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  1. earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 21, 2006
    star 6
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: inter trilogy
    Characters: Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon
    Genre: vignette
    Summary: Obi-Wan muses.
    Disclaimer: Star Wars is owned by G.L.

    Dedicated to my father. 27-1-2009


    Obi-Wan had made tea and a soft smile appeared on his face. More than 2 years had passed since he found the hovel than had become his home, the home of a hermit. He gazed at the table where an elegant porcelain cup was standing. It had belonged to Qui-Gon and he had packed it in his trunk when he fled the temple.

    He remembered his master who had been like a father to him, sharing with him the sadness and joy, teaching him, comforting him.

    He poured a cup and heard a soft chuckle ?still using my old porcelain cup.?
    ?Yes Qui-Gon, coming to teach me??

    ?Yes Padawan.?

    Obi-Wan finished his tea and sat down on the floor dressed in his brown cloak and started his meditation.

    If we watch carefully
    We see their faces
    Pure, innocent and white
    Pure eternal love
    Pure like their souls

    If we listen carefully
    We hear their voices
    Gentle like the waves
    We hear their voices
    In hushed whispers
    On the wind

    You and I will meet again
    And all will turn to silver light
    A light that will ignite the stars
    All souls pass into the light
    That is
    The Force?

    White like the eternal consciousness
    White like the beings I will meet
    White like the Force

    I am white
    I am luminous
    I am a white luminous being.

    And finishing the last words he felt the arms of Qui-Gon enveloping him and he snuggled comfortably in their embrace. ?My father, you are here for me, guiding me.?


  2. Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master

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    Mar 21, 2007
    star 4

    I'm sorry about your father @};-
  3. The Musical Jedi Jedi Master

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    Dec 13, 1999
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    This made me misty-eyed, earlybird, although it made me think of my mom instead. Very sweet. @};-
  4. earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master

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    Aug 21, 2006
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    Thank you, this means a lot to me.

    Thank you [:D]
  5. snowspeeder_gunner Jedi Padawan

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    Apr 10, 2007
    star 4
    This was so good. I really like that poem.

    I'm very sorry to hear about your father. [:D][:D]@};-

    And the art was beautiful as usual.
  6. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost

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    Aug 31, 2004
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    Superb! I always sthink of Qui-Gon as being close as a father to Obi-Wan when I watched TPM and especially reading fanfiction about them. Qui seems warm, humorous, wise... not "hide bound" as the expression is. A very tender touching piece.

  7. KELIA Manager Emeritus

    Member Since:
    Jul 26, 2005
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    That was simply wonderful

    ?My father, you are here for me, guiding me.?

    And he always will be

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    I'm so sorry for your loss [:D] [:D]

    Great job on this

  8. dancing_star Jedi Master

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    Feb 24, 2007
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    I'm so sorry to hear about your father. [:D] This was a beautiful, beautiful tribute to him. @};-
    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  9. Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master

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    Sep 16, 2006
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    I'm sorry to hear about your father. [:D]

    That poem is beautiful, and I'm sure your father's spirit will watch over you and continue to guide and teach you for the rest of your life, just as Qui-gon does for Obi-wan. [:D]
  10. Seremela Jedi Youngling

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    Jul 12, 2008
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    Beautiful, Earlybird, and it expresses very beautiful thoughts about loss and comfort.

    Love the idea of Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon together like that on Tatooine and the painting is great.

    I'm very sorry about your father [:D]

  11. NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus

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  12. earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 21, 2006
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    Thank you so much [:D][:D] this means a lot to me[:D][:D]
  13. Sartorius Jedi Youngling

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    Feb 3, 2009
    Hi, I have read your stories. They are short but enjoyable. I like this one and also the young Obi ones. Thanks for writing them and please keep writing more.
  14. AzureAngel2 Jedi Grand Master

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    Jun 14, 2005
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    Het spijt me dat over je vader te hoeren!


    Ik wens je veel kracht en sterkte!

    And sorry that I wasn´t on-line so long. But there was much stress due to university and school matters recently. And then I became ill with the flue, trying to go on anyway. Today I reported ill.

    I slept the entire day, nicely nursed by my concerned husband, and now I am on-line, confronted with all of your wonderful up-dates.


  15. GuNgAnFaN3090 Jedi Knight

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    Oct 16, 2008
    star 5
    That was beautiful. =D= I'm sorry about you're father, but I'm sure he will continue to be with you even though he is gone. @};-

    Loved the work and can see how powerful it is. =D= =D=
  16. earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master

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    Aug 21, 2006
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    Thank you and yes I will write more short stories about Obi-Wan and his friends.

    Dank je wel Azure[:D]

    I am sure he is still there and thank you for your support.[:D]
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