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Saga Haunted: Luke ROTJ songfic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Watcher_of_Dreams, Sep 26, 2004.

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  1. Watcher_of_Dreams

    Watcher_of_Dreams Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Long lost words whisper slowly to me,
    still can?t find what keeps me here.
    When all this time I?ve been so hollow inside,
    I know you?re still there


    Palpatine leers at me, his yellow eyes wild with power. I turn to you, then back to the window, lost, not knowing who to trust. I can feel your eyes watching me, watching my every movement. Why did I have to be the one cursed by life?

    Watching me,
    wanting me,
    I can feel you pull me down.


    The darkness is a power, even I know this. But Father, it is not you. You are my father, still, I can feel you inside your anger. You don?t answer me with words, but a lightsaber blade. I was never the one to be a hero, but this time I must. For you, not me.

    Fearing you,
    loving you,
    I won?t let you pull me down.


    I?ve always adored you Father, but you never knew about me. Did Mother know that you would become so crazed, or was she blinded by her love for you, like me? I have to be strong, and trust in others.

    Hunting you, I can smell you-- Alive, your heart pounding in my head

    Father, you never knew me as a child, but I knew you. You were in my head and heart for eternity. Now that is replaced, but you are still the guardian that I adored and wanted to be like when I was a child. Please, help me.

    Watching me, wanting me, I can feel you pull me down. Saving me, watching me

    Father, I must have reached you with my pain. I don?t know, but as I stood there next to Leia, I felt lost. I wanted to let you know of my gratitude. When I turned and saw you with Obi-Wan and Yoda, the smile that crossed my face was almost lost in tears.

    Thank you Anakin Skywalker, Darth Vader, Father
     
  2. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 29, 2004
    Veery interesting! I like it!

    But, that song gives me the creeps.
     
  3. kristeh

    kristeh Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 24, 2003
    That was really beautiful and sad! I loved it!

    Kristeh
     
  4. Gina

    Gina Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 3, 2003
    Excellent!

    I was never the one to be a hero, but this time I must. For you, not me.

    Loved this line.

     
  5. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jun 3, 2002
    That was good, I really enjoyed it.
     
  6. LaYa_

    LaYa_ Jedi Knight star 5

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    Jul 21, 2003
    Great songfic :)
     
  7. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Feb 5, 2004
    Beautifully done! A great songfic!
     
  8. StarFighter5

    StarFighter5 Jedi Master star 4

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    Jul 25, 2003
    Very well written and I love that song!
     
  9. Watcher_of_Dreams

    Watcher_of_Dreams Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 30, 2004
    @};- @};- @};- Thank You! Thank You all for reading this! [face_blush] :D :D
     
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