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"Hearts Entwined" a JA/AU/RR

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by snowbee-wan kenobi, Jan 4, 2002.

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  1. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  2. Jedi_Jewl

    Jedi_Jewl Jedi Youngling star 2

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    UP! Is EVERYONE in a rut?
     
  3. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    gosh it seems like it......

    ahhh I can't think of anything ot post....
    maybe my head just needs to clear out a little of the school stuff....hehehe
     
  4. JediClare

    JediClare Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm still here, and I'm still reading. Just that I don't have any ideas for a post...

    = Clare =
     
  5. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    up just one more time......

    :: desperately tries to think of something good to post ::

    ahh my mind is blank!!!
     
  6. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    "Where'd they go?" Obi-Wan whispered in an uneasy voice.


    "I'm not sure," replied Qui-Gon, in a calm voice which Obi-Wan envied.

    "If I had to guess," Qui-Gon continued.
    "There is an exit we don't know about."

    "But....how?" Obi-Wan began, but Qui-Gon cut him off.

    "Follow me." he said.
    "We have no time to lose."
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    O.K. that wasn't very good but.....maybe it'll encourage some others to post
     
  7. Jedi_Jewl

    Jedi_Jewl Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Oooh! Insperation! Okay, I'll post.
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    Balog climbed down the ladder after Ona. He reached the bottem, and turned to the girl standing there. She was shivering all over. "I told you, I've had enough! I don't want to be apart of this anymore!" she quavered.

    "Well, that's just not an option." Ona said flatly. "You're going to help us, or you will have made a foolish mistake."

    The girl nodded slowly.

    "Come now, Eritha." Balog said soothingly "Get your sister on the comlink, and tell her what you two need to do. The quicker you do it, the sooner you're out of this mess."

    Eritha turned, and went into the other room, activating her comlink.

    "I don't trust her." Ona said. "It's not wise to trust her with your plans."

    "We will scare her into silence." Balog said easily.

    "Scare only lasts until she's out of your posetion."

    "What are you saying?"

    "Merely this." Ona's voice was low, and dangerous. "There are other ways to silence someone."
     
  8. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ooh nice Jewl!!!
    up!!
     
  9. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Oooo, that was great!
     
  10. Jedi_Jewl

    Jedi_Jewl Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Okay. I'm thinking. Shmallow?! Are you planning on coming back any time soon? I'm getting tired of doing this by myself! ;)

    --Checker--
     
  11. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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  12. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  13. Jedi_Jewl

    Jedi_Jewl Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Up! Up! But NOT away! ;)
     
  14. SiriGallia

    SiriGallia Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Obi-Wan followed closely after Qui-Gon, trying hard not to put any weight on his injured hand. Qui-Gon was in a hurry, the idea that Balog was still alive spurred him on and he seemed not to recognize what was going on around them. Tahl was partially awake. At least enough to follow Qui-Gon, but she was too tired to speak. Obi-Wan was behind her and made sure that she was keeping up all right. Qui-Gon continuelly got ahead of them and Obi-Wan would have to call him to wait. They climbed through the power ducts, Obi-Wan wasn't that surprised that this was the exit Qui-Gon had known of, and he wondered why they were bothering trying to find Ona and Balog.

    I would think, that we'd want to be as FAR away as possible

    But Qui-Gon didn't stop and his apprentice didn't think his Master would listen to reason, he was beyond all reason, beyond all sense.

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    More?!
     
  15. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    nice SiriGallia!!!!
    That was really good!
    uppers
     
  16. Jedi_Jewl

    Jedi_Jewl Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Okay, here we go!!!! :D
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    Qui-gon led Obi-wan and Tahl into an opening. Tahl colapsed onto the floor, and Obi-wan sat down. But Qui-gon turned to him. "Obi-wan. I want you to take Tahl to somewere safe. Call the Jedi Temple on your comlink. Take her back to Corrusent."

    Obi-wan sat dumbfounded. "But- Master! What about you?!"

    "I'm going to find Balog."

    "Master, please! She's alive!"

    "She's hurt."

    "But if you can come with us, I'm sure you can help her more than anyone. Just having you there, has made her stronger!"

    "I'm sorry Padawan. I can't forgive Balog for what he did to her. What he did to me."

    "Master, please! This isn't what a Jedi should do! You know that!"

    "I'm sorry." Qui-gon turned his back on his Padawan, and started back down the tunnels.

    Obi-wan turned to Tahl. It was pitch black, but even in the dark he saw tears shining on her face. Obi-wan soon realized he felt the threat of tears in his own eyes. He brushed them away.

    "Come on, Master Tahl. Let's get out of here." He tried to sound encouraging, but he knew that Tahl wasn't fooled. She was probebly thinking the same thing Obi-wan was.

    What end is Qui-gon going to?
     
  17. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Wow! Great posts! More soon please! :D
     
  18. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey that was great!!!
    UP!!!!
     
  19. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    Alright, I'm back at college now and I have my own computer back. :D So that means that I can write more. Don't ask me how I have more time when I'm at school then on break because I really don't know.
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    Obi-Wan helped Tahl through the tunnels. It was slow going and getting slower as the Knight grew weaker. Obi-Wan did his best to hold her up but he was tired himself and his hand was throbbing. Tahl stumbled, bumping into the Padawan and hitting his hand against the wall. Obi-Wan cried out and almost collapsed from the pain.

    "Obi-Wan, I'm so sorry." Tahl said as she pulled him away from the wall. "Are you alright?"

    Obi-Wan took a minute to gain control before responding. "I'll be fine." His voice was more strained then he liked.

    "Prehaps we should rest."

    Obi-Wan shook his head then remembered that she wouldn't see him. "No, we have to keep going. Qui-Gon told..."

    "Forget what Qui-Gon said. We both need to rest. Don't worry. It will only be for a minute."

    Obi-Wan sighed but then agreed. "Alright. Here, let me help you." He reached out to help her sit but Tahl moved away.

    "I think I can sit down by myself. Besides you need to save your own strength."
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    Ok, that wasn't very good but I couldn't think of anything else.
     
  20. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    No, that was great! Didn't Obi have a broken nose earlier? :confused: Along with other injuries besides his hand?

    Anyways, that was a great post, Swede!
     
  21. Jedi_Jewl

    Jedi_Jewl Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Oooh! I like it Swede! Keep it up!

    Broken nose? I don't remember that, but I can be forgetful. ;) it's a Checker thing. :D
     
  22. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  23. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    I don't remeber a broken nose either. Any other injuries he had? It's hard keeping them all straight. [face_devil]
     
  24. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Ok, this post was by Swede, and here is the quote:

    A cold, crushing hand pulled him up and slammed him into a wall. He cried out as his nose broke.

    I don't remember the others and I'm gonna be late for school, so bye!!! :D
     
  25. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh, opps. Silly me. Forgot that and I even wrote it. [face_blush]

    So is anyone else going to write? I'm kinda ran out of ideas for the moment.

    ~Swede :p
     
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