Ben?s voice was tremulous and there was fear behind it. Luke could feel it radiate off his son.

    ?Ben what aren?t you telling me??

    Sucking in a stuttering breath, Ben said, ?Everything,? in such a forlorn voice that instantly clenched Luke?s heart.

    ?Why??

    ?To spare you pain.?

    They are born of the Force, they are its children. The Chosen Line.

    Ben walked through the fire, becoming engulfed in its hungry flames. But it didn?t deter him, he continued on, coming through the other side. The flames sputtered and died on him, leaving his clothes scorched but otherwise unharmed.

    They know the light.

    Luke stood before the assembled Jedi of the Order he?d rebuilt.

    They know the darkness.

    Anakin Skywalker reached out his hand and staved off breath from his wife, holding her in an unyielding grip.

    But now they will be the Force

    Ben was out cold on the medical table. Cighal?s webbed hands hovered inches above his head. He eyes closed she peered into the vastness of his mind and gasped at what she found there.

    ?What is it? What?s wrong with him?? Mara demanded.

    Cighal was speechless, her voice caught in her throat.



    Ben opened his eyes for the first time and found his power.


    ?It?s what I always feared,? Ben admitted. ?That there was this power that was too great for anyone to control, laying inside of me. That I would be used and abused for it.? He paused feeling a weight at the back of his throat. ?That I would use and abuse it.?

    Jacen laid a hand on his shoulder. ?I know what you mean.?

    ?No, you have no idea.?


    Coming soon to Beyond the Saga

    Corruptive Power



    ?There?s nothing that can stop me. Nothing but myself.?/>/>/>/>
  18. SilSolo Jedi Grand Master

    Member Since:
    Mar 5, 2004
    star 5
    Very interesting, Zara. I hope that the Chosen line will mean Solo as well as Skywalker since they're more than half the line.
  19. Darth_Intangable Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Jan 4, 2006
    star 3
    Fic: Dark Intentions

    Black Screen
    Fade to ~ Jaina, walking through a storm. ~ Fade out
    Close up ~ Jaina hands around Jag?s head, electricity running between them. ?Goodbye??

    Voice Over ~ ?Time Slows Down?
    Fade to ~ Ben Crying
    Flash to ~ Zekk, blood dripping down his face
    Pan to ~ Allana sleeping silently

    Gold Lettering ~ Choices are Made
    Weeping Zekk ~ ?I?ll do it! Just make the pain stop. Please.?
    Mara ~ ?I am going to get my son.?
    Ben ~ ?Make them go away??

    Gold Lettering ~ Family?s are Torn Apart
    Fade to ~ Ben and Mara stand in a courtyard
    Ben ~ ?No! You could never understand.?
    Mara ~ ?Ben, I want to, you?re not giving me the chance to.?
    Ben ~ ?Liar!?

    Fade to ~
    Tenal Ka screaming into a storm ~ ?No! Not my daughter? before collapsing on the ground.

    Fade to ~
    Luke running to his X-Wing

    Fade to ~
    Two dark figures wielding blue and green lightsabers, sabers clashing

    Voice Over ~ ?Darkness Approaches?
    Flash between?
    Jaina, leaning against a wall, smirking
    Jacen, eyes gold, staring at Allana
    Ben, lightsabor held in a loose guard
    Kyp, sitting alone in the council chamber

    Gold Lettering ~ And Comes Ever Closer
    Kyp, anger and regret twisting his face ~ ?I?ll kill you!?
    Jaina, smirking ~ ?Force, I?m good.?
    Jacen ~ ?there is no darkside.?

    Gold Lettering: Now playing at Beyond the Saga near you
    Blood red lettering: Dark Intentions

    Voiceover Jaina: ?Deep inside, they envy you, that?s why they try to hunt you down??

    Dark Intentions
  20. FanakinSolo Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    May 19, 2006
    star 1
    <scroll up, like in the Star Wars movies>
    Star Wars:
    Dark Plague I:
    Strike of Terror

    In the far reaches of the Galaxy, an alien race readies to attack the innocent world of Tatooine. But, alas, Jedi reconnassiance reveals it not to be a simple smuggler assault, but an onslaught of aliens...

