Fic: I Found You - lil Obi fic - please read!

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  1. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    Title: I Found You
    Author: Keyla Kenobi - keyla_kenobi@naboomail.com
    Rating: G
    Archive: Sure, just e-mail me!
    Disclaimer: The boys belong to George Lucas, I don't make money with this,
    I just use them for the MUSH!
    Warning: There is a loving and parental relationship between Obi and Qui,
    there is no slash so if you don't like that, don't read any further.
    Summary: I'm trying to make a serie with this fics, and this would be the
    first one. Qui-Gon meets Obi-Wan for the first time and learns something
    from the boy's past. Obi-Wan is 3.
    Beta-Read by Aida (The best Beta-reader!!!! Thanx!!)
    / Are italics /
    Spoilers: I don't think there are any, just that Xanatos is mentioned in
    this one too.
    Check out also my other fic if you want:
    Grumpy Tummy, A very Important Prescene In My Life, A Rainy Day, Fear, and
    Teaching and Learning. They are all connected except for Fear.

    *** *** *** *** *** ***

    I Found You

    Qui-Gon Jinn stopped suddenly as he felt *something*. And that something was
    coming from the direction of the Creche's playground. He stretched his senses
    until he could hear a frightened little voice.

    "M-mommy...mommy, he'p me...!"

    The Master frowned and quickly headed toward the playground. There, on the
    highest slider, a small, trembling boy was calling softly for his mother.
    Qui-Gon quickly climbed the stairs and soon found the little initiate in
    question. The little boy was huddling in a corner of the slider's landing,
    his eyes tightly shut. Qui-Gon observed that the little initiate appeared to
    be no more than three years old..

    "Hello. little one," he spoke gently, trying not to startle the child.

    The boy looked up, fright radiating from his ice-blue eyes. He examined the
    stranger before him and, after a pause, whispered sorrowfully, "You no my
    Mommy."

    Qui-Gon chuckled. "No, I guess I'm not your Mommy," he smiled softly, "but,
    perhaps I can help you. Can you get down?"

    The boy shook his head as he stretched his short arms in the direction of the
    Master. Qui-Gon approached and gently picked the child up. Immediately, the
    little initiate clung tightly to the elder Jedi's neck; hiding his face
    between the Master's neck and the soft, flowing hair. Making sure that the
    little boy was firmly secured against him, Qui-Gon began the careful descent
    down. As they descended, Qui-Gon softly asked, "What's your name?"

    The boy took some time before answering. But, finally he replied in a
    muffled voice, "Obi-Wam."

    "Obi-Wam?" the Master repeated.

    "No! Obi-WaM!" the child corrected him, stressing the last word.

    "Ah," Qui-Gon finally understood, "Obi-Wan?"

    The boy nodded silently.

    "Glad to meet you, Obi-Wan. I'm Master Qui-Gon," the tall Jedi said as he
    introduced himself.

    But, there was no reaction or answer from the boy. /That's strange,/ Qui-Gon
    thought, /He should be crying, or at least a little frightened, but he is
    reacting so calmly./


    The trip towards the Creche was silent; Qui-Gon was at a loss for words. He
    was not accustomed to dealing with children simply because the majority of
    them became scared after they saw his imposing form. And it didn't help
    matters that he did not respond well in the presence of children.

    But this little boy was different. Qui-Gon felt as if they had met somewhere
    before, although he did not recall ever seeing the child.

    Once they arrived at the Creche, they were met by Master Skyla Lo'Tren. The
    slim young woman had eyes and hair as dark as a moonless night. Clearly, she
    had been waiting worriedly for someone in her office. She was so distracted
    that she took no notice of Qui-Gon approaching in her direction.

    "Skyla?"

    The young woman turned abruptly, a bit startled. But, when she saw the small
    bundle in Qui-Gon's arms, her relief was evident.

    "Obi-Wan! Thank the Force you're all right! I was so worried! Thank you
    too, Qui-Gon. Where was he?" she asked as she attempted to take Obi-Wan from
    the tall Master's arms.

    But this, apparentl
  2. JediKnightZarc Jedi Master

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    Oct 6, 2000
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    AAWWWWWWW! That was just adorable. I loved it! Poor little Obi! I just wanted to go hug him.
  3. Healer_Leona Manager Emeritus

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    Jul 7, 2000
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    Too cute for words Keyla!

  4. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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  5. Arctic_Wolf Jedi Knight

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    Aug 19, 2000
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    I love these kind of stories. Sheds a new light on the relationship between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon. Keep it up Keyla!!!
  6. Amidolee Force Ghost

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    Jan 8, 2000
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    That was so sweet! May I archive that?
  7. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    May 24, 2000
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    sure Amidolee! Go ahead!
  8. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Sep 19, 2000
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    What a meeting! How you described the very first meeting was quite moving. Excellent story Keyla, thanks for sharing it! I'm looking forward to more!
  9. Kaylla Norn Jedi Knight

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    Mar 2, 2000
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    Yes more please! a sequal...please say there is a sequal!
  10. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    May 24, 2000
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    yea don't worry, there's gonna be a sequeal!
    I have the whole idea and the plot, and I think it would be finished by new week.
  11. Jedi_Borme Jedi Master

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    Jan 17, 2000
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    I love that it was so cute. Sad that Obi had a hard time at the Temple.
  12. Jane Jinn Jedi Grand Master

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    Jan 12, 2000
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    Oh, how sweet! It was funny the way Obi-Wan looked at Qui-Gon and asked, "You weah little?" Too darling, the way that being found by Qui-Gon made Obi-Wan start to speak. And the way he convinced Qui-Gon to come sleep in his *very* small bed. Excellent story! I'll be looking forward to more.
  13. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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  14. Amidolee Force Ghost

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    Jan 8, 2000
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    I've got the story archived now! It's at http://togalair.homestead.com/ifdu.html
  15. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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  16. Valiowk Force Ghost

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    Apr 23, 2000
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    Wow, Keyla, you and Jedi_KnightMariah really have a way with l'il Obi! :)
  17. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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  18. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    Jan 21, 2000
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    Awesome story. Will you tell us the title when you get the sequal done?
  19. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    May 24, 2000
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    sure! It's Together. It's already posted, so check it out! :)
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