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Challenge First Sentence (Twich's Twisted Sisters!) We got new sentences - Get em while they're hot!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by Twich, Jul 19, 2005.

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  1. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    *up*

    -Lures @};-
     
  2. TwichsTwistedSisters

    TwichsTwistedSisters Jedi Youngling star 1

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    We hope that everyone is enjoying their President's Day here in the US.

    In honor of this American holiday we bring you our newest First Sentence:

    At what should have been a festive celebration of a most beloved leader, a small group of citizens commemorated His naming day with an act of war against the planet thought responsible for his death.

    We look forward to reading your entries. :)
     
  3. Jedi-Ant

    Jedi-Ant Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YAY! Another sentence!!! [face_dancing]

    I hope you're all having a wonderful holiday! :D

    Think of me, will you...sweating and stuck at work, in Australia
    :p
     
  4. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    *up*

    -Lures @};-
     
  5. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    i think this place needs a great big "umph!"

    don't you? ;)

    -Lures @};-
     
  6. Darth_Manion

    Darth_Manion Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I suppose. ;)

    How does this work, exactly? Do I just pick any sentence from the huge kaboodle, and then go from there?
     
  7. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    Welcome Darth_Manion. :)

    Yes, any sentence that has been posted. Then, you write an entry, any length, and post them either in the First Sentence thread on the respective board, or on its own, linking that thread here.
     
  8. Darth_Manion

    Darth_Manion Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanks!

    Sounds simple enough.

    Or is it?

     
  9. leiamoody

    leiamoody Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Upping thread to include the entries I've done utilizing some of the sentences for my series "And The Wombfish Said...":

    The Holy Essence, and Blisters

    "Most true is it that 'beauty is in the eye of the gazer'". For anyone who can look upon this spot and call it beautiful must surely have impaired judgement."

    Chevor wished he knew what his master was talking about. But at the moment, his feet were humming the song of the hurt, and his headache had decided to take up an offensive position against the pain medication he had taken before breakfast.



    The Great Oneness, and An Invisible Guest

    "The man is sleeping, " Aduman said, waving away the persistent sand fly which refused to leave him alone. "The man has been dead for centuries. The soul of Garahaldin is off-limits to us. So I can't gather up the deceased masters in the Council chamber, no matter how entertaining that might be."


    The Masters Are Mirthful, and Is Pudding Sacred?

    "A man is never more truthful than when he acknowledges himself a liar."

    Chevor stepped up onto a large rock that afforded easier access to the cave entrance. "What do you mean?"

    The laugh he received as a response only confirmed his master was in a far better mood than the previous day, when they first encountered the spirit of Garahaldin. The visitation from the ancient ghost actually seemed to motivate Aduman to continue the journey.


    All installments can be found in [link=http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/25904931/p1]And The Wombfish Said...[/link]
     
  10. Sionnach-Airgid

    Sionnach-Airgid Jedi Youngling

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    Jul 20, 2005
    Wanders in after a looonnnngggg disappearance and looks around.

    No new sentences? :_| :_|

    Oh, well, time to go hunting . . .

    Prepares to go searching through previous sentences renew her addiction :D

    Giving this a boost!
     
  11. Mystralgurl

    Mystralgurl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey Hey Hey. I'm back. And posting, slightly. This one is not about Jadyn or her daughter, btw.


    At what should have been a festive celebration of a most beloved leader, a small group of citizens commemorated His naming day with an act of war against the planet thought responsible for his death.

    This caused a war.

    The war was carried to all twelve planets in the system, draining resources, killing people, and lasting for dozens of years?

    ~~~

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=20799351&brd=10477&start=26774277]And everybody dies![/link]
     
  12. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    I have got mine in today

    First Sentence Challenge! Title: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/26832420]Two red beads[/link]
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: JA Obi-Wan is 23
    Characters: Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Siri, Adi Gallia, Oc?s
    Genre: multi post HC SiriWan
    Summary: shopping for a birthday present turns into something unexpected for Adi Gallia, Siri, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Kaagi Adin and Aaqu Maerhin.
    First sentence (credit to Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy.)

     
  13. leiamoody

    leiamoody Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Upping the thread to post a link to the latest installment of my series challenge responses using the first sentences..."And The Wombfish Said..." continues with Aduman discovering something terrible about the manner of Garahaldin's death. And he discovers Garahaldin is not the only dead person with a voice.

    The Rendezvous Bay Interlude

    ?For many days, we had been tempest-tossed.? The beachcomber had the attention of a captive audience of sea birds as he leaned forward and pointed a bony finger towards the blue sky. ?The clouds were gathered low on the horizon, black and gray and swirling like a whirlpool just over our brows.?

    Aduman stood away from the demented orator and his non-witted audience of the avian persuasion. This had certainly been a strange so far, starting with Chevor?s affliction of malus oceanus, and culminating in the discovery of Garahaldin?s ghost at his homestead. Yet he wondered if the sight of an old man who clearly spent too much time in the sun speaking to a flock of gulls was the most bizarre incident that had taken place in the past four days.


    Current installment can be found down at the bottom or near there of this thread: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/25904931/p2]Click[/link]
     
  14. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    upping cuz I love this thread. [:D]

    -Lures @};-
     
  15. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    Whoa, what happened? two months and nada?

    come on, guys.

    -Lures @};-
     
  16. Kidan

    Kidan TFN EU Staff star 5 VIP

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    who knows, I've not seen anything from Twitch (her last login date was back in Feb) in quite a bit of time... [face_thinking] As for Twich's Twisted Sisters... well Z was busy with that whole awards thing, and Lola was on vacation, but she's back from that...

    Personally, I think my stalker is sleeping on the job or something... [face_mischief]:p


    Sometimes, I've considered stealing the thread out from underneath them while they're gone...[face_devil][face_skull] but, then I'd start to worry about what they'd do to me when they returned [face_laugh]
     
  17. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    Truth be told, I was also on the Beyond Fanfic Awards team, then was the victim of reduction of force when my employer went bankrupt, and went on my yearly family vacation, one which I planned for about 20 people.

    Boy, I've had a busy summer. :p

    And Kidan is right, I am now back.

    If it was a paying job, I would have been canned months ago. :p

    Actually, RL and DWB were two major factors in my allowing this thread to fall through the cracks. But it wouldn't take much to get this back on track if there's interest.

    I would love you to death actually. [:D] I can't speak for Z though. :p
     
  18. SilSolo

    SilSolo Jedi Knight star 5

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    I'm interested. I need to write another vig anyways.
     
  19. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    do you guys remember me saying that i would take all the sentences up until '07 and throw ALL of them in one huge story?

    I'm still working on it. :(

    School sucks, but jail sucks more. :rolleyes:

    -Lures [:D]
     
  20. Binder-lover

    Binder-lover Jedi Master star 4

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    Cute challenge! I have a question.

    Can we request or add sentences?
     
  21. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    You have to PM either Lola, Zonoma, or Twich, and request sentences, and you can also send them stuff you'd like to post as the sentence of the week.

    Hope that helped,

    -Lures @};-
     
  22. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    UP!!!!!!

    Lures [face_pumpkin]
     
  23. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    How about a scary Halloween up?

    [laughing like a mad scientist] UP! [/laughter]

    -Lures [face_pumpkin]
     
  24. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    Okay, I am this close to asking to take over this thread because NO ONE UPDATES!!!!!!....

    and this makes me sad. :(

    so where do I sign up?

    -Lures @};-
     
  25. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    uh, guys? I wasn't kidding ^^. :D

    where IS everybody?

    -Lures @};-
     
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