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Saga He Belongs to Us Now-(EP3 Vignette) Obi-Wan/Owen Lars

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by JDH3, Jan 7, 2005.

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  1. Thrawn McEwok

    Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare star 6 VIP

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    May 9, 2000
    That's... beautiful. It has the simplicity of the desert sands beneath the sky, and the richness and complexity of the wind...

    Just one well-worn character, a quietly gurgling McGuffin, and an honest couple of human beings.

    Everything about it, from the balance of characters to the beat of telling, was brilliant.

    :D Great stuff!!

    - The Imperial Ewok
     
  2. MirandaFair

    MirandaFair Jedi Master star 4

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    Jun 13, 2005
    What a wonderful find!

    Very well done. =D=

    You have all the characters down pat. I especially loved how strong Beru was. While Owen *thought* he wore the pants...I always thought Beru had a strong hand in decisions. Her kind manner could lead anyone.

    Could definitely fit into a missing moment. Beautiful work!
     
  3. -Erela-

    -Erela- Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Jun 9, 2004
    This was excellent. I really enjoyed your rendering of Owen and Beru's attitudes toward Luke and the Jedi. So sad. Good job!
     
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