    <pan down to the blue world Zav, with a tan-and-green strip going down the middle>
    <cut to a beat-up B-wing>
    KYP: Okay, Zalrin, are you sure? You never liked jumping from high places, even with the Force.
    ZALRIN: I'm... okay w-with this, I think-k.
    KYP: No, no, really.
    ZALRIN: I t-told you, I'm-m fi-ine!
    KYP: Well, then, we'll just speed up a tiny bit...
    ZALRIN: Ahhh! No! No more motion sickness! Gaahhhh!
    <fade out to underwater>
    KYP: <voice muffled> Are you alright?
    ZALRIN: <voice muffled> Yeah.
    <pan down to jagged rock, zoom in underneath to an amphibious shuttle>
    <fade to sea-green screen>
    Men will go diving
    <fade to space, where a shuttle is flying>
    KYP: Wow. I never knew shuttles had you cramped so much.
    ZALRIN: At least they put in comfy seats.
    KYP: At least they did.
    <cut to space, where there is a minor skirmish>
    KYP: A-wing slice!
    <CHLEMILYN and ZALRIN, both in A-wings, find a small dogfight between two Freelancers and five alien ships and come around sideways, then level off and fire a barrage>
    ZALRIN: Got 'em!
    CHLEMILYN: Woohoo!
    FREELANCER ONE: I'll join you guys, if you don't mind.
    FREELANCER TWO: And I'll go join the other half of your squad.
    An alien race will invade the Galaxy
    FRAH'JO: And take Luia'fa with you too!
    KREK'KL: <walks off>
    FRAH'JO: Now, I want to see the Light Swirl. I like the effect.
    <GUARDS lumber off, replaced by BEEJOH DANCERS>
    BEEJOH DANCERS: Ooh ooh tekki tekki greeeeee!
    <FRAH'JO smiles>
    <fade to black>
    And Tatooine will fall
    <cut to big, silver screen>
    STRIKE OF TERROR
    V.O.: <fast> Coming this today!

    Strike of Terror
  21. FanakinSolo Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    May 19, 2006
    star 1
    <scrolling up, like in the movies>
    Star Wars
    Dark Plague II
    No Peace
    The Beejoh race seeks to expand from the captured world of Tatooine, making a deal with the Hutts. Jedi are sent to stop it, but it may not be enough...


    <pan down to Tatooine>
    GRTA'DE: No. This world is not enough.
    HERG'LS: Yes. I agree. We should make a deal with the local Nupps.
    GRTA'DE: Nupps?
    HERG'LS: Come, I will show you.
    <fade to black>
    <fade to GRTA'DE and HERG'LS in FIJIL THE HUTT's palace>
    HERG'LS: Fijil?
    FIJIL: <booming voice> Who is it? Gertag, open the gate!
    GERTAG: Yes, Master Fijil.
    <gate slides into the floor>
    <GRTA'DE and HERG'LS enter the palace>
    FIJIL: You! Get out of my palace!
    GRTA'DE: <stares at FIJIL, black eyes turn red and shine>
    FIJIL: <droswy> Would you like to make a deal?
    <GERTAG raises an eyebrow>
    GRTA'DE: Yes... the Beejoh look to expand into the local system.
    The Hutts will make a deal
    <BALRIK looks over a mission report from two GFFAI officers>
    BALRIK: I don't believe it.
    KYP: Well, the Hutts are greedy and want more money.
    BALRIK: But do they know what they're dealing with?
    ZALRIN: I don't think so, unless their brains grew from the size of a grain of sand to the size of a womp rat.
    <BALRIK and KYP laugh>
    ZALRIN: What? Let me reread that report.
    <ZALRIN reads report>
    <ZALRIN rubs eyes>
    ZALRIN: I think I need a cup of caf.
    <ZALRIN walks off>
    <BALRIK and KYP laugh>
    that could mean
    KYP: Four, watch your tail!
    ZALRIN: I copy, One.
    CHLEM: Hold on, Four, I'm coming in to shoot him off.
    <CHLEM fires fifteen rapid lasers and two rockets at an alien fighter on ZALRIN's tail>
    KYP: Ooh, pretty explosion.
    TARA: There's more to it than sparkles, Kyp.
    KEEHO: Yeah, One.
    ZALRIN: Hey, Six is back online!
    FARGAI: I think Ghent switched astromech droids again. I wish he would stop painting Zero green...
    KEEHO: Yeah. Arnie should get his old paint back. But I kind of like this. You couldn't ask for a better astro droid.
    BEN: Except for Artoo.
    KYP: Except for Artoo.
    the end of the Galaxy
    <cut to big, silver screen>
    NO PEACE
    V.O.: <fast> Coming this summer.
  22. FanakinSolo Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    May 19, 2006
    star 1
    <scroll up, like in the star wars movies>
    <opening theme music plays>
    STAR WARS
    ROGUES

    The barren but lively world of Akvan seems to be a useless mound of rock. Four Jedi band together to stop the missile that threatens it. They stop it, but are nearly banished from the Galactic Alliance. The Jedi run away to Akvan, where one debates with his dark side. As the final battle approaches, it turns into a world of confusion.

