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Saga Hearts on Fire - AU, A/P, OC, Romance, Drama, Action, (co written by widow_skywalker) *COMPLETED*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Anakin_Heartbreaker, Aug 13, 2005.

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  1. Anakin_Heartbreaker

    Anakin_Heartbreaker Jedi Master star 4

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    Title - Hearts on Fire by Anakin_Heartbreaker and widow_skywalker
    Characters - Anakin, Padme, Naberrie family, Obi-Wan, Sidious, OC, Jedi Council, Yoda, Windu.
    Time Frame - ROTS-ish
    Summary - Anakin and Padme have problems saying one simple sentence. I won't say anymore! ;)
    Disclaimer - As always Lucas owns everything, I'm just a fan with a story to tell.

    Hi everyone - This is an idea that we have been working on, we hope that you will enjoy it. :)


    Hearts on Fire

    Chapter 1

    Coruscant. Midnight. Padme held her hands close to her chest, as she frantically paced back and forth, in her luxurious apartment. It was the tenth time in as many weeks, that there had been an assassination attempt on her life, and tonight was no different. Being the Senator of Naboo was becoming to be more dangerous with each passing moment. Anxiety coursed through her veins, and her throbbing heart pounded unremittingly, as the fear of loss settled in. The most eccentric thing was, that it was not her own life that she was concerned for?it was Anakin?s. Anakin had been her assigned to protect her during her stay, and had successfully thwarted all of the attacks. Tonight he had shown the type of bravery that would leave any woman breathless, as he protected her with no regard for own life. He had chased her attacker into the busy streets of Coruscant, but her heart told her that he would be back.

    Her mind continued to reason with her, she knew being attracted to him was wrong, he was a Jedi. And for a Jedi, attachments were forbidden. The harder she tried to resist, the more she thought of him. His dreamy blue eyes, his sandy blonde hair, his adorable smile, and his muscular physique, it was those things about him that made her thank the heavens she was a woman. But he had no feelings for her, how could he? He was a Jedi. And she was nothing more than an assignment, one she was sure that he was getting tired of.

    Anakin ran into the room, sweat continued to pour relentlessly down both sides of his temple, as he looked at the worried Senator.

    ?Padme.?

    Padme held her breath, as she heard his voice. She quickly walked in his direction.

    ?Anakin, I was so worried about you.?

    ?I?m fine my? Lady.? Anakin gave her a reassuring smile.

    ?Did you get him?? Padme asked.

    Anakin let out a deep sigh.

    ?He was fast, but not fast enough. He has been taken in for questioning.?

    Padme gasped, as she saw blood dripping from Anakin?s arm.

    ?Anakin you?re bleeding!?

    ?It?s just a scratch.? Anakin replied and almost defensively moved his arm towards his waist.

    ?Let me see it.? Padme tenderly held Anakin?s hand in her own, as she methodically examined the injury.

    Anakin?s pulse raced, as Padme?s loving touch, sent indescribable sensations through every pore of his being. His yearning eyes devoured every inch of her beauty. Her soft brown eyes, her cute nose, her moist lips, her feminine curves, intoxicated his mind. His body ached to hold her in his arms, and to feel her skin rub up against his. But he was Jedi, and attachments were forbidden. Besides, why would someone like Padme ever fall in love with him? Anakin tried to brush it of it as much as he could, however he knew he was not doing a very good job of it.

    ?You call this a scratch?!? Padme looked at Anakin.
    ?It needs to be tended to straight away.?

    Anakin found it difficult to breathe, as he saw undying love glowing in her warm eyes. It was tearing him apart that he could not kiss her. He turned his gaze to the floor.

    ?I?ll have it checked when I get back to the Temple.?

    ?Anakin this needs immediate attention.? Padme stressed.
    ?Take your shirt off, while I go get the medical kit.?

    Before Anakin could get a word in, Padme walked to her bedroom. Anakin stood motionless for a moment, but knew that it was pointless arguing with her. She was not going to take no for an answer. Anakin sighed, as he stripped the crimson stained shirt off of his body. Padme walked back into the room and
     
  2. Amidala66

    Amidala66 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 14, 2005
    It goes without saying that I love this already.=D=

    Somehow I don't think that Padme is going to Naboo alone.
    You have both done a great job describing the mutual attraction between Anakin and Padme.

    Can't wait for the next update.
     
  3. ladie_padawan

    ladie_padawan Jedi Master star 4

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    "I'm sorry my'Lady you have to see me like this." Anakin said
    I'm not sorry, Padme thought.
    [face_shame_on_you]
    Naughty thoughts for a senator![face_devil]

    This is great and I hope to see more. Poor Ani having Padme' stare at him like that, not that I can blame her.[face_blush]
     
  4. JediArym

    JediArym Jedi Master star 3

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    Jun 24, 2005
    I'm lovin' your new fic Anakin_Heartbreaker! =D=

    Is Anakin going to escort Padme to Naboo? [face_love]
    This reader sure hopes so.

    Please PM me when you update.
     
  5. darksideyesplease

    darksideyesplease Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 12, 2005
    ooooh! naughty indeed
     
  6. iLoveAnakin7

    iLoveAnakin7 Jedi Master star 5

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    Very good and steamy start you two. This looks very good.

