I had an idea for a character I'm going to wright about and wanted some feed back. I'm not sure where I want this character to go yet. The basic idea is that he is the son of a Jedi Knight\Master? who was sent to Onderon with his mother to hide from the Empire at the end of the Jedi Purge. Right now I'm working on his back story so I can figure out where he's coming from. Here is a rough outline. Star wars character:Mar-Pa-Win Species:Human Age:19 Gender:Male Height:5"9 Weight:187 Eyes:Blue\Gray Hair:Sandy Blond Skin:White Homeworldnderon\unaware that he has ties to Corellia Preface Outline- During the end of the Jedi Purge Mar-Pa's father Ti-Jo-Win,a Jedi Knight\Master? who was nearly exiled from the Jedi Order because he fell in love and took a wife against the Jedi council's wishes, is being hunted down by either High Inquisitor Tremayne,or possibility a new Imperial Inquisitor character with possible use in Mar-Pa's story. Fearful of capture Ti wishes to find a safe haven for his wife,Sonja note: maybe from Onderon?,and unborn child.note:Sonja and Ti's marriage may be only known to the council and a few others. Disenchanted by the Jedi massacre Ti decides that he must sacrifice himself in order for his family to remain safe.They travel to Onderon were he hopes to hide his wife. The choice of Onderon is because over the thousands of years many have forgotten about the planet except the Jedi. Ti has ties to the planet due to a number of missions years ago involving an emerging Sith cult that was threatening to reach out across the galaxy.Ti has trusted friends he made from that time who have agreed to hide his family. They make it safely with an incident or two. Making sure his wife is in good hands and a tearful goodbye Ti travels to Corellia knowing the risks in order to ask Rostek Horn if he can make sure that some info and personal items reach Mar-Pa when he is older and the time is right,reason: he and Nejaa Halycon were close friends when they trained in the Jedi Temple together.Both being Corellians gave them a close bond. When the Purge began Nejaa told him if he needed help protecting his wife or wanted to leave something to be found in the future to contact Rostek. The Inquisitor discovers where Ti has gone. Ti hears news of an Imperial Star Destroyer in orbit and that stormtroopers lead by the Inquisitor are landing to search for him. He confronts the Inquisitor and makes a challenge to a saber duel so Rostek can escape elsewhere unnoticed. A few lines are spoken in the heat of battle something to the effect of Vader will be pleased another Jedi will be crushed.Ti says some prophetic words and allows the Inquisitor to strike him down.He becomes one with the Force.Cut scene to Mar-Pa being Born on Onderon.