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  1. Sticks

    Sticks Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jan 27, 2001
    Wahoo! Finally, a Veggietales crossover! *does the happy dance*

    Okay, I'm not really that excited...
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    Fic: Anthology
    Alderaan's Death, volume two

    {A starscape is accompanied by the familiar soundtrack, at a more subdued point. Slowly, we PAN DOWN to reveal a brilliant blue-green, cloud-swathed planet spinning slowly. The music builds, becomes louder, crescendos, and we hear...}

    (TARKIN)(V.O.) You may fire when ready.

    {FLASH TO: Flyover of a sweeping plain, with mountain s in the distance.}

    (MR. VOICE) In a galaxy of war, they remained peaceful.

    {FLASH TO: A group of children. They scatter as a game of tag begins.}

    (MV) Their quest for freedom led them to neutrality.

    {FLASH TO: Two young humans, well-dressed. They walk arm-in-arm out of a small house.}

    (MV) But in one day...

    {FLASH TO: Three people on a low hilltop. One, a femal Twi'lek, turns toward the horizon.}

    (TWI'LEK) Look.

    {CUT TO: Space. The Death Star enters our field of view.}

    (MV) All that was taken from them.

    {Montage: Thrantas wheeling in the air as a shaft of light hits the ground beyond them; black-gloved hands manipulating levers in the Death Star control room; a young girl running toward a tree; the points around the emitter bowl on the Death Star lighting up; Bail Organa walking up a low rise in the landscape; technician's hand moving to hover over one lit button; the two young humans from before as their lips meet in a kiss; the lines around the emitter meet and converge into one. FLASH TO: LEIA ORGANA, in the famous scene from ANH, as she watches it all.}

    (LEIA) No...

    {FLASH TO: The beam of light hits, and Alderaan detonates. As it does, we FLASH TO: Title screen.}

    (MV) Alderaan's Death, volume two. See the untold stories. Now playing.

    {Fade out.}
     
  2. theEwan-Pixey

    theEwan-Pixey Jedi Youngling

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    Jul 12, 2001
  3. SithQueen

    SithQueen Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 25, 2001
    Fic: Free Bunny

    *****

    (MV): Two children were hidden to fight the Darkness.

    ::Flash of PADMÉ AMIDALA carrying a squirming bundle to BAIL and MYA ORGANA. Flash of OBI_WAN KENOBI placing another bundle into the arms of BERU LARS, OWEN LARS glancing over the boy before returning his scowling gaze to Obi-Wan::

    (MV): The Guardians of Peace saw them as their last hope.

    ::Images of a group of Jedi, including ADI GALLIA and MACE WINDU, trying to fight off a platoon of stormtroopers and DARTH VADER, giving time for Padmé and Obi-Wan to escape::

    (MV): Many died so that they could be hidden.

    ::Flashes of several Jedi getting cut down, along with Adi Gallia and Mace Windu. Screen goes black with a SLAM::

    (MV): They failed.

    ::Image of a two-year-old LEIA ORGANA coming through thick bushes. She looks up into the mask of Darth Vader, totally unafraid. Image of LUKE SKYWALKER staring up in fear at the sight of EMPEROR PALPATINE::

    (MV): Both raised in the Darkness. One raised to be loyal only to the Emperor, the other raised to think, to make her own choices.

    ::Flashes of Luke kneeling before the Emperor; Leia standing in the shadows of the Executor, watching him bark orders at the terrified crew::

    (MV): Now, Darth Vader and Leia NABERRIE plan to take down the Emperor. But their ultimate goal, revenge on Palpatine for destroying their lives, is obstructed by two people.

    ::Image of a emotionless Luke Skywalker, now DARTH BANE, and MARA JADE.

    (MV): Starring David Prowse, James Earl Jones...

    ::Image of Darth Vader watching Leia go through a diffucult obstical course::

    (MV): Carrie Fisher...

    ::Image of Leia in a black court dress, a smug smirk on her face::

    (MV): Mark Hamill...

    ::Image of Luke slashing at a remote droid violently::

    (MV): Melissa Gilbert...

    ::Image of Mara sculking about in the shadows::

    (MV): and Ian McDiarmid as Emperor Palpatine.

    ::Image of Palpatine sitting on his throne, watching Luke and Mara practice dueling::

    (MV): The question is not of who is good or evil...

    ::Image of Vader and Leia watching Luke::

    (MV): But who is the lesser of two evils?

