Before "Forbidden Love: Obi-wan and Siri" For "Dear Diary challenge" FINALLY Updated 6/21/09

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by CrystalSaber_1, Jan 7, 2009.

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  1. Jaidyn_Knightfall Jedi Knight

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    Nov 18, 2008
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    Fighting with someone you love? I can imagine how difficult that would be, even if it's only practicing with lightsabers. And sensing each other's moves?:eek: *cues scary music* That would take some getting used to!

    Great job, Crystal. I'm looking forward to seeing how all this works out!
  2. jazjediundercover Jedi Master

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    Oct 26, 2008
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    Sensing each others moves? Wow, I hope they aren't caught out! Then they would be in big trouble!

    Great writing!
  3. CPL_Macja Force Ghost

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    I have a feeling that Qui-Gon knows, but he wouldn't say anything concidering his definent nature towards the councils rules.

    =D=
  4. obsessedwithSW Force Ghost

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    That's so Siri asserting that she won when it was a draw![face_laugh] Qui knows he is too observant not to recognize the familiarity.
  5. Raphire Jedi Grand Master

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    Dec 19, 2008
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    I think Wow about covers my comments as well [face_laugh]
  6. CrystalSaber_1 Jedi Master

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    Thanks for all the comments! :)


    Siri

    Obi-Wan's so damn paranoid. He keeps on saying stuff like, "Don't look at me, people will notice", or ," We can't talk to each other all the time, people will start to suspect us". I guess that I know where he's coming from, but good grief, would he get a grip? He's acting like the whole planet's out to get us or something. I know that we have to be careful, but I think this is kind of...over-kill.

    Obi-Wan

    Call me paranoid, but I'm almost positive that Qui-Gon knows something. No, I am positive that he knows something. You should have seen the look on his face when Siri came over and started talking to me during lunch. And when she and I dueled today. And when he found out that she chose me to be her partner for a project we're working on in class. And when- well, you get the idea. It's not that I mind her being around all the time-it's the fact that she's being so careless. Doesn't she understand that we have to be extreamly careful?
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