Saga Haunted: Luke ROTJ songfic

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  1. Watcher_of_Dreams Jedi Knight

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    May 30, 2004
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    Long lost words whisper slowly to me,
    still can?t find what keeps me here.
    When all this time I?ve been so hollow inside,
    I know you?re still there


    Palpatine leers at me, his yellow eyes wild with power. I turn to you, then back to the window, lost, not knowing who to trust. I can feel your eyes watching me, watching my every movement. Why did I have to be the one cursed by life?

    Watching me,
    wanting me,
    I can feel you pull me down.


    The darkness is a power, even I know this. But Father, it is not you. You are my father, still, I can feel you inside your anger. You don?t answer me with words, but a lightsaber blade. I was never the one to be a hero, but this time I must. For you, not me.

    Fearing you,
    loving you,
    I won?t let you pull me down.


    I?ve always adored you Father, but you never knew about me. Did Mother know that you would become so crazed, or was she blinded by her love for you, like me? I have to be strong, and trust in others.

    Hunting you, I can smell you-- Alive, your heart pounding in my head

    Father, you never knew me as a child, but I knew you. You were in my head and heart for eternity. Now that is replaced, but you are still the guardian that I adored and wanted to be like when I was a child. Please, help me.

    Watching me, wanting me, I can feel you pull me down. Saving me, watching me

    Father, I must have reached you with my pain. I don?t know, but as I stood there next to Leia, I felt lost. I wanted to let you know of my gratitude. When I turned and saw you with Obi-Wan and Yoda, the smile that crossed my face was almost lost in tears.

    Thank you Anakin Skywalker, Darth Vader, Father
  2. flowerbee Jedi Grand Master

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    Apr 29, 2004
    star 5
    Veery interesting! I like it!

    But, that song gives me the creeps.
  3. kristeh Jedi Knight

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    May 24, 2003
    star 3
    That was really beautiful and sad! I loved it!

    Kristeh
  4. Gina Force Ghost

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    Jun 3, 2003
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    Excellent!

    I was never the one to be a hero, but this time I must. For you, not me.

    Loved this line.

  5. JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost

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    Jun 3, 2002
    star 4
    That was good, I really enjoyed it.
  6. LaYa_ Jedi Grand Master

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    Jul 21, 2003
    star 5
  7. VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus

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    Feb 5, 2004
    star 8
    Beautifully done! A great songfic!
  8. StarFighter5 Force Ghost

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    Jul 25, 2003
    star 4
    Very well written and I love that song!
  9. Watcher_of_Dreams Jedi Knight

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    May 30, 2004
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    @};- @};- @};- Thank You! Thank You all for reading this! [face_blush] :D :D
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