    ::Screen goes black. White letters flash across the screen::

    STAR WARS
    Conflicts of Family

    *****
     
  4. Clarus

    Clarus Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sep 18, 2000
    For a fic that has not been written yet. :)



    How Deep the Night

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    Qui-Gon's voice: I am a Jedi Master. The Force is my guide. The Force led me to the Chosen One.

    (image of Qui-Gon standing in the desert with young Anakin Skywalker at his side.)

    Qui-Gon: The Force revealed a great darkness about him, and revealed the only way to stop that darkness.

    (Anakin, looking up at Qui-Gon with very, very large eyes)

    Qui-Gon: This time

    (Green lightsaber ignites before Anakin's face, casting it in green light. The scene dissolves into darkness as Qui-Gon continues to speak)

    Qui-Gon (continued): the Force was wrong.

    (Cut to the sound of a space battle, the hum of lightsabers, and assorted nasty images: Jedi being cut down by Sith, the Temple burning, Queen Amidala fighting desperately. Images stop suddenly, and we see sand blowing over a desert landscape, twin suns setting in the distance. Music: Twin Suns them from A New Hope.)

    Qui-Gon: And I, Qui-Gon Jinn, am responsible for the death of the galaxy's only hope.

    (fade to black. Black ripples to reveal white text.)

    How Deep the Night

    (fades, replaced by)

    Coming Soon
    (fade to black
     
  5. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 6, 2001
    Hey I am think about a little one right now to post then I will post the real trailer for a fic I am thinking about. would anyone be interested?
     
  6. AngelQueen

    AngelQueen Jedi Master star 4

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    Mar 1, 2001
    Sure!

    AQ
     
  7. jedi-thespian

    jedi-thespian Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Mar 9, 2001
    I'll be back to read it! ;)
     
  8. Rogue1-and-a-half

    Rogue1-and-a-half Manager Emeritus who is writing his masterpiece star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Nov 2, 2000
    Hey, that humour bunny actually got picked up. I'm shocked. :D

    Very nice ones for How Deep the Night and Alderaan's Death.
     
  9. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 6, 2001
    Okay I will post the real trailer when I am finished with it.
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    "This used to be my playground. This used to be my childhood dream."

    VO: On a planet that is run by slavers.

    SF: A auction.

    Auctioner: How much can I get for this healthy man here?

    SF: Obi-Wan in the crowd, off to the side.

    Bidder: What's his name?

    Auctioner: His given name is Qui-Gon. But you can call him whatever you want.

    Bidder: I'll take him.

    SF: Obi-Wan standing infront of a holo.

    O: Masters, my master has been captured by slavers.

    Yoda: Wait, you must. Sending a team, we are.

    SF: Obi-Wan talking into a comlink with Bant.

    O: I can't wait for the team to get here. I'm going in.

    B: and get caught in the mean time.

    VO: One boy must save his Master, by going in and getting out without getting captured also.

    SF: Obi-Wan snecking through halls.

    VO/O: Now, I wish I had waited for that team.

    "Don't hold on to the past. Well, that's too much to ask."
    _____________________________________________
    when I start posting I will need a beta. Anyone interested?

     
  10. jedi-thespian

    jedi-thespian Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Mar 9, 2001
    Hmmm, interesting...
     
  11. Ty-gon Jinn

    Ty-gon Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 12, 2000
    I don't feel confident enough to write a humor-AU/crossover type fic, but I had fun coming up with "Grumpy Old Jedi," so I tried to come up with another...

    Fic: Plot Bunny, Humor-AU/Crossover

    Open with slow-mo shots of JA-era characters, Obi-wan, Qui-gon, Bant, etc.

    (Mr. Voice/VO): "We've seen different characters travel back and forth through Star Wars era fiction to our own era..."

    Slow-mo shots of various characters that have been involved with crossover fics.

    (Mr. Voice/VO): "But what happens when dozens of characters get thrown together..."

    Flash text: "Coming soon, the crossover to end all crossovers..."

    Flash text: "When dozens of classic TV shows come crashing together- and are dumped right into Star Wars..."

    Shot to column of pink smoke next to Qui-gon and Obi-wan. A girl in a pink bikini appears.

    JEANNIE (enthusiastically): "Good morning, Master!"

    OBI-WAN: "I thought I was your padawan."

    JEANNIE: "Oh, but he is not my JEDI master..."

