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Before - Legends "Forbidden Love: Obi-wan and Siri" For "Dear Diary challenge" FINALLY Updated 6/21/09

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by CrystalSaber_1, Jan 7, 2009.

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  1. Jaidyn_Knightfall

    Jaidyn_Knightfall Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Fighting with someone you love? I can imagine how difficult that would be, even if it's only practicing with lightsabers. And sensing each other's moves?:eek: *cues scary music* That would take some getting used to!

    Great job, Crystal. I'm looking forward to seeing how all this works out!
     
  2. jazjediundercover

    jazjediundercover Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Sensing each others moves? Wow, I hope they aren't caught out! Then they would be in big trouble!

    Great writing!
     
  3. CPL_Macja

    CPL_Macja Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I have a feeling that Qui-Gon knows, but he wouldn't say anything concidering his definent nature towards the councils rules.

    =D=
     
  4. obsessedwithSW

    obsessedwithSW Jedi Master star 4

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    That's so Siri asserting that she won when it was a draw![face_laugh] Qui knows he is too observant not to recognize the familiarity.
     
  5. Raphire

    Raphire Jedi Knight star 4

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    I think Wow about covers my comments as well [face_laugh]
     
  6. CrystalSaber_1

    CrystalSaber_1 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Thanks for all the comments! :)


    Siri

    Obi-Wan's so damn paranoid. He keeps on saying stuff like, "Don't look at me, people will notice", or ," We can't talk to each other all the time, people will start to suspect us". I guess that I know where he's coming from, but good grief, would he get a grip? He's acting like the whole planet's out to get us or something. I know that we have to be careful, but I think this is kind of...over-kill.

    Obi-Wan

    Call me paranoid, but I'm almost positive that Qui-Gon knows something. No, I am positive that he knows something. You should have seen the look on his face when Siri came over and started talking to me during lunch. And when she and I dueled today. And when he found out that she chose me to be her partner for a project we're working on in class. And when- well, you get the idea. It's not that I mind her being around all the time-it's the fact that she's being so careless. Doesn't she understand that we have to be extreamly careful?
     
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