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Discussion in 'Welcome New Users' started by The Sith Camp, Mar 11, 2015.

  1. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello All!

    The Sith Camp has joined this forum today! I'm still getting around this ... BUT to avoid mistakes and 'Trollination' I was wondering if anyone could KINDLY direct me to where I can post my 'treasure trove' of Star Wars poems? Since then I've been writing 1 poem a day (1000 words each poem) at least at the behest of a friend's challenge for Star Wars poems - mostly on Sith but I'm also looking for recommendations or what anyone wants a poem topic to be written on ...
     
  2. Cushing's Admirer

    Cushing's Admirer Chosen One star 7

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    Would you consider Tarkin? :)
     
  3. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again!

    Done. :) Any particular style? Or Word Limit? Or don't care haha or not too fussy? :)

    And here's a 'taste' of what I write (just wrote this a few hours ago) on The Order of Two/Sith

    For as Old as the Republic and Empire … But so Young …Yet So Old and Yet So New…
    The Time that The Galaxies would have Flew Through…
    Yet the Lives that were Slew …
    Yet for there be the Light and the Dark…
    Alas yet the Dark makes its Presence Mark …
    The Passionate Essence …
    Yet then too many Members of the Ancient Light Side Order … the long be but Objected …
    Alas the Teachings of the Light Side Now All But A Shadow and Disaffected
    For the Honor of the Light Side… the Jedi Code … the Compassionate Code … now stood only Derelict …

    Only to be but Rejected… Alas! Be Space Rubbish be Ejected!
    For to Korriban the Disgruntled Flew To…and with the Massassi … we Raised a Sith order of Our Own…
    Seduced…Consumed! By the Power of the Dark side with Great Power that be but only Studied and Known…

    Hatred and Distrust the Sith Would have Sown …

    Yet then be the Great Schisms …

    A Bloody War of Force Prisms …
    To then the Casting of the Hundred Year Darkness…
    The Aftermath … of the Jedi Civil War…
    To the Empire of the Golden Age … of the Sith…
    Alas the Glory and Pride of the Dark Side … be engraved in the Sith Tome Page …
    For the Fighting and Inbreeding Brewed Between each Kin and Bretheren…
    Dark Jedi Killing One Another … Desperate Violent Duels to Defeat One Another
    The Spawning of Destructive Violence Spiralled into a Chaos one so Terrible yet so Bad …
    Upsetting the Balance of the Power the Light and Dark Order might have had … and the Cursing of the Dark Side Madness!

    Hate, Fear and Dissension Brewed, Festered and Rose among the Empire and the Ranks of the Sith in Swift Course
    For then the Je’Dai … Our Ancient Foes Came In … We Fought our Hated Foes Alas! By the Numbers and The Force!
    For Lightsabers that flashed Crimson, Emerald, Blue or even Yellow or Purple…

    For the Powers of the Dark and Light crashed for Once … and Yet Only One Would Stand …
    That Be Only The True Sith Whom Survived when they were Back and Through

    Yet the Survivors be the Strongest Yet Too Concentrated in the Dark Side… they be Driven Insane…

    For too many Sith played at their Dominating Deadly Games …
    After the Failure of the Brotherhood of Darkness by Lord Kahn …
    Where their Efforts and Powers were Reduced to Dust but a Shame…
    For their Efforts to Lead the Sith over the Republic were but so only in Terrible Vain …
    The Only One True Sith… to Rise and Rule … was None Other than Dessel…better known be Darth Bane …

    For It was He whom Conjured the Grand Scheme of the Millenia…
    To Light the Ruse … he would ensure only always but Two not One … as to ensure only the Survival of the Sith … it be only the "Rule of Two"
    Alas it be the One whose name be none other than Lord Bane
    Followed by his apprentice who was loyal
    Until her day would come and his rule she would foil


    Hence Since Then from Korriban and Beyond… We Sith Sing:
    Since Dawn of the Jedi,
    Lord Bane has only plotted Your Doom and Demise,
    For the New Sith Trained from the Start … Since Youth,
    There is No Other Truth!
    For only to Embrace the Power of the Dark Side,
    For its Passion and Power shall Fuels the Your Pride,
    It Gives You Wisdom It Gives You Patience,
    Which to Conquer … these You Shall and Must Take in Stride…

    The Weak can only Lie,
    Yet they Deserve to Die…
    For None Could Even Disguise,
    For Rage, Fear, Pain and Despair,

    The Cornerstones and Heart and Soul of the Dark Side …
    The Intensive Passions and Despair,
    Yet hand in hand with the Death and Desire,
    Powers of the Dark Side shall take them all!