    Cut to shot of Tatooine, in a deserted spot where an oasis has sprung up, leaving a small forest and lagoon. Four men and three women are building huts. One drops a heavy stick on his foot.

    GILLIGAN (running around, screaming): "Skipper! Skipper!"

    When Gilligan runs into the skipper, they both fall down and run when they see Banthas coming.

    Cut to shot of Finis Valorum addressing the Jedi Council.

    (Sound of harp playing a quick note) Endora from "Bewitched" appears.

    ENDORA: "I need to speak with Yoda, Derwood."

    WINDU: "The name is Mace, you old..."

    Endora waves her hand, and Windu is forced to shut up.

    Text appears: "And just when you think you've seen it all..."

    Text appears: "IT GETS WORSE..."

    Cut to shot of Obi-wan talking to Qui-gon.

    OBI-WAN: "Bruck's returned, he's gone mad."

    QUI-GON: "That can't be good."

    Text appears: "And even that's not the worst of it..."

    ("Come on, Get Happy" plays). Fade to shot of the Partridge Family bus in Coruscant air traffic.

    (Mr. Voice/VO): "Coming as soon as someone wants to write it..."

    VO: "Barbara Eden and Larry Hagman..."

    VO: "Elizabeth Montgumery, Dick York, and Agnes Moorehead..."

    VO: "Bob Denver, Dawn Wells, Tina Louise, Russell Johnson, Jim Backus, Natalie Schafer, and Alan Hale, Jr..."

    VO: "Eddie Albert, Eva Gabor, Merideth MacRae, Bea Benaderet, Edgar Buchanan, Linda Kaye Henning, Lori Saunders, and Tom Lester..."

    VO: "As well as the complete casts of The Brady Bunch, The Partridge Family, The Beverly Hillbillies, and M*A*S*H..."

    Text appears: "STAR WARS MEETS TV LAND: THE ULTIMATE CROSSOVER"

    Text appears: "Run and hide before someone decides to actually write this."
     
  12. jedi-thespian

    jedi-thespian Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Mar 9, 2001
    Funny trailer! It'd be even funnier if someone actually did that!
     
  13. SiriGallia

    SiriGallia Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 28, 2001
    Here is a trailer I did for Jedi_Arwen beautiful story The Letters. It's a wonderful story and I really liked it.

    _____________________________________________
    The Letters, by Jedi Arwen

    {{{Music starts slowly}}}

    Scene shows Luke rifalling through a trunk, he pulls out a stack of old papers
    Close up on the top paper

    Tinúviel la Rivienn.
    Tinúviel Jinn.
    Tinúviel la Rivienn Jinn.
    Jedi Tinúviel Jinn.
    Qui-Gon and Tinúviel Jinn.
    Qui-Gon + Tinúviel.


    (VO) A girl (VO)

    (Tinúviel's Voice)

    My dearest Qui-Gon,

    I feel strange writing a letter like this. Maybe because I have never fallen in love before. But now- I am very much in love, now.

    (VO) A boy (VO)

    (Qui-Gon's Voice)

    Dear Tinúviel,
    Do you love me? Because I love you

    (VO) And their love (VO)

    Scene of Qui-Gon holding Tinúviel's hand

    (Qui-Gon's voice)

    Tinúviel, I love you more than anything in the universe

    (VO) That couldn't be broken (VO)

    Scenes flash

    Qui-Gon writing in a dark room
    Tinúviel crying, a letter in her hand
    Qui-Gon hugging Tinúviel

    (Qui-Gon's voice)

    I would never try to make you to cry. Forgive me, Tinúviel.

    Tinúviel writing at a desk
    Qui-Gon holding Tinúviel

    (Tinúviel's voice)

    I love you more than anything, Qui-Gon.

    (VO) Liam Neeson (VO)

    Qui-Gon brushing hair out of Tinúviel's face

    (VO) and Catherine Zeta Jones (VO)

    Tinúviel running into Qui-Gon's arms

    (VO) The Letters (VO)

    (Qui-Gon's voice)

    I will keep living for you and loving you with all of my heart.

    Black

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    ¸..· ´¨¨)) -:¦:-
    ¸.·´ .·´¨¨))
    ((¸¸.·´ ..·´ -:¦:-SiriGallia
    -:¦:- ((¸¸.·´*
     
  14. Jedi_Arwen

    Jedi_Arwen Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Feb 28, 2001
    Thanks, Siri! That's a wonderful trailer!! :) BTW, here's the link to The Letters.
     
