Hate Leads to Suffering - JA (Not a new story, I just finally found a title)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by greencat336, Aug 9, 2001.

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  1. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    That's not good! Obi's only hope for rescue was just stunned! :eek: Not good!

    Oh well, if it's a cause for more Obi torture, then I'm a happy sick puppy or kitten (Personally I prefer cats...)

    More soon please! :D
  2. KelLarador Jedi Knight

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    I agree surely the Jedi can't be beaten to easily all the time.

    Oh and and the side I should have the first part of Rebel ready for posting by tonight. Keep your eyes peeled.

    Kel
  3. Sarah_K Jedi Master

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    LOL on your altered 'twisted' quote!! You ought to add that to your siggy. ;)

    *starts jotting down a vacation post card for greencat*

    dear greencat,

    good post. can't wait for obi-torture. hope yoda gets to them with help. hope qui isn't as uncontious as whatsherface thinks. hope you're havin' a great time.

    - sarah >^,,^<
  4. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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    Another great post! I wanna be a cat tooo ;)

    My sis Chloe would want to be a dog though *she's a fanatic ;) *
  5. ApprenticeM Jedi Master

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    I'm a kitten!!!!! They're so cute..... :)


    Oh, she's knows what she's doing apparently. This could be a problem......

    So Greencat, I'll just sit back and wait for the next post.........*starts to sharpen claws*
  6. Ginger_Jedi Jedi Grand Master

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    I liked the twisted thing GC...hmm difficult to answer...

    So many sick kittens around here! Ugh, I'm alergic! :p
  7. jedi_master_gimpy Force Ghost

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    I dunno, greencat336...I think we all need counseling classes. ;)

    Nice couple of posts there!! I'm glad Qui wasn't stupid enough to completely follow orders about not telling anyone...I just hope the Jedi will be able to follow all the hyperspace jumps. Of course, if it takes them a little while I won't complain or anything....;)
  8. Jedi Girl of Corellia Manager Emeritus

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    Sick kitties? Please read my sig for an explaination why I prefer to remain a sick puppy :D

    GC, excellent so far, can't wait until the next installment of Obi's worst nighmare.
  9. Healer_Leona Manager Emeritus

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    Don't know how I managed to miss this thread. I'm loving it greencat. Especially how Obi-Wan just goes out for a day outside the temple and gets kidnapped and tortured. Maybe he'll learn to stay hidden in his room!! :D :D

    Hmmmm, just what do the mysterious kednappers have planned for Qui-Gon's fine body?? ;) ;)

    Post soon, post often.
  10. ThatJediGirl Jedi Master

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  11. Arihana_Moonmist Jedi Padawan

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    I just found this and so far it sounds great. I can't wait till the next post. :)
  12. Jedi Girl of Corellia Manager Emeritus

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  13. Sarah_K Jedi Master

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    Up!

    When is she gonna be back?

    Sarah >^,,^<
  14. Sarah_K Jedi Master

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    It's tomorrow.

    Up!

    Sarah >^,,^<
  15. greencat336 Jedi Grand Master

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    Sorry for the delay in posting this. I truly intended to write the next part while on the family vacation, but it just didn't get done. I did get the next part of A Sigh is Just A Sigh written and posted on Monday.

    On top of that, the school year started Monday, so I'm back at work. They had my schedule messed up and we are one teacher short in the special education department . . . Okay, none of you really care about all that, and it only effects you in that my posts won't be quite as regular as I have tried to be in the past . . . :) Sorry again.


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    In the past week, Obi-Wan?s captors had only bothered to feed him twice. Each day they had provided only a small amount of drinking water. He was lightheaded, his throat parched. The slashes on his back were half healed, the scabs itching and pulling whenever he moved. The only positive thing was they had left him alone after the one beating.

    Obi-Wan spent his time meditating. He sent the Force flowing through his wounds, accelerating their healing and fighting off infection. Over the training bond, the Padawan had reached out to his Master, but the distance between them had been too great for contact.

    Today, however, he had at long last sensed Qui-Gon?s presence coming closer. Obi-Wan knew it was only a matter of time before his Master found him.

    The door to his cell swung open. Armed guards escorted him down the corridor to the room where he had been whipped days before. Fear began to build in the teen. He did his best to release the feeling into the Force, but was only partially successful.

    Obi-Wan was pushed down onto a waist high table, his arms and legs strapped down, spread eagle. The pressure of this position made the wounds on his back ache. He shook slightly, from pain and anxiety. Time slipped by and nothing happened. The guards stood unmoving by the door. Obi-Wan almost wished that whatever they planned on doing to him, they would begin. The uncertainty of waiting was a torture in and of itself.




