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"Hearts Entwined" a JA/AU/RR

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by snowbee-wan kenobi, Jan 4, 2002.

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  1. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    wow that was good Jewl...
    now i've got super writer's block ...
    oh well
    uppers
     
  2. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  3. Jedi_Jewl

    Jedi_Jewl Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I've got writers block, and a hurting mouth. So, I'll have to post some other time. :(
     
  4. Jedi_Jewl

    Jedi_Jewl Jedi Youngling star 2

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  5. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  6. TheSwedishJedi

    TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master star 4

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    Hmm, trying to fight through this Sith of a writers block we all seem to have. Let's see if this works.
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    Obi-Wan cursed mentally. Long, hard and repeativly. They had been found again. He didn't know how, but while waiting for the transport, Ona had snuck up on them, knocked them both out and dragged them back to Balog.

    He had woken up a short time later to find himself chained to the wall and Tahl on the table he had been on before.

    Balog strode over grinning evilly.

    "We have Qui-Gon, so why don't you tell us where the list is and this wouldn't hurt so much."

    "I don't know where the list is." Tahl said. "None of us do."

    "Come now, do you think I'm that gulliable? I think not, my dear Tahl." He walked over to Obi-Wan. The Padawan gulped. "Now, do you wish to tell me or does the boy have to pay for you stubborness?"

    "Leave him alone!"

    "I'll take that as a no." Balog then punched Obi-Wan in the face, making his nose bleed again. Head still reeling, Obi-Wan didn't move his bad hand when Balog reached down and squeezed. Hard.

    Obi-Wan screamed, tring to jerk his arm away and only causing more pain. Tears streamed down his face, his body starting to tremble from all the stress. In the background he could hear Tahl yelling for them to stop, to leave him alone.

    Balog didn't listen and only squeezed his hand some more. Darkness edged around his eyes and mind. Obi-Wan welcomed it eagerly. He finally stopped screaming as he fell in the blackness.

    Later, when Qui-Gon awoke, the Padawan never heard his desprite calls.
     
  7. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Poor Obi! Whoa... That was a fast switch... From mush to torture... two different stories...

    More soon please! :D

    KG :cool:
     
  8. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yay!
    Thanks 4 posting!
    That was great....I will try to add on soon...
     
  9. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  10. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    up just one more time.....
    I would post but I just got the new JA book so I will be occupied for the next 30 minutes or so it takes me to finish it, wish i had another to read, and then get all depressed abotu how the series is ending. ;)

    well....I'll try to post 2morrow
     
  11. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    just upping this one more time
     
  12. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Come on, friends! Obi torture, please! [face_devil]

    KG :cool:
     
  13. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    He he glad you're still here too KG!!
    I just did 4 hours worth of homework and my brain is useless......any1 else wanna post?!?
     
  14. KenobisGirl

    KenobisGirl Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I'll write tomorrow, because tonight's purpose is to try and get lots done on my story! :)
     
  15. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    uppers!!!!


    YAY!!! ITS SPRING BREAK!!!

    (Maybe I'll actually do some writing now!)
     
  16. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  18. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    up one more time....
    I might be able to post this weekend...
    anyone even still want to continue this?
     
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    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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