  15. Gandalf the Grey

    Gandalf the Grey Jedi Knight star 6

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    May 14, 2000
    Coming Octobre 29th

    I, Sith.
    By Daishar Palpatine, as recorded by Gandolf the Grey.

    At last, the long-lost origins of the galaxies greatest leader, as told in his own words. His true story is finally revealed, unblemished by the lies of the evil Jedi. This untold story shows the rise of Palpatine from a homeless and parentless refugee, to a student at one of the most prestigious universities on Coruscant, to the Dark Lord of the Sith.

    Featuring: Darth Hades, Palpatines long lost teacher in the ways of the Sith; Sarya, the Jedi Knight who was both Palpatines best friend and worst enemy; and of course, Daishar Palpatine himself.


    I stand in the pod, waiting for my moment. I am in the galactic senate, in the seat for the Naboo sector, waiting to be sworn in. The honorable representative from Alderaan is sworn in as I watch, cheers rising up around me. I am silent, clapping for him but not really caring. I have worked all my life to reach this point, to be a Senator. From here, the seat of the Supreme Chancellor is within sight, almost close enough for me to reach out and touch it. From here, my path to rule the Republic is clear.

    Though it is not without pitfalls.

    Almost unwillingly, my eyes are drawn away from the Alderaan pod as it retreats to the chamber wall, drawn towards a pod that floats towards the next senator to be sworn in. It is a pod that is carrying Jed Knights.

    Old anger and pain twists my stomach, along with a hint of fear. My skills are still virtually untested. Though I know from hard experience that the Dark Side is stronger, I still know the value of patience. The need for revenge burns strong, but it is a slow fire. I have waited long years already for my vengeance, and I can wait for years yet, biding my time. The Jedi are weak, weaker than they?ve been at any other time in the last four thousand years, but the time isn?t yet ripe.

    I let my emotions wash over me, the anger sending waves of dark power through me, the fear adding an irresistible spice to the taste of my strength. One of the Jedi lifts his heads and scans the room, and I know that he can almost sense the power I wield, like the faintest whiff of sulfur in these cloyingly perfumed halls. But he shakes his head, and turns back to the Senator being sworn in. My disguise is perfect, and he cannot detect me.

    I allow myself to smile as the pod carrying the Jedi floats closer, and I consider the dark and bloodstained path that led me to this point. A shadow of regret touches me, but I shrug it off. I am Daishar Palpatine, the Lord of the Sith. My time is coming. The Jedi will pay.
     
  16. Darth_Fruitcake

    Darth_Fruitcake Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 18, 2001
    LOL on that TV Land crossover! I'll be sure to hide when THAT comes... Try adding the Brady Bunch! OH THE HORROR!!!!
    *******************************
    Fic: Coming soon (tonight, actually, if my parents don't kick me off)
    Title: Gotta scroll down and read this to find out... ;)


    Mara, VO: I never thought getting married would be so difficult...

    (Scene of a young man, with blonde hair and green eyes, shivering as he lies on the ground)

    M, VO: But then again, what did I know? The machine... All he did was kill. Given life to take life. I'd compare his ruthlessness to Boba Fett's.

    (Scene of a tall, powerfully built man aiming a blaster at point-black range at Mara's head)

    M, VO: I'm just lucky I survived at all....

    VO: Starring:

    Arnold Schwarzenegger

    (scene of man adjusting his black leather jacket)

    Mark Hamill

    (Luke staring in shock at Ben's face)

    Kate Winslet

    (Mara firing her blaster)

    And introducing Michael Hansen as Ben Skywalker

    (Ben walking into a mass of purple lightning)

    VO: And special cameos by the Predator, Sarah Connor, and Kyle Reese....

    Metallic letters on gray backround:

    TARGETED: A SW/TERMINATOR CROSSOVER

    NOW PLAYING

    (black screen)
     
  17. Lisse

    Lisse Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jan 6, 2001
    Here's mine. If anyone can do better, take pity on me and help me out. :)

    Fic: The Circle (AU, future fic, WIP). A three-part fic covering Ep. VII-IX in a galaxy that almost was.

    ~~

    (Fade in on a small Tatooine settlement on the outskirts of the Dune Sea. It is a clear night and two youths ? a boy with dark red hair and a pretty, blond girl ? are sitting on the flat roof of a squat, square building, staring up at the stars. The boy is Ben Darklighter and the girl is his best friend Shay.)

