Saga Fool (A Vader vignette)

Title: Fool
Author(s): Killik_Twilight
Timeframe: Right after the events of Revenge of the Sith
Characters: Darth Vader
Genre: Angst
Keywords:
Summary: Vader sits and ponders
Notes: One part of this comes directly from ROTS, and therefore, comes from Mr. Lucas.

Fool

Here you sit, wearing this armor, having it help you breathe, because you aren?t strong enough to do so on your own.

This armor helps you breathe, helps you talk, helps you live, because you are weak.

Fool.

You can still remember the sudden sensation of losing control, of being unable to stop your movement as Obi-wan slices off your arm and legs. You remember slipping, grasping desperately at the loose rock, hoping to find solid ground, as you slide closer and closer to the lava.

You remember Obi-wan pouring his heart out to you, expressing his regrets, his pain, and your own hate-filled reply to him. Those three simple words that burned his heart to ashes.

?I hate you!?

You remember these things, because you are weak, for allowing yourself an iota of regret.

Fool.

Now you are encased in this suit of armor, because you are weak. You are dependent on it now, because you threw away everything you loved for something you thought you wanted?power.

Fool

[fin]

A short and simple vignette. I hope you enjoy it!

KT

 

Hmm. Into the angst, today??

Very poignant.

S.

 

Well, of course I have to click on anything with my big, dark angry guy!

This was wonderful! You truly captured Vader's disdain and disgust for himself. My poor baby!

Loved this line:

This armor helps you breathe, helps you talk, helps you live, because you are weak.

Impressive, most impressive...

 

Short, but very sweet (in a sad sort of way).

Your writing made me relieve that moment in RotS all over again. Very sad to see Anakin, now Darth Vader filled with so much hatred. You caputred and bottled it...extremely powerful.

This part gave me chills -

Now you are encased in this suit of armor, because you are weak. You are dependent on it now, because you threw away everything you loved for something you thought you wanted?power.

 

Wow - that was powerful

Well done,

 

Wow, sounded like it was right out of Vader's head, and that's not necessarily an easy place to be. You captured a possible version of his thoughts and feelings perfectly. I'm impressed.

And I agree with my master--very powerful, and well done.

 

Wow. Very nice. I'll have to keep an eye on you.

 

skywalker64089: Hmm. Into the angst, today??

Very poignant.

S.

Thank you! Um? well, I was listening to The Immolation Scene as I was perusing TF.n, and so I thought I might as well write a vignette while doing so.

VaderLVR64: Well, of course I have to click on anything with my big, dark angry guy!

This was wonderful! You truly captured Vader's disdain and disgust for himself. My poor baby!

Loved this line:

This armor helps you breathe, helps you talk, helps you live, because you are weak.

Impressive, most impressive...

You caught me?I wrote this for ya. Well, I knew you liked Vader, and I just had to write something, so why not about Vader? Thanks!

MirandaFair: Short, but very sweet (in a sad sort of way).

Your writing made me relieve that moment in RotS all over again. Very sad to see Anakin, now Darth Vader filled with so much hatred. You caputred and bottled it...extremely powerful.

This part gave me chills -

Now you are encased in this suit of armor, because you are weak. You are dependent on it now, because you threw away everything you loved for something you thought you wanted?power.

Heh, thanks. Yeah? as I said earlier, I was writing this while listening to the ROTS soundtrack, and it seemed so? fitting.

Glad to see I spooked you. Just kidding.

KELIA: Wow - that was powerful

Well done,

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

SakuraTsukikage: Wow, sounded like it was right out of Vader's head, and that's not necessarily an easy place to be. You captured a possible version of his thoughts and feelings perfectly. I'm impressed.

And I agree with my master--very powerful, and well done.

Aw, thanks! I'd hoped it would seem like that.

Darth_Anderson: Wow. Very nice. I'll have to keep an eye on you.

Wow! Thanks for the compliment!

Again, I'm glad you all enjoyed this, and if my muse cooperates, I might expand on it.

And for those who haven't read this? here's an up for ya.

KT

 

I love this story! Very good work.

 

Great little vig, bud. He had to eventually figure out that he was his own worst enemy.

 

Healer_Leona: Superb viggie. Excellent insight into the masked man.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

pink_saber_girl: I love this story! Very good work.

Thanks!

SkalenFehl: Great little vig, bud. He had to eventually figure out that he was his own worst enemy.

Thanks! Yeah, eventually?

KT

 

This a a wonderful glimps into Vader's mind.

I loved the fact that he see regret as a weakness.



Wonderful work.

Ani-maniac