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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by widow_skywalker, Dec 3, 2005.

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  1. widow_skywalker

    widow_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Title - Hearts On Fire: Inferno
    Author - widow_skywalker
    Characters - Anakin, Padme, Kahlei, Luke, Leia, Sidious, Bail Organa, and many many more!!!
    Genre - Romance with lots of angst.
    Timeframe - ROTS and beyond
    Keywords - AU, angst, and A/P
    Summary - Picks up three years after the original Hearts on Fire. Some things have changed in the lives of Anakin and Padme and in the Republic
    Disclaimer -The marvelous flanneled one owns all of this, except for Kahlei...She mine. But I let her play in his sandbox.

    A/N: due to some PM issues, please let me know if you want to be added to the PM list for this fic. I don't want to be banned for "spamming" anyone!

    Hearts on Fire: Inferno

    Prologue


    "A man who has not passed through the inferno of his passions has never overcome them"~

    Carl Gustav Jung


    Anakin Naberrie rocked his daughter in the golden afternoon sunlight of he and Padmé?s apartment on Coruscant. The blissful silence as the toddler snuggled against him was worth all the sleepless nights spent chasing away assassins as the former head of his wife?s security forces. Little Leia was more exhilarating than any battle or chase even in her slumber. Anakin felt his pulse race as the little girl stirred, then continued her nap, ear pressed to her father?s chest, sighs in time with his heart beats.

    Now, as simply a full-time husband, father and consort, Anakin treasured his place in the universe. The Force had shown him his place, and, in its wisdom, granted him the serenity of a family with the most graceful and loving being in the universe, his beloved Padmé, the current Senator of Naboo, and former Queen of the Naboo.

    Not to say that the past two and a half years were perfect, by any means. Anakin was quick to recognize that he had a foul temper, and was prone to jealous rages concerning Padmé and her colleagues. Many a night before the twins were born, were spent in fiery argument concerning the looks and time spent with fellow Senators, male and female alike.

    ?Anakin you are simply ignorant!? Padmé tried to keep her voice small in the lift as they left the reception for the Hapen delegation. The entire night Anakin had brooded as male delegates, and even the Ta?Chume?s son, the gorgeous Prince Isolder had kissed her hand, lips lingering a moment too long for Anakin?s taste.

    Padmé had blushed beautifully, much to Anakin?s distaste. He has only seen her color like that in the throes of their passion, when she forgot about her duty and was willing to let go of herself in his arms, and was not Senator or Queen, but his puppet, his plaything; a life-sized doll in his arms for his enjoyment only.

    ?The way you looked when they touched you? the blush on your cheeks.? He growled, his lids lowered, so she could not see the anger burning in his eyes, though his forehead was lined with it. ?It was carnal, your blush. You took a great deal of pleasure in their touch, didn?t you, Milady??

    Padmé stepped back from him in the lift, hand to her heart. ?Is that what you think of me? That I would sleep my way to the top of the Senate? Anakin, you know-?

    ?I know that you had lovers.? The weight of the statement hung in the air. His callous nature playing out before her eyes, as this side of the man was not revealed until after they were married. His jealous fantasies of lovers, the fact that yes, as a Senator and as Queen, she had used her charms, her body as leverage in the political arena to gain the upper hand.

    To strike at her opponents and make alliances forged in sweat and kisses, whispers in her ears of agreement which were clouded by pleasure, both taken and given.

    Anakin forgot that it was just her body that she used. None had ever possessed her as he had, and the trysts stopped once he was with her.

    The lift stopped, and the couple put their public façade on, the argument left behind in the lift.

    That night their lovemaking had been frantic, as if he sought to drive the events of the night away
     
  2. ehopepower

    ehopepower Jedi Knight star 2

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    The prologe already! I am a giddy girl. Please put me on your pM list. Oh first post perhaps again?
     
  3. Amidala66

    Amidala66 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I am glad that you are back. I missed reading your stories.

    This one has started nicely.:)
    I would love to be on your pm list since I don't want to miss any updates.
    Thanks again
     
  4. ladie_padawan

    ladie_padawan Jedi Master star 4

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    Anakin with a temper? Who'd a thunk it?o_O

    Thanks for the PM and I look forward to MUCH more!
     
  5. zvalarens

    zvalarens Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Fabulous start!

    That flashback was intense. Can't wait to see where you take this!

    Definitely keep me on your pm list!

     
  6. Apailana

    Apailana Jedi Knight star 5

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    that was awesomeness!
     
  7. jmsbndgrl

    jmsbndgrl Jedi Master star 4

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    Was pleasantly surprised and pleased to see this story started. Keep me on the PM list, I don't want to miss anything.

