First project - please critique it for me

Discussion in 'Scifi 3D Forum' started by canadatv, Jun 26, 2006.

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  1. canadatv Jedi Padawan

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    Jun 12, 2006
    Hi there. I am a long time Star Wars fan looking to eventually make my own fan film. So I've started with the fun stuff - space ship animations.

    Here is my first attempt at a post-opening crawl shot, not very original, just trying to get things looking good as far as ship movements, lasers, explosions, sound fx,etc. It' all done in Max, and AE, the only thing I didn't do is MotionBlur in Max just because of the huge render times.

    Please let me know what you think.

    Thanks.


    http://www.savefile.com/files/3362061
  2. Corrin_Wyndryder Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Oct 17, 2001
    star 4
    Fixed the link for you.

    EDIT: but it keeps timing out on me.
  3. Ravenger Jedi Knight

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    Apr 2, 2005
    star 2
    looks very nice tho i think the falcon needs to move a little bit more cause now it looks like its on strings same goes for the tie fighters, just some subtle rolls and stuff would make it looks alot better
    and at the end i'm asuming you were trying to make the falcon jump to hyperspace but didnt exactly work out the way it was planned :p
    but otherwise good work
    i look forward to seeing more
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