Growing up (JA)

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  1. Aayla Jedi Knight

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    Point of time: Obi-wan is 21
    Place: Jedi temple

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    Qui-Gon's POV*

    I had just said good night to a friend of mine and started walking toward Obi-Wan's quarters to tell him good night. Obi-Wan and I haven't had alot of time together so while I was down there I thought I would suggest a outing or something that could get us away from the temple for a while. I knocked on Obi-Wan's door and when I didn't get an answer I slowly walked in. The lights were off and the only light was the moonlight that was coming in from the window. I could hear faint noises coming from Obi-Wan's room.

    "Obi-Wan?" I slowly opened the door to his bedroom and what I saw in his room took the air right out of my lungs.
  2. JoeyKenobi Jedi Knight

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    Oh, please, please, please post more soon. What did he see? I can't stand the anticipation. Great story so far.
  3. Amithyst_Blade Jedi Master

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    OH MY FORCE... we all know what's going on, so whose wtth him?!? Messa wants to know!

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  4. Aayla Jedi Knight

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    Qui-Gon's POV*

    I saw Obi-wan AND a girl on his bed. I was more shocked then angered. I saw Obi-Wan look up at me from what he was doing and almost looked afraid.

    "Obi-Wan.... can I talk to you....After you get dressed," I added as he started to get up. I saw him nod slightly and the girl sat up slowly and rapped the covers around herself. I walked out and waited in the living area for obi-wan. Finally he walked out as he pulled a t-shirt over his head.
    "Mind explaining what happened in there?" I asked being as calm as I could.

    " No," Obi-wan replied quietly.

    "No?" I asked.

    " I don't want to 'Explain' what I did in there..." Obi-wan said looking down.

    " That's not what I ment..." I said slightly irritated.

    "Oh..."

    " How did it happen?"

    " I just happened.... I didn't mean for it to happen..."

    " Obi-wan that excuse is getting old... Get her out of there and we'll talk about this in the morning," I said still being irritated with him.

    " Can't I just finish what I was doing--?"

    " No! Get rid of her and that's an order!" I said cutting him off then walked out.
  5. Jedi_Sari Jedi Master

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    Hahaha "Can't I just finish was I was doing"

    Thats great
  6. Aayla Jedi Knight

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  7. Aayla Jedi Knight

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    Qui-Gon's POV*


    I met up with Obi-Wan back in his quarters. I walked in and saw him sitting on the couch. As soon as I walked in he stood up.

    " Master I'm sorry it just kinda happened!" Obi-wan said seeming to beg for forgiveness.

    " Obi-Wan drop it! I am not very happy with you right now!" I said not holding back the anger I felt right now about Obi-Wan.

    I watched as Obi-Wan took a step back when I yelled at him.

    "But--" Obi-wan stammered

    " Obi-Wan shut it right now!" I tryed to remain calm but it wasn't working. " I cannot believe you did this!" I paced back and forth.

    " Master please listen..." I heard Obi-Wan beg slightly.

    " Bet you don't even remember her name!"

    " THAT WASN'T EXACTLY WHAT WAS ON MY MIND AT THE MOMENT!" I heard Obi-wan snap back.

    I just glared at him.

    " I'm old enough to make my own decisions!"

    " You are still a padawan and when you are knighted THEN you can make your own decisions but as of right now you are in deep poodoo!"

    I saw some hurt in Obi-wan's eyes and some anger as he got up and walked to his room slamming the door shut.
  8. Jedi_Sari Jedi Master

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  9. Aayla Jedi Knight

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    should I continue with this? This is gonna be kinda of a mini series if I continue with it....
  10. Jedi_Sari Jedi Master

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  11. Aayla Jedi Knight

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    Not a whole lot of readers 'eh? :S
  12. shanobi Jedi Master

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    I'm here :) Do keep going, please.
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