    Shay: Don?t you want to see what?s out there, Ben?

    (Fade to a close-up on Ben looking up at the sky.)

    V.O. Shay: Don?t you want anything?

    (Fade to the spare interior of the small dwelling. Ben is sitting at a bland table with his uncle Gavin Darklighter and his furious cousin Sasha.)

    Sasha: The Empire?s the future, and I?m not going to be forgotten just because you can?t accept that!

    (Fade in on the same interior. Ben is sitting with Sasha, Gavin, and his aunt Olivea)

    Ben: The Empire?s all there is and it?s all there will be.

    (Fade to black)

    (Cue Twin Suns theme from ANH)

    (Fade in text)

    In A Galaxy Without Justice...

    (Fade in on six-year-old Princess Denilee Ismaren Rage crying silently as a jeering crowd throws stones at a man carrying a Rebel banner)

    (Fade to black)

    (Fade in text)

    In A Future Without Hope...

    (Fade in on the Sith lord Darth Rage kneeling before Emperor Palpatine)

    (Fade to black)

    (Fade in text)

    The Battle For Freedom...

    (Fade in on the smoking ruins of a settlement. Ben looks at a grim-faced Jessa Calrissian)

    (Fade to black)

    (Fade in text)

    Is About To Begin

    (Cue battle music, gradually rising to a crescendo)

    (Cut to hundreds of stormtroopers advancing on a ragtag Nubian army)

    (Cut to Anakin Solo leaping the gap between two rooftops on Imperial Center)

    (Cut to Prince Mikel Ismaren Rage approaching the Emperor's throne in the Imperial Court)

    (Cut to Jessa levelling a blaster at her father Lando)

    (Cut to Rowan Archimedes standing on the badly damaged bridge of a warship)

    (Cut to Denilee in a shock collar, advancing on a slaver like an avenging angel)

    (Cut to Han Solo and the regal Alis Depai clasping hands)

    (Cut to Lucéa Naberrie lifting a lightsaber from the ground and igniting it)

    (Cut to Hal Horn standing in the middle of a twisting, nightmarish dreamscape)

    (Cut to Melody re Riall holding twin blasters at ready as Imperial Royal Guards close in on her)

    (Cut to Ben and Jessa in the settlement)

    (Pause music)

    Ben: I want to come with you.

    (Resume music)

    (Fade to black)

    (Fade in text)

    The Circle

    (Fade in text)

    Showing In A Forum Near You

    (Fade to black)
     
  18. red rose knight

    red rose knight Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Sep 3, 2001
    Here?s just a simple little trailer. Hopefully it makes sense.
    _______________

    FADE IN:

    A floating, ethereal vision of the Jedi Temple corridors. It floated and twisted around corners following an unknown path. The temple is lively filled with Jedi who do not appear to notice.

    OBI-WAN KENOBI (Voice Over): Don?t fight it, Ani. Let the Force guide your actions.

    Voices off screen echoed of conversations. Nothing specific can be made out.

    OBI-WAN (Voice Over): Give into the will of the Force.

    Forming in the corridor is a twisting, shimmering thread of golden light.

    OBI-WAN (Voice Over): Don?t fight it. Allow the Force to move through you. Guide you. Only when you are at peace will you understand.

    Fade to black.

    Panning back, the black reveals an extreme close up of an eye.

    ANAKIN SKYWALKER (Voice Over): Yes, my Master.

    The sound of panicked breathing.

    OBI-WAN (Voice Over): I?m not your master anymore.

    Still panning back twelve year old Anakin Skywalker is revealed looking upset. Tears glistened against his cheeks. He is clutching a large brown cloak.

    FADE TO BLACK

    ANAKIN (Voice Over): I?ll be as bad as I can. If they think I was trouble before?

    TITLE CARD
    Never Alone
    Now Showing

    FADE OUT
     
  19. Lisse

    Lisse Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jan 6, 2001
    *sneaks in and tacks up another one*

    First Encounter
    FIC: Mine. To be resumed shortly.

    ~~

    {CUE gentle, sad variant of the SW Force theme}

    V.O. (young woman): Just one more job. Then we'll have enough for a real home. I promise.

    {FADE TO the interior of the Millennium Falcon. A little boy leans over the edge of a makeshift crib, staring down at baby LEIA. The camera slowly zooms in on the baby's face as she stares up intently.}

    V.O. (little boy): My name's Han. We're coming to Alderaan with you.

