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Saga Fire When Ready(leia fic/response to IEJs challenge)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by americantragedy, Oct 4, 2005.

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  1. americantragedy

    americantragedy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Fire When Ready
    a/n: hope this works out ok Rish. and you other people, be brutally honest. its good for character ;)
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    "You may fire when ready."
    "What?" The wild-eyed princess strained against the grip of her stuncuffs.
    "Dantooine is far too remote for an accurate display of power but don't worry your highness. We will deal with your rebel friends later."
    "No.." The sinister green rays charged and shot quickly as the screams echoing through her mind were immediatly silenced. Her brow furrowed and Leia bit her lip, fighting back the tears welling up in her eyes. Tears were one thing she would not give them the pleasure of seeing though it felt as if someone had ripped her in half.
    "You may take her back to the cell block.:
    "Yessir!" The stormtrooper took Leia's arms and led her down the immaculate corridors of the battle station. The trooper shoved her roughly into the turbolift and when she opened her month to chastise him he cut her off with a cold, robotic voice that gave her chills every time she heard it. "Its in your very best interest to shut up." Leia scowled and watched the panel as it flashed the numbers of each floors they passed. 150, 151, 152....
    After an hour-long ten minutes the durasteel doors slid open smoothly and the trooper pushed her just as hard down the hall towards her cell. He unlatched her stuncuffs not making any effort to be careful with her bruised arms and left her to sink down onto the so-called "cot". Leia sat in silence for a moment, ignoring the echoed whispers of those she had failed to save.
    I failed them. I failed and look what happened....
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    The Dark Lord shuffled down the halls of the cellblock, roused form his sleep by the old nightmares. It seemed that the princess brought them about again. Leia was so much like her and it bothered him that someone he had never met reminded him so much of an angel. That look in her eyes as Tarkin gave the order to destroy Alderaan, he recognized it. He had watched that tiny spark of life in her disappear into obscurity along with the dust that was once her home.
    Vader paused, hearing something muffled from the cell on his right. Just behind the walls he could feel an impentrable aura of sorrow looming and beyond that all that was there was the plaintive sobs of the Princess Leia.
     
  2. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Very interesting perspective, little padawan sister. I liked the Vader part.
     
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