Flirting With Disaster (PG-13... is THIS really Padmae-Amidala???)

There has been a lot of buzz about what Anikin and Amidala's relationship is going to shape up to look like. This short story describes what I think ten years would have done to Padmae-Amidala, a girl making the transition to womanhood in the awkward position of a planetary ruler, and the way it might affect things with Anikin.

This isn't idealized or terribly romantic, and I didn't really write it to be terribly entertaining. I had an idea, and I am throwing out there. It might upset some of Amidala's fans, and it is probably inapropriate for younger readers. Basically, my message is to stay away from this one if you are easily offended or *caugh* under eighteen.

Enough introduction. I posted it on Lady Kenobi's website, which you can get to through the spiffy link.

Flirting with Disaster

I would really appreciate feedback. It's an idea, so please comment on it and offer up your own ideas. Thanks everyone.

~The Adverb

 

I like the story. I would have included it in my favorites list if I'd read it first.

I'm at the end of my Summer Hoildays and I wish I'd found this page at the start.

I've loved reading everyones stuff. Especailly all the Obi Wan stuff and the Phantom Menace rewrites. And all the relationship stories. Here are the links to some of my favorite stories.
I'll be back and forth all night doing these...

http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=934134&replies=439

http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=221315&replies=1212

http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=157081&replies=368

I would have to say however that my favorite of all the stories was Kellaradors Gullga's lunch. I don't know if the guy is a pro or what but I thought It was prity good.

Hopefully this link should work but if not I think he first posted it on August 7th.

http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=3663183&replies=1

Enjoy reading it. Hopefully I'll write my own Fic sometime.

See you later keep writing it's good. Not to musshy or cheesy just right. I got the feeling of genuine emotions are you basing this on real life?

Len
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Hey alan,
This is great. It's just such a totally diffrent out look on our innocent littlw Queen. I think it's great. A real original idea.