    {FADE TO the gleaming streets of Aldera. An excited crowd has gathered around a public holovid, which displays BAIL and SACHÉ ORGANA holding up Leia. As the crowd cheers, PAN TO Han being dragged along by his half-sister JEMMI. He stares over his shoulder, watching the holovid with wide, uncomprehending eyes.}

    {FADE TO a very pale PADMÉ NABERRIE SKYWALKER looking down at Han.}

    V.O. (Han): They're taking her away from her mommy! They can't do that!

    {CUT TO Jemmi glowering at Han. There is a red mark on his face where she slapped him.}

    Jemmi: If you keep that up you'll get that entire family killed!

    {CUT TO an Imperial Star Destroyer approaching Alderaan.}

    {CUT TO a shuttle landing near the Royal Palace.}

    {CUT TO Padmé's eyes snapping open.}

    Padmé: Ani's here.

    (Music gets faster)

    {CUT TO a gleaming corridor in Alderaan's royal palace. DARTH VADER strides toward the camera, his cape billowing behind her.}

    {CUT TO Bail, Saché, Padmé and CELESTINE MONFARAI standing in a private chamber. Bail holds Leia.}

    Bail: You must not be seen.

    {CUT TO Padmé and Jemmi running through the palace.}

    {CUT TO Saché and Bail facing Vader in an enormous audience chamber. They are flanked by veiled attendants.}

    Vader: It is time to choose sides, Viceroy Organa.

    {CUT TO a close-up of one of the attendants. It is Padmé, standing rigid and frightened, tears leaking from her eyes.}

    V.O. (Vader): Is one woman worth more than the safety of your people?

    {CUT TO Han walking through the Falcon, cradling a sleeping Leia.}

    {CUT TO Han looking up at PADMÉ.}

    Han: I'm going to protect her.

    {CUT TO a bloodied KELLEN CELCHU grabbing Jemmi's arm.}

    Kellen: They took your brother.

    {Music crescendos}

    {CUT TO Han struggling in an Imperial officer's grip.}

    {CUT TO Jemmi charging a squadron of stormtroopers.}

    {CUT TO Jemmi rounding on Saché.}

    {Cut to Bail speaking before the assembled Alderaanian Senate.}

    {CUT TO Jemmi slowly pointing her blaster at Padmé, tears streaming down her cheeks.}

    {CUT TO Padmé stepping forward and lifting her veil.}

    {CUT TO Celestine huddling in a dark corner, cradling Leia as stormtroopers march past.}

    {Music pauses}

    V.O. (Han): Heroes always keep their promises.

    {FADE TO a small corridor in the palace. Han is huddled on the floor as if in great pain, but he still manages to look up at Vader as the Sith slowly approaches.}

    V.O. (Han): I'm going to be a hero.

    {Music resumes and slowly fades.}

    FADE TO BLACK

    FADE IN TEXT: FIRST ENCOUNTER
     
  20. Sarah_K

    Sarah_K Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 10, 2001
    Good work, Lisse! I've been curious if you were ever going to write trailers for those. :)

    Sarah >^,,^<
     
  21. Mayo_Solo

    Mayo_Solo Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aug 9, 2001
    Okay this is my first shot at a trailer.
    A Torn Family

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    [colr=blue]A peaceful world in a galaxy of turmiol[/color]
    scene-showing a young woman in a feild

    a young woman and her familyscene-a woman carrying a little girl

    ahint to the future
    a man talking "I'm Nom Anor I came to work for you.I saw your advertisement."

    but the future is not as bright as it seems
    scene- at night.four faces flash across the screen.

    screen goes black

    a childs voice"mama"

    Nom Anor killing a man

    a yuuzhan vong fleet coming out of hyperspace.

    a boy lunging at warriors.

    she fought to protect her daughter
    scene- woman fighting vong warriors

    she was taken
    scene-the young woman struggling as she is captured.

    her daughter taken from herthe girl being carried away (womans voice) "let me have my child"

    the enemy she was forced to love and serve
    scene-Nom Anor slapping her across the face.then a shot of him kissing her

    then a new warrior comes into her life a lightsaber blade ignites

    a true love found
    the woman kissing another man

    and the battle rages on
    a deadly space battle

    as she searches for her daughter (womans voice) I will look until I find her

    but will it be the same daughter she lost? scene-a small girl

    or will it be to late?
    the same girl in her teens


    A Torn Family

    With each planet the feared yuuzhan vong conquer families are destroyed. They are many times split up, killed, or forced to be slaves. This is the tale of one woman and her family. She will have to search for her daughter who was taken from her, stay safe, and overcome a forced love that would betray what the people of the New Republic have died for