    <opening theme music fades out>

    <pan down to Coruscant>
    <rebel alliance theme music starts>
    <cut to scene of astro-missile sitting on a launching pad, with four Jedi hiding behind a building>
    CHLEMILYN: Tell me again: how are we going to do this?
    KYP CHARGER: I'm going to use the Force to do a little tweak in the droid. It'll swerve around, and probably go down into the depths and explode there.
    CHLEM: Maybe it'll go wrong.
    SCIENTIST 1: Check...
    <KYP reaches out with the Force and disconnects a link-up wire in the droid>
    SCIENTIST 1: Two...
    <KYP disconnects another wire>
    SCIENTIST 1: Two...
    <KYP disconnects another>
    SCIENTIST 1: Launch!
    <The droid explodes, killing SCIENTIST 1, SCIENTIST 2, and making a crater in the building>
    GAVIN CHARGER: Okay, that went wrong.
    AILYN CHARGER: We should probably get out of here.
    <The four Jedi run away. The building nearly crushes them>
    <rebel theme stops>
    <cut to scene of the Chargers sneaking into a camp>
    <next 3 scenes flash past fast (that rhymed!)>
    <duel of the fates music starts>
    <cut to a scene of KYP meditating, his face pinched, a lightsaber scar appearing on his shoulder>
    <cut to a scene of GAVIN wielding a lightsaber and battling XAKK LEMORSO, who is wielding a vibroblade>
    <cut to a scene of black and white clashing and mixing to make gray>
    <duel of the fates stops>
    V.O.: Coming July 1st.
  23. Jennifer_Lyn Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jun 8, 2005
    star 4
    A full-on filmy version of the trailer is here.

    [The Skywalker theme plays]

    A long, long time ago
    in that galaxy so very far away...



    [Zoe Keating's "Legion (War)" plays]

    [text fades in and out across the black screen]

    The last Sith Wars ended over a century ago.
    The galaxy fights hard to regain its former glory.
    But its obstacles are many, its resources few.

    The great mines have dried up.
    The Holonet is in ruins.
    The Senate struggles to govern.
    The Jedi are not trusted.

    In this Dark Age, a Sith cult has risen.
    They are promised power.
    They are promised control.
    They are promised the secrets of the Force.

    All they must do,
    is raise the dead.


    Who shall rescue the fragile Republic when even the Jedi Council
    refuses to hear the truth?

    A company of beings answers the call.
    Brought together by Fate.
    Destined to reach beyond themselves.
    And change the course of the future forever.

    A strange old woman

    [picture of Judi Dench as Grannie Hella]
    with secrets to share:
    "Ah and the Dark One, aye. That'll be the snag there."

    The Scion of a prophecy,

    [picture of Kate Beckinsale as Kateva Stardrifter]
    who must discover her potential:
    "The Jedi? But they are a myth, a fairy tale you tell younglings."

    A Jedi Master

    [picture of David Wenham as Elys Ki Dul]
    who's heart must learn to rule his head:
    "I am not powerful. I am not the best. I am no hero."

    And one very special Padawan,
    who challenges all she meets
    to judge her by her heart
    and not her body:

    [dog barking]

    From the writer who brought you 'When the Hunter Becomes the Hunted'
    Beta'd by the author who brought you Badour

    Comes a story that will let you see the Saga,
    through the eyes of the past.


    "A Stirring in the Bones"

    Coming August 1st to the Before the Saga boards.
  24. Katana_Geldar Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Mar 3, 2003
    star 8
    Emperor?s theme plays very softly

    Shot of the Jedi Temple at night

    Shot of a long corridor with a Jedi walking down it.

    Shot of a cell door opening revealing Count Dooku on the other side.

    Dooku looked up

    Dooku: Is it time.

    Shot of Renust Nju smiling.

