SWRPF Archive Force wars 2

~THE FORCE WARS RPG~
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...
STAR WARS
50.000 years after the battle of endor
The Sith rise again
after Master Skywalker?s the jedi academy has no leader
An Sith rises to create his own academy but for dark Jedi
The jedi academy must choose an new leader and defeet the sith.
An new war has begun......THE FORCE WARS

RULES:

- No godmodding (for example: I decided to build ten death stars, destroyed all planets and buyed a super shot gun with which I could easily destroy all ships).
- No more than six characters for a player, unless the limit will be raised.
- No flaming.
- Do not kill other player's characters without their permission.
- In battles, give the opponent time to react, no one-post victories, unless approved beforehand.

Once this RPG has 5 or more players (1 Jedi new JA leader & his padawan) whe can start!
CHARACTER SHEET:

To participate in the RPG, you must just fill in this form:
Name:
Owned by:
Age:
Gender:
Species:
Home Planet:
Affiliation:
Rank:
Appearance-
---Color:
---Length:
---Style:
Eye Color:
Build:
Scars/Birth-marks/Tattoos:
Makeup:
Height:
Other Features:
Clothing:
Armour:
Weapons:
Ship:
---Name:
---Type:
---Length: 5 meters
---Hyper drive:
---Crew:
---Passengers:
---Weapons:
---Cargo:
Personality:
Bio:
-color-

Here are my characters I will be playing with

Name:ka'rath/ Darth Brill
Owned by: theboss2
Age:63
Gender:male
Species:Human/cyborg
Home Planet:N/A(born on a ship)
Affiliation:Sith lord
Rank:Sith lord
Appearance-
---Color: black
---Length:he's bold
---Style: non
Eye Color:Red
Build:Big muscular/strong/cyborg arm
Scars/Birth-marks/Tattoos: non
Makeup:None
Height:5.9
Other Featuresnly one organic arm
Clothing: black sith robes
Armour:none
Weapons:light saber(red)
Ship:
---Name: -
---Type: -
---Length: -
---Hyper drive: no
---Crew: -
---Passengers:-
---Weapons: -
---Cargo: -
Personality:
ka'rath was a very skilled Jedi trained by Jim skywalker himself but after Jim died, ka'rath was left unguided.

he was deadly hurt in an fight with an Darth lord
he lost his arm and had an penetrated lung
To keep him alive the council ordered him to be rebuild
but he could not live with himself.
once an hansom man now an ugly cyborg

a few days later he fell to the dark side.
He did not join a sith lord but created his own sith order on an unknown planet.
from that day on he was called "Darth Brill"
-red-

Name: Noror Geezo
Owned by: theboss2
Age: 45
Gender: male
Species: Tusken
Home Planet: Tatooine
Affiliation: Sith
Rank: aprentice
Appearance-
---Color: unknown
---Length: 5.1
---Style: unknown
Eye Color: unknown
Build: tusken like
Scars/Birth-marks/Tattoos: unknown
Makeup: non
Height: non
Other Features: non
Clothing: tusken cloathing
Armour: non
Weapons: modified Gaffi Stick with lightsaber at the back
Ship:
---Name: - khiprrr
---Type: - Bantha
---Length: - 10
---Hyper drive: - no
---Crew: - no
---Passengers: - no
---Weapons: - no
---Cargo: - what ever is in the bags
Personality: no fear
Bio: An intelligent and Force sensitive Tusken, Noror was found by Darth Brill on Tatooine shortly after he left the Jedi Order. He was trained by Brill and uses a modified Gaffi Stick as his weapon.
-chocolate-

 

Isn't this exactly the same as the one that was just closed down? I would probably PM a mod, and get their advice on how to improve it.