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  22. Lisse

    Lisse Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Jan 6, 2001
    Fic: Plot bunny. I want it gone. *foists bunny on hapless thread*

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    {FADE IN on a small, cramped briefing room. Stars stream past the single window. A regal woman stands at the head of a table, facing two young men. The woman is Jedi Master ELASU ASHAMIRI. Her audience consists of newly knighted QUI-GON JINN and GAWAIN ORGANA, the charismatic brother of Alderaan's Viceroy.}

    Elasu: We have traced the pirates to the third moon of Ferek.

    {Slow zoom on Qui-Gon's face.}

    Elasu: You are observers, not heroes. Do nothing to endanger the mission.

    {TEXT: ONE WRONG}

    {FADE TO a squalid slave encampment. Perimeter fences and brutal guards prevent any escape.}

    V.O. (Elasu): These people are Sal-Suul's legal property.

    {CUT TO a slave girl named DASH'MI looking up at a seemingly empty landscape. The camera follows her gaze to a startled, well-concealed Qui-Gon, who watches her intently.}

    V.O. (Elasu, cont.): There is nothing you can do for them now.

    {TEXT: ONE CONSCIENCE}

    {FADE TO an enormous yet strangely bare room. Qui-Gon and Gawain are standing before a very poised young woman. She is ARA SAL-SUUL, a slaver's daughter. Her eyes are locked on Qui-Gon.}

    Ara: You and I want the same thing. The only question is: how much are you willing to risk?

    {CUT TO Qui-Gon and Gawain speaking quietly in a corner of the room.}

    Qui-Gon: You trust her?

    {QUICK FADE TO Ara walking slowly through the slaves' camp, flanked by two guards. Again Dash'mi is there, watching and observing.}

    {CUT TO Qui-Gon and Gawain again}

    Gawain: Who said anything about trust?

    {TEXT: ONE DESTINY}

    {FADE TO Dash'mi being hauled through the camp by a guard. As she passes a disguised Qui-Gon, she turns toward him and drops her voice to a whisper.}

    Dash'mi: I know who you are, Jedi.

    {Qui-Gon stares after her as she is led away, unafraid.}

    {CUT TO the small briefing room. Qui-Gon is arguing with Elasu.}

    Qui-Gon: We can't just leave them there!

    Elasu: There are a great many things we can't do. Interfering in a private transaction is only one of them.

    {TEXT: ONE CHOICE}

    {FADE TO Qui-Gon, Gawain, and Ara huddled in a group just outside the slave camp.}

    Gawain: Tonight?

    Qui-Gon: Tonight.

    {SCENES FLASH RAPIDLY:}

    {Slaves flee from pike-wielding guards.}

    {A sinister DRAXIS SAL-SUUL grabs Gawain by the neck and slams him into a wall.}

    {A fireball rises from the perimeter fence's generator.}

    {Elasu bows her head in rage or grief.}

    {Ara races through the hallways of her father's palatial home.}

    {Qui-Gon fights guards, desperately trying not to kill anyone.}

    {Gawain grabs Ara and kisses her squarely on the lips.}

    {Qui-Gon stands in the middle of the burning camp, sorrow and incomprehension warring for control.}

    {ABRUPT CUT TO Dash'mi standing with her hands spread on her abdomen. She removes them slowly, and they come away bloody from a battle wound.}

    {CUT TO BLACK}

    {FADE IN TEXT: ONE BEGINNING}
     
  23. Rogue1-and-a-half

    Rogue1-and-a-half Manager Emeritus who is writing his masterpiece star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Nov 2, 2000
    I posted this one in the other Fanfic trailer thread but it?s up now, so I thought I?d post it again with a link. Click on the title for a thrill ride like no other! :D
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    Black Screen.

    Shot of two men, one young, Yennik Hal and one older, Klamer, facing each other across a desk.

    Klamer: Coruscant is one big maze down there. We have teams of mapping engineers that we send down to try to give us some idea of the layout.

    Yennik: Why are you telling me this?

    Black screen.

    Klamer: (VO) Because yesterday . . .

