Future Can Save the PastAU-Ani/Padme-AOTC/ Luke/Leia-ROTJ---Note from Author

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jeanne_Skywalker, Nov 16, 2001.

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  1. Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master

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    Apr 24, 2000
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    NOT letting this Die.

  2. Jeanne_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Nov 15, 2001
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    Thank you all for your support. I'm sorry I've neglected this story for so long. It's been a long year. I'm in grad school and find I spend my writing time on research papers. I'll try to do better, thanks for all your support! I'll see what I can do as far as a post!

    Jeanne
  3. pat_skywalker39 Jedi Knight

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    Jan 5, 2004
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    I'll Up this because it's a great story, so don't give up!
  4. dolphingirl2018 Jedi Youngling

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    Oct 31, 2004
    This is a wonderful story Jeanne! Can't wait to read more!!! Keep up the good work!!!!

    -The Dolphin Girl:)
  5. kateydidnt Jedi Master

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    Nov 11, 2004
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    humph, not finished! You're as bad as me about updateing.
  6. Alethia Jedi Master

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    Feb 13, 2005
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    Well, it's been almost two years since you last updated...

    And I'd really like to see another post. This is excellent. I like the way you've portrayed the characters and I want to see how you believe the characters will deal with the situation. I don't think that getting Palpatine out of office is as easy as it sounds...and I'd love to see more of the A/P relationship. I liked the talk between Anakin and Obi-Wan and Yoda too.

    So please, if at all possible, continue? I'd hate to see this die...
  7. Jeditheskyisblue Jedi Master

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    Mar 17, 2001
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    I don't believe I've read this before. I liked it and even though it isn't finished.
  8. Jeanne_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Nov 15, 2001
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    Dear Readers -

    Thank you so much for your comments and support. I plan to finish this as soon as I get through some Doctoral Exams next month. It has been a rough 2 years since I last posted - lots of papers, classes and not a lot of free time. Keep bugging me - I'll post. ;)

    Jeanne
  9. DarthBrian82 Jedi Youngling

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    May 8, 2005
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    please you must finish this I feel like a fish on a hook
  10. Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master

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    Apr 24, 2000
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    glad you're going to finish this! I think you should repost it on the new boards. You'll get new readers and it would be easier to start over by reposting. Plus, this board is almost dead (<<<<classic fan fiction>>>>>) since most stories are completed, nearly completed or abandoned.

    Just a suggestion! :)

  11. Jeanne_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Nov 15, 2001
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    After how many years, I plan to finally finish this story!! Thank you to those who have continued to up and encourage this story. Of course now that we have episode 3 - it changes perception - but I hope to keep this all separate!! Look for a post in the next week. I'm done with Darth School FOREVER and can now get back to this!

    Jeanne
  12. sithrules70 Jedi Padawan

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    May 28, 2005
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    im not asking you,im begging you,i need at least a couple more chapters,as soon as you can.
  13. sithrules70 Jedi Padawan

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    update soon please ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡ and i think you already said it but dont let ROTS change your ideas,please keep it separated.
  14. Lucid_Lady Jedi Padawan

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    Sep 28, 2002
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    Just found this, I did. Enjoy it, I am. Continue, I wish you will. [face_whistling]
  15. Jeanne_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Nov 15, 2001
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    AFTER A LONG WAIT MY DEAR READERS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>HERE IT IS!!!

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    Chapter 22

    Anakin awoke at dawn as the sun danced through the living room window. He and Padme had dozed off on the couch together - he remembered they were talking - and were so tired from the trip - and Padme didn't want to be alone. Anakin slid off the couch trying not to disturb Padme - force new she needed the rest. He stood up and gazed down at her "How could I give it all up, how could I let myself lose her? I must be strong - so strong - I must shake all my doubts and all my demons"

    He approached the window and stood in meditation - feeling the warm sun as it rose to dawn the new day. He saw things, the future perhaps. He saw Palpatine - and all of a sudden he could feel the dark cloud that surrounded him - then he saw Padme - she looked older - she was holding a baby - was this Luke? Then he looked closer - no - this was...his grandson? He pulled back his meditations to the present - what was Palpatine going to do? He must be very powerful - and what of Dooku? Would he be at Palpatine's side at the first sign of them being discovered? Anakin meditated on the possibilities. He felt a presence join him - Obi-Wan was up and at his side. //Don't dwell on it Padawan - we must focus on the present - the council will know what to do. Thank the force for revealing this to us before it was too late!//

    Anakin opened his eyes and looked over at Obi-Wan. "You're right Master, and thank the force." Obi-Wan smiled "Now thats more like it - admitting that I'm right! About time you came around..." Anakin smirked, "Now I didn't say you are always right - but I admit you are about half of the time."

