Before Half Stranger (Obi/Qui) - - Updated 5/23

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Antigone, May 13, 2004.

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  1. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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    Dec 31, 2001
    star 5
    creepy

    is the master who I think he is?
  2. AnakinsHeir Jedi Knight

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    May 2, 2004
    star 3
    First of all, you need two pages, so here goes.

    Second, a great post! I'm worried about Obi-Wan. You need to take care of him right now. PLEASE?
  3. Kynstar Jedi Grand Master

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    Mar 2, 2004
    star 5
    Uh oh scary post... makes ya wonder if the 'fixing it' has to do with the dreams? Ummm? ;) Great postie! :D
  4. LuvEwan Jedi Master

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    Mar 24, 2002
    star 4
    Yikes! [face_shocked]

    Very mysterious and disturbing, but very well written too. ;)

    I assume the Law of Conservation of Angst will apply here shortly! :D
  5. jedimommie2 Jedi Master

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    May 3, 2004
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    What do you mean by "Fix it?" Scary thought! I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait for more!
  6. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Jan 11, 2002
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    *gulps* i have a very bad feeling about this.
  7. Vampi_Digitalwytch Jedi Knight

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    Apr 11, 2004
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    Interesting....

    Now I'm wondering what was so important about the child or was the kid a ruse to possibly get close to do something to Obi-Wan? The tiredness doesn't seem normal, though I should talk. If left to my own devices, I'd sleep all day and be up all night. *chuckles*

    Hopefully more will be revealed in the next installment or two.
  8. Opal Jedi Master

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    Nov 17, 2003
    star 4
    Oh, I'm hooked, now. And somehow I don't think "fix it" bodes well for Obi-Wan.
  9. waterlilee Jedi Padawan

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    Apr 23, 2004
    ok, i'm hooked....i'm really hooked now....i took the bait!! now update!!

    ooh...that rhymes, doesn't it??
  10. Sticks-Solo Jedi Knight

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    May 11, 2001
    star 2
    Fix it!

    What's wrong with Obi?
    I've got a bad feeling about this :(
  11. ca_tron Jedi Knight

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    Dec 6, 2002
    star 3
    Pretty tin foil....shiny....bendy....oooooo.


    Anyway,poor bad guy. He's gonna die. Poor Obi. Wonder why he's so tired.
  12. Antigone Jedi Knight

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    Feb 24, 2002
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    Bad author! Staying away for so long.

    :)

    The next part is almost finished. While doing some spring/summer cleaning, I stumbled upon the original notebook that I used when this fic first came up. To my delight, I had already made detailed outlines of three fourths of the fic. Joy, rapture, less need for actual thought in the present.

    I truly am sorry for my absence, though. My mother went in for surgery at a hospital about two hours from my house, so with all the driving to see her, then helping out a bit more around the house both before and after she came home, taking over the driving responsibilities (and with a fifteen year old, socialite for a younger brother, one can imagine how much time I now spend in a car) along with a computer which ate my first draft of this (one of the most discouraging things, imo, that could happen to an author), I just haven't churned out the rest of the chapter.

    So, soon.

    But, until then, replies.

    dianethx - Thanks, Hon. Hehe, you're definitely right about one thing. He is in for it. ;)

    jeday - Welcome!, thank you, and, now, if I told you that there would be little point in this Obi-torture I have planned. :p

    PK - If you're thinking what I'm thinking...

    AnakinsHeir - I believe there's an old progression first adapted to fanfiction by Lady Vorgunby. fear-->anger-->hate-->suffering-->angst-->mush-->happy readers Not nearly enough suffering to move onto angst, not yet, and without angst, mush cannot come. But don?t worry, he?ll be taken care of?just, perhaps, not in a mush-filled way. [face_devil]

    Kynstar - Thanks for reading!

    LE - Many thanks, and of course.

    jedimommie2 Hehe. I?m glad you?re enjoying it so far. Thanks for reading!

    jacen200015 - I think quite a few people share your trepidation :) Or at least they should, Hehe.

    Vampi_Digitalwytch - hmmm, interesting thought?:D I?m the same way, though I?m not sure I?d wake up at night either.

    Opal - Hehe. What would be the point of a fic in which anything/everything went right for our favorite padawan?

    waterlilee - And some people use worms for bait. Not me! LoL - thanks for reading, Hon. Update on the way.

    Sticks-Solo - [face_devil]

    ca_tron - LoL! Are things that predictable after two posts?

    Mmmm kay. Sleep now, post later. Yes.


  13. LuvEwan Jedi Master

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    Mar 24, 2002
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    Don't worry, Antigone. Good fics are always worth the wait. ;)
  14. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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    Dec 31, 2001
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    I hope your Mom is doing better. I'll be here waiting.
  15. ca_tron Jedi Knight

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    Dec 6, 2002
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    *tosses away tin foil*
    *looks around for something else*
    O_O
    Oooooooooo.
    *picks up ==*
    Wonder what this is.
    *sees a button on the side*
    [face_devil]
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