Flight of the Jedi Planning Thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by DarthIshtar, Sep 30, 2001.

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  1. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    I haven't been able to keep up with the thread and I really don't have any ideas. Anyone have any suggests?
  2. Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Umm....how about you post on how things are going with our Jelena and Asa? I'd like to know how they're doing, I've been wondering.
  3. Mcily_Nochi Jedi Master

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    Just checking in and upping this.
  4. Mcily_Nochi Jedi Master

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  5. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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  6. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    Up. We are the champions

    I really don't know why I did that. Just another example of my insanity.

    Ok hopefully this will make it easier to find. Maybe not.
  7. Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    MY FRIEND!!!

    I love Queen.
  8. Mcily_Nochi Jedi Master

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    Up!

    Since we seem to be making random comments, I'll join the fun.

    Today I saw a fuzzy black and white photo of a donkey with a very large load of hay fastened to its back (in some thrid world country or another). And I thought it was a sheep having a very very very bad hair day, until I looked closer, and hazarded a guess at what it really is.

    :)
  9. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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  10. Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    random comments.....

    a little while back, me and my friend Summer were listening to Vertical Horizon's song "I want to give you back" when my mom yells from the kitchen, "I WANT TO GIVE YOU A BATH?!!!!!"

    It was hilarious, it's now an ongoing joke. In fact, one time my friend dared me to get down on my knee and sing it to her when I picked her up from her house in front of everybody, and I did, then she dared me to do it to my other friend that we were picking up who was also in on the joke. She opened the door, saw me, stared at me as I sang the line, then, out of reflex, slapped me, HARD!

    I was like, "Ow!" and she said, "I'm sorry, it was a reflex when I saw you, I...."

    It hurt, but I couldn't help laughing.
  11. Mcily_Nochi Jedi Master

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    Okay, guys. Enough with random comments. We need to get organized again, I think. I vote that everyone submit an idea or two about what should happen next, including plans you may already have. The trial stuff is going great, you guys don't have to give that away if you don't want. But I think it will work better if we can all be working toward something, the way we do when we write by ourselves. Just because it's an RR doesn't mean we can't have a continuing and coherent plot. So please, think about some things you'd like to have happen, and let us know. Then we can decide, and actually be writing towrd a goal.

    Mcily

    PS. How d'y'all like my little attempt at being domineering? I think it worked rather well. :)
  12. Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    ok, get off you soapbox, now, mcily! ;)

    i don't have any ideas, but you guys can know that the trial is almost over and then Garm is getting us with you guys, minus sial, but you knew that.
  13. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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    Cin, I'm still drawing a blank on witnesses. Should we have an assassination attempt that causes them to conveniently cut the trial short and issue the verdict?

    How do we get them off-planet? There's no way in Sithdom that they'd let them out of their sight. An idea is to get them all the way to the execution and then, since it's a private affair, have the Rebellion have infiltrated the stormtrooper ranks and they eliminate the rest of the guard. But not before Sial is shot. Not mortally--it's supposed to be a lingering death--but she's definitely weakened. So they get to a transport and Jacinta tries to heal her as best she can, but she's still very weak. They have to stop and refuel and while there, they get ambushed. Sial holds the attackers off like in the hangar where they got captured and y'all get back to the ship. One officer stays behind to help Sial get back (since she still can't walk or see), but he gets mortally wounded. Seeing the position weakening, Jacinta goes back and tries to rescue Sial, but just before she reaches her, Sial takes a shot between the eyes. The only thing Sial can do is to get her body back to the ship. Like Qui-Gon, she does not disappear. So they put her in a stasis chamber only to preserve her body and when they get to the rendezvous point, there's a memorial?

    That's my brainstorm.
  14. Mcily_Nochi Jedi Master

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    Whoa! That's sounds great, Ishy. Not that I'm the perfect judge or anything. :)

    I'm off, I'm off! *shy smile* But I did enjoy the soapbox while I was on it . . .

    I think Obi, Padmé, Leia, and Bail need to get off Almania (perhaps with a Jedi for an escort in addition to Obi?) and we'll need to do something about Sial's padawan, too. Hmmm . . . Any ideas there?
  15. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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    Hmmm, I'll take over the Char'lyen character.
  16. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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    I'm thinking of doing the assassination attempt very soon. Is that okay?
  17. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    I like your idea, Ish!

    Ummm, we also need to figure out what to do with Alex, Jelena, and the rest. Though I really don't know where they are at the moment. Could someone tell me?
  18. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    I just remembered a vision that Sial had a while ago about Clanya being dark. So therefor I think she should act as a diviersion and end up staying behind. She is then brainwashed again.

    Perhaps she could be the assasin. Seeing as she knows tha plan and is slowly becoming the soldier that she was meant to be. Plius she will have to remain on Imperial Centr because she is gonna become a mommy.
  19. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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  20. Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Ok, Ish, I like that, please post it, cause I don't think I could, it's too complicated. Then I'll help you get to the actual death, then we will give you a huge farewell!

    *sniff*
  21. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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  22. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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    Okay, Cin, con tu permiso, I'm going to write a really long post tonight. My idea is that post-assassinationattempt, they meet with the tribunal and they essentially veto the entire witness list based on relevance. SO they decide to issue the verdict after closing arguments. We all know what the verdict is. And then I do the night before, the preparation for execution, and the execution thing that I described.
  23. Mcily_Nochi Jedi Master

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    I love the idea of dark Clanya. Some of them have to give in, they're not perfect. Jaci, will you keep writing Ben and Padmé, etc? If you need to use Mcily, go ahead, with my blessing.

    I'll wait and see what happens, then post some more.
  24. Mcily_Nochi Jedi Master

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