Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Antigone, May 13, 2004.
is the master who I think he is?
First of all, you need two pages, so here goes.
Second, a great post! I'm worried about Obi-Wan. You need to take care of him right now. PLEASE?
Uh oh scary post... makes ya wonder if the 'fixing it' has to do with the dreams? Ummm? Great postie!
Very mysterious and disturbing, but very well written too.
I assume the Law of Conservation of Angst will apply here shortly!
What do you mean by "Fix it?" Scary thought! I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait for more!
*gulps* i have a very bad feeling about this.
Now I'm wondering what was so important about the child or was the kid a ruse to possibly get close to do something to Obi-Wan? The tiredness doesn't seem normal, though I should talk. If left to my own devices, I'd sleep all day and be up all night. *chuckles*
Hopefully more will be revealed in the next installment or two.
Oh, I'm hooked, now. And somehow I don't think "fix it" bodes well for Obi-Wan.
ok, i'm hooked....i'm really hooked now....i took the bait!! now update!!
ooh...that rhymes, doesn't it??
What's wrong with Obi?
I've got a bad feeling about this
Pretty tin foil....shiny....bendy....oooooo.
Anyway,poor bad guy. He's gonna die. Poor Obi. Wonder why he's so tired.
Bad author! Staying away for so long.
The next part is almost finished. While doing some spring/summer cleaning, I stumbled upon the original notebook that I used when this fic first came up. To my delight, I had already made detailed outlines of three fourths of the fic. Joy, rapture, less need for actual thought in the present.
I truly am sorry for my absence, though. My mother went in for surgery at a hospital about two hours from my house, so with all the driving to see her, then helping out a bit more around the house both before and after she came home, taking over the driving responsibilities (and with a fifteen year old, socialite for a younger brother, one can imagine how much time I now spend in a car) along with a computer which ate my first draft of this (one of the most discouraging things, imo, that could happen to an author), I just haven't churned out the rest of the chapter.
But, until then, replies.
dianethx - Thanks, Hon. Hehe, you're definitely right about one thing. He is in for it.
jeday - Welcome!, thank you, and, now, if I told you that there would be little point in this Obi-torture I have planned.
PK - If you're thinking what I'm thinking...
AnakinsHeir - I believe there's an old progression first adapted to fanfiction by Lady Vorgunby. fear-->anger-->hate-->suffering-->angst-->mush-->happy readers Not nearly enough suffering to move onto angst, not yet, and without angst, mush cannot come. But don?t worry, he?ll be taken care of?just, perhaps, not in a mush-filled way.
Kynstar - Thanks for reading!
LE - Many thanks, and of course.
jedimommie2 Hehe. I?m glad you?re enjoying it so far. Thanks for reading!
jacen200015 - I think quite a few people share your trepidation Or at least they should, Hehe.
Vampi_Digitalwytch - hmmm, interesting thought? I?m the same way, though I?m not sure I?d wake up at night either.
Opal - Hehe. What would be the point of a fic in which anything/everything went right for our favorite padawan?
waterlilee - And some people use worms for bait. Not me! LoL - thanks for reading, Hon. Update on the way.
ca_tron - LoL! Are things that predictable after two posts?
Mmmm kay. Sleep now, post later. Yes.
Don't worry, Antigone. Good fics are always worth the wait.
I hope your Mom is doing better. I'll be here waiting.
*tosses away tin foil*
*looks around for something else*
*picks up ==*
Wonder what this is.
*sees a button on the side*