    That flashback was intense, but after every argument, couples should make-up. ;) Of course, I'm not sure if that was exactly making up, but whatever. Looking forward to more.
     
  8. iLoveAnakin7

    iLoveAnakin7 Jedi Master star 5

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    Yay!!! Sequel!
    I love this so far, especially the twins and Anakin's fatherly role[face_love]

    please keep me on the pm list:D
     
  9. flyingcolours

    flyingcolours Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Sequel? Yay!

    I'd like to be on the PM list too, thanks :)
     
  10. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    What a wonderful beginning.

    although, it is hard to imagine Anakin as just a full-time husband, father and consort!

    I look forward to more, and please add me to the PM list[face_praying] [face_praying]

    =D= =D= =D= =D=

     
  11. ChewbacaRocks

    ChewbacaRocks Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Me too..Me too!! I want to be on the pm list!

    Great start, and the flashback with Anakin like that...a little creepy but I'll get over it[face_worried] I hope!!

    Please post soon[face_peace]
     
  12. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :D I'm glad to see you're posting again!! Great start there although it looks as if there are lots of rough waters ahead for Anakin and Padme.

    Please keep me on the list!
     
  13. Anakins_Force

    Anakins_Force Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ?I know that you had lovers.? The weight of the statement hung in the air. His callous nature playing out before her eyes, as this side of the man was not revealed until after they were married. His jealous fantasies of lovers, the fact that yes, as a Senator and as Queen, she had used her charms, her body as leverage in the political arena to gain the upper hand.


    Ooh. An early post. Please put me on your PM list.

    I really like the direction you are taking this. I like seeing Padme as someone who could have grown into a life a little less pollyanna than we see in canon. She's not an innocent flower just sitting around waiting on Anakin to hold her hand--she takes action and does things for herself and it's not particulary moral or pretty, lol.

    I like seeing the contrast between Anakin as loving father who would do anything for his kids and the raging huband whose resentment is growing larger everyday.

    Great start and I look forward to more.
     
  14. Eirate_rules

    Eirate_rules Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ?Mom home soon?? Typical toddler question.

    That's cute.
    I really like this prologe, so keep my Pms coming!!
     
  15. JediArym

    JediArym Jedi Master star 3

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    Jun 24, 2005
    Thanks for the PM widow_skywalker!

    Wow, what a start! Very intense prologue indeed! Anakin
    sure has changed since the last time we saw him. He seems
    to be a good father to the twins but I wonder what kind
    of relationship he has with Padme now.

    Please keep me in your PM list. :)

     
  16. naadi

    naadi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Things ahve definitley changed,im very interested to learn more about anakin and padmes relationship now!!!!thnx for the pm
     
  17. Jaira

    Jaira Jedi Master star 4

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    =D= Wonderful start! Keep me on the PM list!!
     
  18. theman54

    theman54 Jedi Master star 2

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    Jul 26, 2005
    What happened to Anakin?
     
  19. oqidaun

    oqidaun Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Wow.
    That was an intense flashback.

    I can't see this as an atmosphere in which Anakin is going to flourish.

    Nice work. =D=
     
  20. mixza

    mixza Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wonderful start! Anakin holding Leia... how cute! I noticed Anakin's last name is now Naberrie... is that a Naboo custom? If so, then will Luke and Leia have thier father's surname or thier mother's?
     
  21. nabooromance

    nabooromance Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Enjoyed the start! Please keep me on the PM list. and thanks for the link! (always makes things easier)
    Bri
     
  22. aldocassidy

    aldocassidy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Great start to this! Anakin's resentment of Padme's stature definitely seems to be a very volatile situation.

    Edit: Please PM me if you have the time (if you're not too busy with classes and all)
     
  23. ilymeforever

    ilymeforever Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Ohh this really great.. and so cool.. its going to be very intense for what I can see... much better...

    please add me to the PM list please.. thanx so much for the PM..

    Mary
     
  24. little_miss_jedi

    little_miss_jedi Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Awwwwwwwwwww!

    ?Mom home soon?? Typical toddler question. Anakin ruffled the golden hair on his son?s head, and smiled.

    ?Yes, Luke, Mommy will be home soon.?


    oh dear... she DOES come home, right? please tell me my imagination is playing tricks on me...

    great post and you are hereby FORBIDDEN to stop pm-ing me. I'm not missing this!
     
  25. PadwanKayla

    PadwanKayla Jedi Master star 4

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    Finally got around to reading this and I am so glad I did.

    This is a very interesting start to the sequel. I love the idea that Anakin is staying home with the kids. And Anakin with a temper! Who'd have thought?

    Please do pm me with the updates. I don't want to miss out on this!
     
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