    Several beams of light pierce the darkness.

    Shot of a tech pointing his flashlight at something offscreen.

    Klamer: (VO) They found something down there.

    Tech: Oh my God.

    Shot of Yennik: What did they find?

    Klamer: That's what we have to find out.

    Shot of Yennik addressing a crowd.

    Yennik: With the discovery that there may indeed be a creature of some kind stalking and killing people in the lower levels of Coruscant, a team has been assembled. An experienced big game hunter, Kal Rennich . . .

    Shot of man sliding a sight onto his rifle.

    Y: (VO) A soldier specially trained in underground activities, Tam Salter.

    Shot of man drawing a blaster.

    Y: (VO) The Jedi Masters Ceel and Farr.

    Shot of a man and woman standing back to back with lightsabres ignited.

    Y: (VO) A demolitions expert, Con Salli.

    Shot of a young man clipping a wire.

    Y: (VO) and Colonol Noz Terroc and thirty special troops.

    Shot of man standing before several others who are standing at attention.

    Shot of Yennik and Salter.

    Yennik: Can you kill this thing?

    Salter: If everything goes according to plan.

    Black Screen. Music begins. (Dino Kartsonokis arrangement of Revelations)

    Images flash:

    Rennich running down a corridor, unslinging his rifle.

    Salter firing with a blaster in each hand.

    Salli screaming.

    Yennik throwing a punch into the camera.

    Ceel calling a blaster to his hand.

    Farr swinging her lightsabre at something.

    Salli sliding across the floor on his stomach.

    The troops running toward a group of people holding weapons.

    Terroc aiming his blaster.

    Salter shouting: Blow it!

    Flames racing down a corridor.

    A shadow falling across Salli.

    Black Screen.

    Starring

    VO: Gillian Anderson

    Shot of Farr turning.

    VO: Alec Baldwin.

    Shot of Yennik running hard and fast.

    VO: Ed Harris.

    Shot of Terroc turning.

    VO: Val Kilmer.

    Shot of Ceel scowling.

    VO: Sam Neill.

    Shot of Rennich aiming his rifle.

    VO: Keanu Reeves.

    Shot of Salli backing slowly.

    VO: George C. Scott.

    Shot of Klamer slapping a desk.

    VO: Bruce Willis.

    Shot of Salter throwing a detonator.

    Black Screen.

    Maker of Shadows.
     
  24. Rogue1-and-a-half

    Rogue1-and-a-half Manager Emeritus who is writing his masterpiece star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Nov 2, 2000
    Sorry, double post.
     
  25. Jedi Knight Anakin

    Jedi Knight Anakin Jedi Youngling star 1

    Registered:
    Mar 8, 2000
    Here's another bad one.

    Fic: Coming Soon (Hopefully)
    Title: Unsung Heroes

    Think of the picture having a washed-out, grainy look about it. As if it was a filmed documentary, by a hand-held camera.

    - - -

    A black background. Funeral-like music begins playing in the background, in the league of Saving Private Ryan.

    [White text fades in on screen, accompanied by a voice over]

    V.O.- In Rememberance of the Few...

    [The text fades out to black, image fades in to the faces of soldiers clad in battle gear, laughing soundlessly with one another]

    VO/Text- ...Who Died for So Many.

    [The image again fades in to a soundless battle scene, troops charging some sort of facility and getting mowed down mercilessly.]

    VO/Text- A Tribute to the Men and Women...

    [Text fades out to the black screen. A short pause, and more white text appears.]

    VO/Text- ...Who fought to free the Galaxy.

    [Text fades out again, to a image of a group of men sitting around a sort of campfire solemnly. They all look at each other.]

    [Image fades out to black.]

    VO/Text- The Brave and the Valiant...

    [Soundless scenes of a group of soldiers charging an Imperial Walker, the Walker hailing down burning rain upon them.]

    [Fade to black]


    VO/Text- ...That laid down their life for the freedom of Billions.

    [The image fades back in to an old corkboard, the black-and-white, faded photos of eight men, three women tacked to the board. Slowly, the camera pans across each of their faces. They seem so young. Still in their teens, if not just out of them. Most of the pictures are stained with coffine, or perhaps water. Some are half-burned.]

    [Fade to Black]

    [Text fades onto the screen, underlined in a dark blue.]

    Unsung Heroes

    [More Text]

    Coming Soon.

    [Fade out to a black screen.]
     
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