    For then the Sith Stand Tall…
    The Republic and the Je’dai … shall only Fall…
    Yet Your Fate Forevermore,

    Bound to the Mark and Presence… of the Dark Side…
    The years I would train,
    Cruelty and Pain,
    But no Power meant no Pain,
    Hence to gain Power,
    I endured the Pain,
    Be it the Barren Worlds like the Very Spans and Frigid Waste and Ice of Mygeeto,
    To the Desert Barren Lands of the Very Outer Rim,
    For Decades One Could Have travelled, with your Masters on a whim,

    For any sin,
    Could be Executed on a Whim…
    Wrongs were but Excused, by the Dark Side’s Spin,
    For my sacrifices, were far from Vain,
    For only then, when the time is Right…
    Your Master you would Kill and Spite…
    For only then Could One would Take, the Darth Mantle to the Dark Side’s Reign!

    Alas! Be it Tales from the Great Schisms…
    The Legacy of the Hundred Year Darkness,
    The Fall of the Je’dai …to the Rise of the Dark Side…
    To the Tales and Wonders of the Old and New Sith,
    From the Golden Age of the Sith…
    The Empire of Marka Ragnos! The Fantastic Magic of Naga Sadow….the Gloom and Power of Freedon Nadd …
    To the Legacy of the Sith Wars …
    My Master taught me the Apprentice, all He Had Known,
    For to Gain True Power,
    You Must Study All the Knowledge, of the Dark Side … of the Force…

    Alas for the Power of the Fantastic,
    The Feeling of the Dark Side grows but So Ecstatic!
    For the decades the Sith had waited,
    Our Hunger for Revenge and Power but Slated,
    The Je’dai be Fools we had baited,
    The Republic was but fated,
    To the very Mercy … of the Dark Side’s Hatred…

    Alas, for once my Master … Magister Demask … Darth Plagueis,
    Proved no longer Useful and His Teachings only But Now Worthless,
    Then I the Ambitious Crafty Sidious,
    Murdered my Master so but insidious,
    For only then could I rise to Power …
    For in the Sith School … to Rise to Power … you must Kill Your Master…

    This Dark Side Power not so Easily Sustained by Flesh,
    Nor by a weak soul,
    Nor even by one’s very own mind,
    It is neither Benign nor Divine,
    Yet to Express One’s Anger and Rage was a Delight Yet Never Too Sublime!

    Borne from the Strife and Stuggle,

    The Flames of Violence and the Fear of Fears…
    The Dark Side shall fuel my very Breath,
    It shall Empower Me … befitting like the Krayt!

    Yet for For all my Passion … I need no True Compassion,
    I cannot Fathom how much you will Suffer in Pity,
    Devoid of any Mercy…
    Yet for the Sith’s Very strength,
    Alas! It grows in length,
    For the Power We Seek,
    To Spite and Smite the Meek!
    From Mere Power when I speak!
    I can sense your Very Weakness…

    From my Chains of Struggle,
    The Light Side shall Fear and Cower,

    For the Je’Dai Order be but Befuddled,
    For only the True Passion of Dark Side Power is the Key,
    True peace to breeze…
    For By the Force!
    For By the Force!
    Alas, through the Battle with the Je’dai and Light Side struggle,
    Victory Shall Free Me!
    For the Dark Side,
    Will never fall…it merely … Consumes You All…
     
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  4. Skiara

    Skiara ~• RSA FFC •~ star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Welcome aboard! :)

    It's good that you ask where to post, because this board isn't the right place. Best you visit FanFic. There you can find tons of stories and your poems will fit in well.

    I'd link you, but with being on my mobile it's difficult. Maybe later on. :)

    Have a nice stay! :)
     
  5. Jedi Master Kenobiwan

    Jedi Master Kenobiwan Force Ghost star 6

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    Hello and welcome to JCF. :) Always glad to see new fans coming in. :D

    Before anybody turns you to the Dark side, you are invited to join Guardians of the Light (in the EU community) for a fun RP journey into the Light side of the Force. :D

    Besides that, have fun and ask if you have questions. ;)
     
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  6. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again! Haha - true - whilst my username and hence suggests I am PRO-SITH - BUT I do also like a few Je'dai and Lightside users :)

    SO I tell you what - if you wish - in a few weeks I shall be cooking up some MORE POEMS - some about Je'dai - well Jedi :) Or if you have a request for a particular topic - just let me know and I hope I won't be 'Trollinating' too much unlike on Toho Kingdom Forums :( ...
     