    Qui-Gon became aware of a repetitive slapping of his face. As reality once more came into focus around him, he discovered he had been tied to a chair. This was not an entirely unexpected event, considering he had voluntarily surrendered himself to Obi-Wan?s kidnappers. What was unexpected was the man standing before him.

    ?Surprised to see me, Jinn?? the man asked with an evil grin.

    ?Yes. You should still be in prison, Vanson,? replied Qui-Gon.

    ?Five consecutive life sentences is what I was given, because of you. Every year I spent locked up I thought of nothing but how to escape and how I would repay you. Waiting for my chance, plotting . . . and now, you are the prisoner. Along with your apprentice,? gloated Vanson.

    ?Release Obi-Wan. I followed your instruction,? said Qui-Gon.

    Vanson sneered, ?Torturing you wouldn?t cause you half the pain as watching the boy being hurt. Although your turn will come. I will have my revenge!?

    Flicking a switch on the wall, Vanson activated a large view screen on the wall Qui-Gon was facing. The image of Obi-Wan tied to a table appeared.

    ?If you are thinking of using any of your Jedi tricks, be warned that the boy will be dead long before you get to him. There are cameras all over this complex. If you try to escape, orders are that the boy is to be instantly killed,? warned Vanson.

    ?Since you are planning on killing him anyway, how will that stop me?? asked Qui-Gon.

    Vanson laughed, ?You won?t risk it on the off chance I won?t kill him. Perhaps I really won?t. As long as I keep him alive, he?s the perfect tool with which to torment you. I spent 12 years of my life locked in a cage like an animal. I think you owe me at least 12 years of your life. It will be interesting to see how many different ways the boy can be tortured without actually killing him. And you get to watch each and every method.?

    With a Force enhanced voice, Qui-Gon said, ?Order them to release the boy.?

    For the briefest of moment
  16. ApprenticeM Jedi Master

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    [face_shocked] That's not good............... So Obi torture's coming in the next post? :D
  17. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    What a nasty place to stop!

    As always, I find I have to say these two words... Poor Obi!!!!

    More soon please! :D
  18. Sarah_K Jedi Master

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    S'okay, greencat, we understand! All you need to do is tell us and you'd be surprised as how simpathetic us Obi-Torture fans can be! *wonders why greencat is looking at her funny*

    Speaking of Obi-Torture... how many different ways CAN you think of torturing him without killing him? No really, I'm curious. ;)

    Sarah >^,,^<
  19. Artemis_Silverbow Jedi Master

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    I cannot believe I missed that post [face_shocked] and I was watching the thread too! Well, at least I've read it now, and I have one thing to say, greencat *clears throat* puuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrr.....meow! ;)
  20. greencat336 Jedi Grand Master

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    Apprentice M -- The next story post will be Obi-Torture.

    KenobisGirl -- I will post it in the next couple of days.

    cbjedi -- Thanks for the good luck wish!

    Sarah K -- Actually, I've found Obi-Torturers to be a very friendly, sweet bunch of people. Although Obi & Qui might not agree :D

    As for your question, lots of ways. I have a degree in history and often get inspiration from the nasty things people have done to each other through time --> The Spanish Inquistion (bet you didn't expect that), Witch trials, the Reformation, Crusades, Chinese Imperial Court interegations, Settler/American Indian wars, the Holocaust, etc.

    Kind of depressing, actually. Sorry, but you did ask. I'm one of those people that can't stand not to answer a question that has been asked . . . [face_blush]
  21. Maija Darklighter Jedi Knight

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    *another sick puppy walks in* Ooooh Ooooh! Did i hear Obi-torture? Yea! I'm a expert on Obi and Palpy torture(expecially Palpy). :D

    I wonder, are you going to use chinese water torture on Obi? for those who dont know what da the heck is Chinese water torture is... its a method where they strap the victim to a chair and let water drip rithmically toward the victim head till he goes insane. its perfect to pry some information that you want from the victim.
    :D

    Greencat, I also study various type of torture for that peroid(you know the spainard, Eropean, Witchcraft type torture) but I must amit its guesome. *shudder*
  22. Obi the Kid Jedi Master

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    HOLD IT! You guys are so sad. Wanting the poor kid to be tortured all the time. You should be ashamed of yourself! Whoops! Who said that? Oh, my evil twin!!!! GET AWAY!! Okay, okay..count me in for wanting OBI-TORTURE!!!!! :)
  23. ThatJediGirl Jedi Master

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  24. Kaylla_Norn_II Jedi Knight

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    yeah well if you don't mind answereing this question greencat it would be greatly appriciated... well two questions actually... 1) Why is it you seem to engage in so much fan torture when it's suppose to be Obi torture? 2) When is that new post going to make it's apperance?
  25. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NOT GOOD! Hey they need a major helping hand here. ;)
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