    Nju: Yes, it is.

    Fade to black

    Text: In the final days of the Clone Wars?

    Music: Duel of the Fates

    Shot of Anakin and Obi-Wan?s starfighters over Coruscant battle

    Fade to shot of clones engaging Separatist droids on Utapau.

    Text:?the Jedi face destruction from within.

    Quick shot of Nju with his two lightsabers, he turns quickly

    Jump to shot of Palpatine and Anakin together.

    Mace (voice over): Now we shall see?

    Fade to shot of Mace in a dark corridor with his purple lightsaber.

    Mace (voice over): ?now the waters begin to clear.

    Fade to black

    Text: Yet when the Sith reveal themselves?

    Shot of Anakin with his lightsaber pointed at Palpatine.

    Anakin stares at Palpatine incredulously

    Anakin: It?s been you all along, hasn?t it?

    Fade to black

    Text:?who will be among the survivors?

    Quick succession of shots:

    Padmé making a stabbing motion with her lightsaber

    Nju doing a back flip with his lightsabers outstretched in each hand

    Dooku with a blue and red lightsaber at his neck

    Mace crossing his purple lightsaber with a red one.

    Sidious laughing and shooting blue lightning.

    Music: Anakin?s dream

    Fade to black, then fade to shot of Anakin running.

    Palpatine: Your vision may show the future, Anakin?

    Shot of Anakin looking at Padmé with a pained expression

    Palpatine:? or you could choose to change it.

    Shot of Anakin and Padmé in the garden together.

    Quick flash of Padmé being fried by Force-lightning

    Anakin: What do you mean?

    Shot of Palpatine?s face.

    Palpatine: I think that you already know the answer to that.

    Revenge of the Sith AU ? The awaited conclusion to the Jedi Padmé trilogy!

    Now playing in Saga
  25. Anakins_Kiss Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jan 26, 2006
    star 3
    Short Version: The Fantastic Journey (crossover with Butterfly effect)

    Starring- Darth Vader/Anakin Skywalker, Padme Amidala Skywalker, Obi wan Kenobi, Darth Sidious and Govenor Tarkin and Introducing Luke and Leia Skywalker.

    Summary- Darth Vader discovers the lost farfalla stone, a mythical stone said to bestow the wielder the ability to go back in time in short bursts to alter a small piece of the past. With each future altering trip, Vader discovers that his dream of ruling the galaxy with his wife by his side comes at a cost and learns alittle more about the lie that started his fall to the darkside and the true nature of those he turned his back on.

    Disclaimer- This story is heartwrenching at times and may be intense and a bit disturbing.



    (Black screen)

    Padme's voice: "Anakin, I'm just so afraid. Everything seems to be crashing down around us."

    Anakin's voice: "Have faith, my love. Everything will soon be set right..... things will be different, I promise."

    [A red jewel illuminates the darkness and the black gloved hand holding it. The light hits the helmet of Darth Vader as he watches it shine. The cave shakes violently and a tear is made in reality. The tremor is audible. Vader is sucked through and suddenly everything goes silent.]

    The roaring and exploding lava is heard. The screen fades in and you see Mustafar. Obi wan and Anakin battling again.

    Anakin's voice: "You will survive this time, Padme. You will be mine. You will love me, we raise our family and I will rule the galaxy with you by my side."

    [unsuited Vader is in the rain on bended knee suffering under a tremendous headache before an angelic statue of Padme.]

    Anakin's voice: "Tell me what's happened to her?"

    [Padme's eyes are wide open, red and swollen from tears. Pieces of her hair is missing. Both wrists are bandaged from previous suicide attempts.]
    Padme angry screams: "Their blood is on your hands!!! You ruin everything just by breathing!!! I hate you!!!!"
    [Padme is being restrained by three medical officers.]

    [Obi wan speaks to Anakin during an attack] "You are my brother. You have made me proud. You have never let me down."

    [Padme and Anakin on piloting a ship trying to escape star destroyers]
    Anakin's voice: "Padme, I found this jewel. With it I can go back in time and change things make things as I want them to be. But everytime I use it something goes wrong. I am not crazy. I wanted to save you!!!"

    [Padme takes his hand and places another on his cheek]
    Padme voice's: Then save all of us.

    (screen goes black)

    The Fantastic Journey

    A crossover with 'The butterfly effect'.

    In 'The saga' forum near you

    Take the journey today!

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