  7. Jedi Master Kenobiwan

    Jedi Master Kenobiwan Force Ghost star 6

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    Hope that I'm not too late then. :p
     
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  8. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again!
    :D
    Not not at all - BECAUSE as I mentioned - if you have a particular poem or topic for a poem request - please feel free to let me know - I may not have the most scholarly voice BUT that don't mean I can't turn down or 'FORCE-FULLY' refuse requests for poems ;)
     
  9. Jedi Master Kenobiwan

    Jedi Master Kenobiwan Force Ghost star 6

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    Obi-Wan will be good. :)
     
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  10. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again 'Master Kenobi' as judging by your Forum User Name - well By the Will of the Force - your wish is my command - you shall get it by the end of the week - around the weekend or so. It shall be 1000 words or so :)
     
  11. Jedi Master Kenobiwan

    Jedi Master Kenobiwan Force Ghost star 6

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    Thank you. Just tag me when you have posted it. Thank you. :)
     
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  12. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again Master Kenobi - apologies - as I am still new to this - with tagging - there a particular tab or something I need to do when tagging it? :(
     
  13. Jedi Master Kenobiwan

    Jedi Master Kenobiwan Force Ghost star 6

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    Just Jedi Master Kenobiwan
     
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  14. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again! :) By The Will of the Force - you shall get your request on the weekend ;)
     
  15. Darth Dreadwar

    Darth Dreadwar Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Welcome aBoards, The Sith Camp!

    Don't listen to him, Anakin! You must choooose! etc etc :p

    Embrace your name, and join the Sith Camp in the EU Community, the New Sith Order! That's an excellent place to post (a few of) your poems, and get feedback from fellow Sith fans, but not too many - FanFic, as suggested above, is the best place to post them all, since it sounds like you've got quite the collection!
     
  16. Jedi Master Kenobiwan

    Jedi Master Kenobiwan Force Ghost star 6

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    Too late Sith. :p He already belongs to GoL. :p
     
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  17. Darth Dreadwar

    Darth Dreadwar Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Nooooooooooooooooo....! He was my chosen one! It was said he would leave the Force in darkness, not bring balance to it!

    *explodes at the bottom of a reactor shaft*
     
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  18. Cushing's Admirer

    Cushing's Admirer Chosen One star 7

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    Thank you. :)

    I do not mind word limit. I would ask though, if you don't mind, you take a bit of time and consider the character (however you accept him, Cushy only does Sir's film part so far).

    Honestly, I tire of how shallowly most here treat Imperials and Sith. Some thoughtful considerations would be a welcome change. :) I appreciate you asking. :)
     
  19. Jedi Knight Fett

    Jedi Knight Fett Chosen One star 10

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    Hello and Welcome I will make sure to read your poems

    Could I request one if you don't mind.

    One about Clone troopers would be fantastic.

    Thanks.
     
  20. I Are The Internets

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  21. Skiara

    Skiara ~• RSA FFC •~ star 10 Staff Member Manager

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  22. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again! Too Easy - in fact - I just composed one for a friend of mine a few days earlier:

    ENJOY:

    Wake Early by the Hour of Fives,
    I Prepare to Feel the Wars Jives,
    Goin’ Jango…the Radio-Com-Link Alpha-Bravo-Tango…
    I Load Up My Gear,
    I Serve to Bring Fear …
    I be the Republic’s Dear,
    I Serve with my Brothers So Far Yet Near…
    Drive and Fly by Hours
    For I be He and He is Man In a Plastic Armor… you be mistaken to call me a Droid,
    For unlike Droids … I can have Fighting with Honor…
    End of the Battles … I just walk about
    The Smiles on a Saved Soul’s Face
    We Leave with Pride … Our Foes Lie Dead in Disgrace!
    I Made and Lived Another Day …
    Another Day, Another Time in the War … With Missions to Score…

