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Beyond - Legends ~ Fireworks of the Soul (Viggie Series) ~ L/M ~ new post on 16/Dec

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hazel, Mar 21, 2011.

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  1. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Beautiful title and wonderful song! Great timeframe too. :D

    Love Mara's insights into herself and they as a couple, and Luke's re-proposal LOL

     
  3. JediMara77

    JediMara77 Force Ghost star 4

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    Yay, more L/M goodness. :) Very nice start, Hazel. :)
     
  4. Luna_Nightshade

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    Very sweet and romantic moment to get to have together. I like that he proposed twice--guys should do that more often! I wouldn't mind a weekly proposal. [face_batting] I'll be keeping up!
     
  5. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    AW! [face_love]

    Please add me to the PM list.
     
  6. Piper057

    Piper057 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Oh,yes![:D]
     
  7. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Nice viggie and great to see Mara and Luke together.
     
  8. Briannakin

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    SQUEEEE! Yay! I love L/M viggie mushy goodness. Super start!
     
  9. mavjade

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    Wonderful incite into Mara's frame of mind at that time!

    Palpatine had touched her soul violently, crushing her very being and molding it to his image, but she had survived it and healed herself from his touch. The scars were still there, but she could live with the scars.

    Luke had scars too, she could see them clearly, the physical ones and the ones in his own soul. She could even see the ones she had caused with her stubborn refusal to stay. She would make it up to him, now, she promised silently.


    This part was especially powerful! I enjoyed the look at both of them having their own baggage, their own scars and how they could both overcome them!

    Great job, Hazel! I look forward to more!
     
  10. Stepher

    Stepher Jedi Youngling

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    ha hahahah :)
     
  11. Hazel

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  12. Briannakin

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    Squeee! I knew the Force told me to stay up to this ungodly hour for a reason!

    I got my nudest Farmboy and I loved it [face_love]:*. Thank you.

    I want PMs when you post again. PLEEEEEEEEAAAAASEEEEE?

    I'm going to go die of happiness (and exhaustion).
     
  13. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Hazel that really was a sweet read -- a very fine mental image there you painted for us ;)

    @};-

    I can so feel Mara enjoying the view LOL

     
  14. JediMara77

    JediMara77 Force Ghost star 4

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    Awww, yay!!! I love when my ridiculousness inspires others! :D That was lovely, Hazel. [:D]


    BTW, I have to disagree with this:

    That made her snicker and she ran her hands up and down his bare chest, steeling a glance downward. "And those shorts couldn?t possibly look any better than they do now."

    Yes, they could. If they were on the floor. :D
     
  15. Lady_Misty

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  16. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Briannakin:

    You're very welcome - I'm happy to be able to hand out nude Farmboys to you all. :D



    Jade:

    Thank you! I too will keep this mental image for a very long time. =P~



    JediMara:

    [face_blush] Nancy, you're even naughtier than I am. And thank you for surreptitiously putting this image in my mind.



    Misty:

    Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. [:D]
     
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  18. JediMara77

    JediMara77 Force Ghost star 4

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    That was loverly. :D
     
  19. Lady_Misty

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  20. kataja

    kataja Jedi Master star 4

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    Aww, a very fine set of viggies you've written here! Being a sucker for the home-from-Nirauan-trip I particulrly enjoyed the first one - but that doesn't make the other two lesser. I loved how you brough in the Plooma story into the second and "Master" into the third one! [face_love] Very fitting too that Mara would want to keep with Anakin's lightsaber - as was the subject on the EU Community Mara topic.

    Great work! =D= If you keep a PM, please put me onto it - I'm such an idiot to read nowadays that it seems to be the only way I get it done![face_clown]
     
  21. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Lovely setting! Wonderful context too: Mara making a lightsaber & yet being sentimentally attached to Luke's gift :* & the whole exchange about Master [face_mischief] [face_dancing]

    I loved the reference to Luke's wedding gift :) and am happy they could have this super getaway from the pre-wedding fuss. ;)

    I think, if I had to choose, this one's my fave.

    @};-

    [:D]



     
  22. Briannakin

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    That was yummy. A great depiction of how Mara finished her training but still kept Anakin`s blade.
     
  23. Hazel

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  25. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Loved the easy coziness of their conversation & discussing their favorites. :D

    Such a soft, gentle tone.
     
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