Hate Leads to Suffering - JA (Not a new story, I just finally found a title)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by greencat336, Aug 9, 2001.

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  1. _Cerasi_ Jedi Knight

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    Aug 23, 2001
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    Somehow I got sucked into reading this, and while I am enjoying it (wincing, but enjoying) I don't think I'll read another Obi-torture. But I'll definitely finish this one. *shudders* It's good.
  2. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    Jul 16, 2001
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    pleasee let quigon gets to obiwan and save him and soon i don't want obiwan tortured any morez he is hurting soo badly, but thats just me keep up the awesome writing and post soon....... :)
  3. Syntyche Jedi Padawan

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    May 3, 2001
    wow, greencat! You have so many stories going I have trouble keeping track of them -- so I appreciate the easy-to-remember title. ;)

    The oil torture was so awful ... I cringed just reading it. please send help for obi soon. :) (er, but not too soon ...)
  4. ApprenticeM Jedi Master

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    Apr 10, 2001
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    Hold on Obi!!! Helps on the way!! Or ,huh, it will be soon.......
  5. Abbi_Cee Jedi Master

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    Jul 3, 2000
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    Boiling oil! Ouch! :( Having had a few oil (grease) burns I know how that hurts. I had an ancestor who was dumped into a pot of boiling oil, not content to go alone he apparantly took his two guards with him. Well, that's what my mother said anyway. Wonderful bedtime stories she told me. ;) I like the image of Tahl, Mace and Yoda combining forces to find Qui-Gon. I only hope they can get there in time.
  6. Jane Jinn Jedi Grand Master

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    Jan 12, 2000
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    That's a good idea, three Jedi working together in the Force to find Qui-Gon. Now, go, rescue him and Obi-Wan, the poor fritter--I mean, the poor critter.
  7. Healer Apprentice Lina Force Ghost

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    Jun 1, 2000
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    WAH HA HA! That was hilarious, Jane!
  8. Ginger_Jedi Jedi Grand Master

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    Cool post! More soon! I need more... [face_devil]
  9. Sarah_K Jedi Master

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    Jun 10, 2001
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    And they're off! Yehaaaa!

    Can't wait for more!

    Sarah >^,,^<
  10. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Jul 10, 2001
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    Greencat, where are ya? Don't forget, Obi dearest is due for some more torture very soon...

    More soon please! :D
  11. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    Well at least third degree burns burn away some of the nerves. That should lessen his pain a little.
  12. ThatJediGirl Jedi Master

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    Mar 11, 2001
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    They are getting closer Obi- just hang on boy! [face_love]
  13. greencat336 Jedi Grand Master

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    Jan 27, 2001
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    Hi there! Sorry for the continuing delay in getting a post to you. I had tortured myself into a corner. . . I wanted to torment Obi some more, but with the wounds I'd given him, he would have too easily died. So what to do? I finally figured it out and am in the process of writting it up. I should be able to post it soon. It is fairly twisted and will most definetly create Qui-angst.

    Thank you for your patience!
  14. ApprenticeM Jedi Master

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    Oooooo....Twisted? That sounds good.... :D
  15. jedi_master_gimpy Force Ghost

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  16. padawan3 Jedi Master

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  17. greencat336 Jedi Grand Master

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    What sort of demented creature am I? Not only do I come up with a sick, cruel torment but I feel a sense of contented pride at it. There is some good angst too, if I do say so myself. [face_mischief]

    The only defense I can offer is that I would never, ever want this to happen to somebody in real life . . .


    Enough of my rambling, on with the show, my twisted kitties and puppies! :D

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    Qui-Gon had been dozing, still chained to the chair, when movement on the holovid caught his attention. Guards had entered Obi-Wan?s cell. Two of them grabbed the teen by his burn covered arms and dragged him away. The shock of harsh contact with his injures brought Obi-Wan out of his healing trance. His Padawan cried out in pain at the rough handling, reaching out wordlessly to Qui-Gon through their bond.

    Qui-Gon sent reassurances to the youngster. His Padawan was pulled out the cell, beyond the range of the camera. Concentrating, the Jedi Master could track Obi-Wan?s presence. He was so frustratingly close.

    The fear Qui-Gon could sense from his Padawan was now mixed with confusion. Minutes later, Qui-Gon felt Obi-Wan?s rush of relief as the pain from his burns was numbed.