    White, Red and Black,
    Green, Yellow and Blue,
    Cast in a Body Glove … Plated with Plastron …
    Complete with Blaster, Carbine alas a Pistol…
    We See the World With Our T-Shaped Visors …
    Be it the Cold Seas of Kamino…to the Forests of Yavin or
    That Peaceful Ideals … of Neighbouring Naboo,
    We’re always On the Attack!
    Committed To Our Duty… Bound to the Republic Forever,
    Yet Too We Fight by our Fellow Jedi’s Orders,
    We Jump Ship, We Jump From Boarders,
    We Battle the Damned Clankers Day and Night …
    For we Display Firepower … of the Republic’s Might!
    For Foes will Flee … from our Very Sight!
    For Some Could Even Die … from Sheer Fright!
    Yet to Chancellor Palpatine … our Victory … Our Glory … be But His DELIGHT!
    We drive them from the Galaxies Borders….
    Subject to Our Orders…
    Be it Planets, Worlds and Systems … or the Very Spans of Space…
    For the Galaxy-Wide Rapid Fighting Pace …
    For we take Cover … we Dive and take shoots in Galore,
    For Since Birth … We Be Ready To Fight, We Be Bred For Wars,
    Dead Clankers Tally Up Our Daily Scores …
    Up and Down, Left and Right … Front and Centre the Clankers Piled into a Lovely Wall,
    For none could survive … Rapid Lasers that made one Fall …
    Even Defeat and Driven Off, We Republic Boys All Stand Tall ….
    But For All Our Pride … For All We Worked and Fought … for the Republic’s Security and Stride…
    Yet We Never Knew … Before Long and an Order But So Renewed …
    Order 66 Rang About in Our Minds …Yet Be an Invisible Aura That Yet to Us It Binds…
    The Sudden Course of War…We Forgot our Victory Scores…
    For the Jedi … we turned against our Masters and Commanders … in their Ranks we Tore…
    We Tallied a Bloodied Score…
    For By No Warning the War took a Great Big Turn,
    For the Jedi and our Foes would but Die and Burn…
    We Executed them … the words from the Chancellor Clear and Stern…
    Execute Order 66 … Without to much Hassle to Fix…
    The Jedi felt their Fear … Never be all these Years …
    For the Sudden Change Made Great Concerns….
    For Despite the Time, Credits and Victory the Years would Earn…
    Their Lives but suddenly Burned …
    In a Flash of Light … for soon they be no more Light!
    Only Fallen Jedi … Victims of Order 66…
    Yet we felt no Mercy, no Regret nor any Pity…
    For the Jedi were the Enemy!
    For all the Republic to See!
    For our Trust had been Had! The Jedi be Driven Mad!
    The Jedi’s Minds were Fooled and Befouled yet too Clouded, they Never Knew Such Tricks,
    Upon Lord Sidious’s Demand where He Uttered the Words: ‘Execute Order Sixty Six.’
    For What More be Worst? Take a Look at the Jedi Temple … Razed and Burning … a Grand Sight … by the Work of the 501st!
    For Years of Trust, Friendship and Comradeship … were all but Extinguished…
    Upon the Minutes of Order Sixty-Six … the Clones of all Ranks Mixed …
    For The Blasters, Carbines Trained … they Served a Feast of Justice in Rain …
    For the Showering Bolts that Rained …
    Our Victory … left the Jedi but Dead with Distain …
    For the Order Flowed in our Minds … as with Mandalorian Blood in our Very Veins …
    The Battle and Games Deceptions, Trickery, Treachery, Deceit and Betrayal only but Soon Ensued,
    For the Clones were Deadly But the Power of the Dark Side…Alas! Lord Sidious be the Very Dark Side … were but Deadly, Cruel and Crude…
    For When was there a Greater Power But So Wily, Evil yet But so Crude?
    We Execute our Former Masters and Comrades … as be to the Wampa or Bantha or Krayt Dragon and beasts that Devour their Food…
    We Troopers be but Indoctrinate … Ready to Act Upon The Cue,
    Executing the Jedi Was Our Duty … for only then The Republic be Free…
    For The Security and Safety … and Eternal Peace of the Galaxy…
    For the Sith Vengeance Was But For So Long At Last Finally Renewed!
    The Survivors of Order Sixty-Six shall be but Hunted … Until All Be Dead or Extinguished from View …
    With the Separatists Dead and Parted … Yet then the Old Republic Gone and Defeated …the Day and the Birth of the New Galactic Empire…
    By Lord Sidious whom Proudly Arose… the Happy Empire Day he Composed!
    For the Success of the Sith Grand Scheme … The Return of the Sith … their Revenge … and they be but Victorious! With all foes gone and Vanquished … with none left whom dared to Oppose….
    For this Victory … was Achieved … where we Clones now be dubbed the Stormtroopers had achieved his task …
    Yet there so long as there was the fragment of the Resistance … We Still Ensure the Safety and Security of the Empire and its Interests …
    We Fight and Patrol and Strive to Perfection Regardless,
    From Mandalorian to Clone to the Storm … were only the foolish be so unknowing that their very Ignorance … was but our Pride and Bliss…
    For we be once Fighting Clones! Yet we now be Stormtroopers … we Serve with Order … to Our Galactic Empire!

    But I'll also give tag you in the poem section just in case :)
     
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  23. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again! Much appreciated - I tell you what - do you have any particular SW poems or topics of a poem you would like and request? Its just a friend of mine has 'challenged' me to cook up a SW poem for him - atleast 1 poem a day and atleast 1000 words per poem ...
     
  24. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again Master Kenobi!

    Well Pleased to Say I have just posted a 2000 word poem on Obi-Wan Kenobi in the Fan Fiction Section :) Enjoy!
     
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  25. Skiara

    Skiara ~• RSA FFC •~ star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Great! Just wanted to ask you to follow the way to FanFic for your poems, since there they belong to. :)

    I'm not much into poetry, so no wishes from me. But thanks! :)