    Padme walked back into the room and dropped the medical kit in shock, as she looked at Anakin chiseled physique.

    Yeah well...I would have done the same thing lol:D
    up!

     
  7. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jun 28, 2004
    Oh my...with posts like that you'll leave all of us with heart palpitations.

    Padme walked back into the room and dropped the medical kit in shock, as she looked at Anakin chiseled physique.


    Always knew Anakin was one hunka hunka burnin' love:D .


    Keep me on the PM list! This is great!
     
  8. Moons_of_Iego_angel7

    Moons_of_Iego_angel7 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Feb 2, 2005
    Love it already!!! Add me to your PM list plez!!!
     
  9. Lexi

    Lexi Jedi Master star 4

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    You had me both laughing and blushing. I can't say that I wouldn't have stared at Anakin as well [face_blush].

    Great start, you two! Please, keep sending me PMs when you update.
     
  10. JuniorPadawan

    JuniorPadawan Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Feb 12, 2005
    I'd be staring.
    drooling...
    drooling...

    umm yeah, so anyway, this looks like its going to hilarious. Sexual tension here we come!
     
  11. anakin_skywalker_02

    anakin_skywalker_02 Jedi Youngling

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    Jun 19, 2005
    oooh yes, great start. I'd love to see where this is going! good A/P mush is very very hard to resist!

    could you please add me to your PM list as well? thanks!
     
  12. Farra_Sti

    Farra_Sti Jedi Master star 2

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    Jul 27, 2005
    Lovely start. I am interested in knowing what happens next. I look forward to reading more.
     
  13. ilymeforever

    ilymeforever Jedi Youngling star 2

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    A great plot i think im going to enjoy it very much, could I be add it to your Pm list if you have one?. thanx, cant wait for more....

    Mary
     
  14. eridani

    eridani Jedi Youngling star 1

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    This sounds really promising. Will there be a PM list? I'd love to be on it, if there is...

    Thanks,

    eridani.
     
  15. zvalarens

    zvalarens Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Aug 4, 2005
    another great story. can't wait for more. can you add me to your pm list?
    keep up the good work!
     
  16. widow_skywalker

    widow_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jul 5, 2005
    This story is going to be so much fun.....Also, can we have a little love from the guys for Padme? After all, she is the Angel who won Anakin's heart. And, she manages to look sexy with all of her clothes on...Who else could pull off black leather at dinner?

    Wait until Padme's family gets involved.

    [face_skull]
     
  17. nabooromance

    nabooromance Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jun 7, 2005
    Whew! It is HOT in here! Count me in, I am loving the start.
    Bri
     
  18. wkmaksar

    wkmaksar Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jun 21, 2005
    this is definitly a sizzling start! i wonder who would confess first??
     
  19. LukeSkywalker_2001

    LukeSkywalker_2001 Jedi Knight star 5

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    thanks for PMing me about this :)

    I really like how you have made them both humble about their feelings for one another. Neither one is expecting a relationship to follow, or even that the other person is attracted!

    That is so beautiful, and I can't wait to see how you bring this couple together.

    One thing...maybe other females will disagree with me on this...but most girls are not like guys...most of us do not see a guy and undress him in our minds. I know that some do. I suppose if a female wanted to, she could, but I don't think about stuff like that when I see a good looking guy. If you are going to go with a struggle...let me tell you that we girls struggle with emotional stuff more than physical stuff.

    Oh, I should also add that we struggle with our thoughts too...sometimes fantasy like "wouldn't it be neat if this guy approached me" or something like that...something I'm trying to work on myself

    Our struggle is to guard our hearts, our emotions, and our thoughts.
     
  20. LORDVIGILANCE

    LORDVIGILANCE Jedi Youngling star 4

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    Jun 11, 2005
    Wow, what a great begining. I look forward to reading more!
     
  21. little_miss_jedi

    little_miss_jedi Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Aug 6, 2005
    This is such a good story! looking forward to reading more
    plz PM me when this is updated. :p
     
  22. ladie_padawan

    ladie_padawan Jedi Master star 4

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    ::delurks and starts looking for a post:::confused: No update?:_|

    Okay...could you PM me when you do update? [face_batting]

     
  23. Cil

    Cil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Apr 5, 2005
    [face_love] =D= Well done. Keep going.
     
  24. ANAKINSBABY

    ANAKINSBABY Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 27, 2005
    Whoa... *stares off into space thinking about shirtless Anakin*

    Well that was an amazing start! I think our lovely senator will have company going back to Naboo!!

    You sure have my full attention with this one Anakin_Heartbreaker!Can't wait for you guys to continue!!! Thanks for the PM, please keep them coming!!!
     
  25. Eirate_rules

    Eirate_rules Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 22, 2005
    Padme was at a loss for words, as she struggled to regain her senses. Her face was completely flushed, whilst she quickly bent down and picked up the medical kit. Anakin could feel her eyes undressing him further as she approached him, and he refused to make eyes contact with her.


    :eek: Padme!! Naughty things are going on in your head[face_shame_on_you]

    But still....=P~

    PM when ya update
     
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