Beyond - Legends **Full Circle*** - A very, very dark K/J short story!

OMG...it's happened, I succumed to the Dark Side, I actually wrote a K/J viggie! What's wrong with me?

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Title: Dark One
Author(s): Elfsheen
Timeframe: Post Star by Star
Characters: Jaina, Kyp
Genre: mystery
Summary: Jaina succumbs to the Dark Side, will Kyp be able to help her?
Notes: the song used in this fic is by Within Temptation ? Ice Queen
Disclaimers: I don?t own Star Wars or the NJO or any of the character or the song for that matter, it?s all for fun! That means I?m not making money of it.
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- Full Circle ?


He slammed against the outer wall of the hangar bay, hard. Pain shot up his spine like and arrow and erupted in his head like a super nova. He tried to call on the Force for strength, but darkness was overcoming his senses. The last thing he heard was her voice, not anything like the warm, caring voice he used to know, this voice was cold like ice.

?If they want to play, I can play. I?ll give them a game they?ll never forget. In fact it will be the last game they?ll ever play,?

The darkness set in and he let himself fall back in the blissful place where there was no pain.


When leaves have fallen
And skies turned into grey.
The night keeps on closing in on the day
A nightingale sings his song of farewell
You better hide for her freezing hell


It was like a revelation. Everything was clear. There were no boundaries, rules, values or codes to live by. It was the ultimate freedom. At last she was free to do what she wanted. No one to tell her what was right or wrong. This was right. She felt elevated, strong, sure and the power, oh the power, it was amazing. She could do everything. Everything she wanted. Oh and she knew what she wanted. No one could stop her. She?d made up her mind. She should have done this a lot sooner. Why hadn?t she?

No, she wasn?t going to think of that, not in this moment of celebration. She had defeated the great Jedi Master, Kyp Durron. Too bad he didn?t want to follow her. They would?ve made a great team. The best this galaxy ever had seen, and will ever see. But he hadn?t. He?d decided to stick by the rules, by the code, to the light side. How boring.

But she hadn?t killed him. Oh no, that would have been too easy. No she had plans for him. No one turned her down. Oh the plans she had for him. He would beg her to kill him. He would beg her on his bare knees, but she wouldn?t kill him. No, his punishment was to live. To kill would be too easy. No, she would let all good die and the sickness rise? He would be her servant eventually. They all would.

For now that had to wait. She had other plans. First she would get rid of those organic warrior imbeciles. Really, they were so stupid. How could they have ever thought they could take over? This was her kingdom, if they wanted an empire they had to find their own place. This galaxy was hers and hers alone.

It was ironic; if it all had gone different they would?ve been the perfect allies. However, they had made the so very stupid mistake of killing her brothers. That was unforgivable. Now their fate was sealed. They would have to die.

Painfully.

The Jaina Solo of old was no more.


On cold wings she's coming
You better keep moving
For warmth, you'll be longing
Come on just feel it
Don't you see it?
You better believe it.


She took her revenge, and how. Everything and everyone in her path was killed. Her tactics were brilliant. She used their own tactics against them and beat them at their own game. Millions were sacrificed. Worldships blown up, leaders killed, Vong inhabited worlds purged of their presence. All the while the incredible power of the Force raged through her veins.

They feared her, both the Yuuzhan Vong and the former New Republic

 

Whoa.

 

WOW!
Creepy, dark, I LIKE IT!
That was great! Very interesting. Boy that Kyp is in for something alright

 

Whoa, freaky. [face_shocked] I kind of liked the bait-and-switch you did--just when we thought that Jaina had turned, it turned out that she was just her old dark self. Somehow, I think I knew that she would never turn back--she was too far fallen.

Chilling, and yet good. I like.

-duskwings

 

Very nice.

 

VERY good. Unexpected. But good.

 

Very cool Elfsheen! Very interesting ficlet.

~~Jilly

 

KKKKKKKKKKKKKYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!! ...poor Kyp!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor, poor Kyp... screw the galaxy, Kyp needs our pity...

 

Whoa! Very intense story. I was so sure that the dream was a reality. And then Kyp realizes it wasn't.

 

What I want to say would get me banned, so let me just stick with "woah" and "wow" for now. Well Elfsheen, your are officially more evil then I am.

 

Wow, so many replies so soon, wouldn't have expected that in the weekend.

Jedi_Jaina_Durron - Whoa indeed! Whoa is an understatement. I actually scared myself writing this...

Mertroid - Creepy and dark it is. there are no other words for this fic, except maybe evil. I'm glad you liked it. I say this a lot, but it means I did something right!

duskwings - Would you believe me if I said I was actually aiming for a happy end? But somewhere along the way I got evil Don't be so sure about Jaina being too far gone, she's only gone a few months, Darth Vader was gone for years [face_misschief] Who knows, this might actually get a sequel...

Grand Admiral Wettengel - Thank you!

Delaya - Thanks, yes unexpected is yet another understatement

JainaDurron - Thanks Jilly!

Kyp_side_of_TheForce -
Oh yes, Kyp can be pitied alright. I even felt pity for him writing this.

Adalia-Durron - Your Kyp? [face_misschief] He'll be no one's Kyp in this story And there'll be no killing. Killing someone is much too easy when there's a thing called torture, heavenly, blissfully torture

JediMasterKobe - You and me both, Kobe. Until a devious thought entered my mind and did its work.

the_jedi_princess - Right now I want to know what it is that would get you banned

Officially more Evil? A few months ago I would have said there was no such thing as Evil, but after this, I'm not so sure.

 

... heavenly, blissfully torture, Elfsheen? Isn't that a bit of an oxymoron?... oh, wait, I forgot how sadistic we all are...

 

oxymoron? uhm..I'm afraid you got me there, whddaya mean? But you're right, we're all very sadistic, especially when it comes to writing stories.

 

No but if only it was a dream for Kyp
But it wasn't! How horrifying! RUN KYP!

 

Ha, but there's nowhere to run if it is all in your mind. Is it real...or not? Ohhh the possiblities. I love GL for inventing the Force. It makes so many things possible

Oh the torture I'm going to think up? Why die if there are so many wonderous tortures

I'm on a roll here.

 

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!



BAD JAINA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DIE JAINA!!!!!!!!!!

WAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

POOR KYPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*sobbs*

IT'S EVEN WORSE THEN WHAT I WROTE!!!!!!!!!



HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO POOR KYP?!?!?!?!??!!

*sobbs*

*runs for the closet*

*drags out lotsa lightsabers*

*picks up as many as she can*

*ignites them and thows them at Jaina*

*watches as Jaina is cut to ribbons*

POOR KYPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

POOR KYP!!!!!!!

*sobbs some more*

 

You're right; that is very dark.

 

very nice job, Elfsheen very similar to the setting of Helpless, actually ...

anyway, very dark poor Kyp so torturable....poor guy can't catch a break

whoops....this is TJF, btw...i forgot to logoff of y2's account...

 

Wow, that was amazing. Amazingly creepy, amazingly dark. Just plain cool!

The song went very well with the story, added a sort of chilling undertone. But one thing stands out in my mind above all. POOR KYP!

Great job!

 

Agent_Jaid - Uhm, do you need tissues? Or help? Interesting reaction though. Where did you get all the lightsabers?

Star-Lead - Yes it is!

Mara_Jade_FSS - Thanks TJF. Like i alreay told you over PM, I didn't write this with Helpless in mind. I didn't write this with anything in mind. Great minds think alike

Princess1 - Thanks Princess! Yes, the song is very creepy, but in a way also very beautiful. Depends on how you listen!

 

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To quote the infamous Keanu:

Whoa.


Dana