"For a short time more" (JA-very short fic)

Title: For a short time more
Author: Kid Jedi (aka Obi the Kid)
Rating: G
Summary: 1 year pre-TPM
Category: tiny Angst
Disclaimer: Qui and Obi belong to Lucas, money is made from this.
NOTE: This is my first ever posted fanfic guys, be gentle.


For a short time more, you will walk by my side.

For a short time more, you are my responsibility.

These years toward Kighthood have past so quickly.

Wasn't it only yesterday that you were a young boy, desperate for this dream to become reality?

I have watched you grow from unsure and clumsy to fearless and prideful, my how the years have changed us both my young padawan.

For a short time more, your heart is bonded to mine.

For a short time more, all that I am, I see in you.

After Xantos, there was a loneliness and emptyness in my life that I thought no one could fill. Then you came along and showed me how to trust again and in your words and actions demonstrated that life was worth living.

There is a safety with you that I cannot explain. Life is no longer hollow.

For a short time more, my Obi-wan, I will be your master.

For a short time more, I will walk by your side.

But, I will forever walk with you.


Feedback? like? not like?
Kid Jedi

 

AHHHH !!! My disclaimer should read that:
NO MONEY IS BEING MADE FOR THIS!!!! Hope George didnt see that one.

 

LOL, I think everyone understands what your disclaimer was meant to say.

Very nice work. Almost poetic. Were you planning on writing more short pieces like this?

 

Thanks Alli-wan,

I think this one came out okay, I hope to attempt to write more. My biggest sticking point is coming up with a title. Its tough to come up with a good title for a fic.

 

Just trying to see if a post will show, I know alot of the other threads are having problems !!!

 

Very sweet, very sad.

Everytime I watch TPM I always felt that Qui-Gon knew or at least felt that his time was short.

Very nice Kid Jedi.

 

WOO HOO !!! We're up an running again? I hope.

 

I LOVED it! Well, I guess thats why I put it on my site!

 

Up, up and away!!!!

 

Short, but sweet.

 

Such beautiful writing! Such talent! I can't wait to read more!

 

I think I'm on top of things now!! Only 10 min till....withdrawal sets in!!!! No JC for 2 or more days!!!!