    "Half the time - are you crazy? I'm the master remember?" Anakin giggled "Such a master that falls into a nest of Gundarks - or gets captured by a bunch of insects." Obi-Wan retorted - "Oh - and you escaped those insects? Gee - from what I remember you ended up in the same predicament I did..." Anakin raised his finger "Shhh - we'll wake her." Obi-Wan turned to see Padme sleeping on the couch.

    //Well Anakin - I'm starved - lets rustle up some breakfast if we can - you know breakfast in bed might really impress her!//

    //Not if its your cooking Master! Allow me//

    Anakin sprinted to the kitchen and got busy. Not much but he could probably manage it. Obi-Wan stood in the doorway and watched his padawan - "You can fight with two lightsabers but you can't make toast without burning it." Anakin shot a glare at Obi-Wan - "If you didn't have the toaster set on char I might have been more successful - thankfully we have other choices." Anakin assembled a tray and took it into Padme who was beginning to wake up to the scent of burning bread.

    As she opened her eyes - Padme saw Anakin standing over her with a big grin - "Here you are my dear - breakfast in bed...er on the couch." Padme smiled - "Anakin - how thoughtful - I hope you cooked it." She had heard horror stories about Obi-Wan's disasters. "Oh don't worry - he just observed and lectured."

    "Ok - I'll leave you two alone - I've got to go to the council meeting - its time to get down to business. I suggest you two remain here - keep the holo open - we may have to call all Jedi to this - otherwise stay put. Senator - I recommend you summon Organa here - just to let him know of the situation - you can both brief him." With that Obi-Wan left for the Council chambers.

    "I guess all we can do is wait." Anakin said.

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    (PALPATINE'S OFFICE)

    Palpatine is pacing his office - Something is terribly out of place. I cannot see the future - what is happening? I must summon my apprentice. Perhaps I should go to the far side of the planet. I sense betrayal - but by whom?

    Palpatine orders that he is to have no visitors and doubles the guards outside his office. He then summons Darth Tyranus on a private channel but his message breaks up shortly after he starts transmission. What is happening? He hoped Tyranus
  16. Chewie-Fan Jedi Youngling

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    Jul 2, 2005
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    Long wait, but worth it!!! Keep writing.
  17. Alethia Jedi Master

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    Feb 13, 2005
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    You updated! Wonderful. I like how people are starting to sense something. By the way, you might want to update the first post and titlebar to reflect that you have updated.
  18. Jeanne_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Nov 15, 2001
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    Thanks Chewie fan and Alethia. I tried to update the original post but because this is in the archive section - I can't do that. I will contact the moderator and see if I can get it updated. I should have another post up by next week. I'm on vacation right now so not much time to write.

    Thanks for reading!!!;)
  19. skywalker64089 Jedi Knight

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    Jan 16, 2005
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    Hey, will you be writing a sequel to this???

    S.
  20. Jei-El Jedi Master

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    Jun 10, 2005
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    UP!

    More plllleeeeeeeasssssse??
  21. Chewie-Fan Jedi Youngling

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    Jul 2, 2005
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    Hey, Jeanne, I just wanted to give you some encouragement. This is one of the best time travel stories I've read on the boards. I hope you're still working on it!!
  22. Lea-El Jedi Master

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    Aug 13, 2005
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    Just wanted to let you know that there are still interested readers out here patiently hoping for a new post.

    Lea-El
  23. lstevens Jedi Youngling

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    Jul 31, 2005
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    Just found this story today. What a great idea. Please continue to post.





  24. Falcon Chosen One

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    Feb 7, 2002
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    your back your back

    yes and a post you bring oh and I can't wait you have to post more soon yes :D
  25. Jeanne_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Nov 15, 2001
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    More to come soon - I've started my first job out of grad school and am now just catching up on real life. I will be finishing the story ... hmmmm a sequel would be fun! Perhaps I can write it a little faster than this one too! I will hopefully have an update in the next week or so. Thanks to my loyal readers for all of your encouragement!
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