    <What is happening?> Qui-Gon asked his Padawan.

    <They have placed me in a bacta tank.> replied Obi-Wan. The boy?s curiosity at why he was being healed was a very distant second to the fact that it was happening.

    A bacta tank? puzzled Qui-Gon. Why would Vanson have the wounds he caused healed?

    While Qui-Gon was contemplating this, three guards entered the room. Two aimed blasters at him, while the third unfastened the chains holding him to the chair.

    ?Stand up and put your hand out in front of you,? ordered the guard.

    Moving slowly, his stiff muscles protesting, Qui-Gon complied with the instructions. Wrist binders were fastened on his outstretched arms.

    A packet of emergency rations was tossed next to Qui-Gon. The guards cautiously backed out of the room, never taking their blasters from the Jedi.

    Opening the rations, Qui-Gon hungrily ate. He did not fear poison. If Vanson intended to kill him, he would be much more direct than tainted food.

    After about an hour, Qui-Gon sensed Obi-Wan being removed from the bacta. The last of the cuts from his Padawan?s first beating were gone. The burns were not completely healed, but they were vastly improved. Obi-Wan was also fed emergency rations. The boy was still hungry, but at least he had something in his stomach now.

    Why had their treatment improved, pondered Qui-Gon. It was hardly likely that Vanson had a change of heart. The man had been a brutal pirate, kidnapper and murderer. Mercy was a foreign concept to him. Further, he and Obi-Wan were still prisoners. What game was Vanson playing?

    As if summoned by the Jedi Master?s thoughts, Vanson entered the room accompanied by the three guards Qui-Gon had dealt with earlier. One of the guards pushed a tall post with a metal ring affixed to the upper end, on an antigrav sled. Deactivated, the sled became a base that held the post upright.

    On the holovid, Qui-Gon could see Obi-Wan returned to his cell by the guards. One of the guards had pushed a portable holovid into the room, noted Qui-Gon with some curiosity and apprehension. His Padawan was not restrained by any binders, perhaps their chance at escape had arrived.

    ?Wondering why I had your little apprentice?s hurts taken care of?? asked Vanson.

    Qui-Gon did not reply.

    Vanson smiled, ?of course you do. I told you before, you owe me twelve years. With the things I have in mind, the boy wouldn?t last twelve days if he wasn?t patched up a bit in between. I want you to dread each time your apprentice goes into the bacta. It will mean I?ve decided its time for you to be punished again.

    ?Speaking of which,? Vanson continued, speaking to the guards, ?Tie him up.?

    Same as before, two of the guards covered Qui-Gon with their blasters, while the third approached. Grabbing hold of Qui-Gon?s bound hands, the guard
  18. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Jul 10, 2001
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    Oh, that was soooo nice! Erm... I mean... Poor guy! How brutal! Poor Obi, poor Qui!

    More soon please! :D
  19. ApprenticeM Jedi Master

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    Wow, that was .......wow [face_shocked] Can we have more please?
  20. Abbi_Cee Jedi Master

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    Wow, Vanson is certainly one evil guy! What can he come up with? I shudder to find out. Rescue had better come soon for our guys.
  21. Obi the Kid Jedi Master

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    Apr 13, 2000
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    THAT is SO evil!!!!!! Obi AND Qui torture in one post!!!! More?
  22. jedi_master_gimpy Force Ghost

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    That was WONDERFUL!!!!! Wow, you really drew out the pain in that post greencat, both physical and emotional. Poor Obi-Wan, having to see Qui-Gon go through that and immediately ready to take that pain on himself instead. Poor Qui-Gon, having to go through that and then knowing it's because of him that Obi-Wan takes it upon himself. :(
  23. Ginger_Jedi Jedi Grand Master

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    Jun 4, 2001
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    The description of his back was icky... [face_devil]

    Nice post greencat! Very emotional.
  24. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    Sep 20, 1999
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    Poor Obi. Knowing he could do something to stop his master's beating but being forbiden to do it. Thats heart ache right there.
  25. Jane Jinn Jedi Grand Master

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    That was delightfully evil, everything about it; Qui-Gon getting gagged, Obi-Wan not allowed to count the first two "love taps", everything. Wow. Do I hope they can escape soon? Well...yes...and no...yes...and no...
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