Beyond - Legends 'Here All Along' -- Jacen/Tenel Ka, Allana [ angst, romance, yadda yadda, the usual ;D ]

Title: Here All Along
Status: One-poster, complete
Characters: Tenel Ka, Jacen Solo, Allana
Word Count: 2995
Rating: PG
Notes: I'm sure this one has been done a billion times, one way or another, but I couldn't resist it. I had to take a shot at it. I had to cause the 'Awwwwwwwww' factor, or something. <3 Heehe, sorry for the total incoherency but it's past bedtime.

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Here All Along



Mama calls him the protector. He doesn't say a lot. He just stands there with us pretty much all the time. I think that would get kind of boring, but Mama says it's his job.

The nanny droid towered over the little girl, who was furiously scribbling away at a piece of flimsiplast, her tongue pressed to her upper lip, seemingly in a form of concentration. When she was satisfied with the outcome of the doodle, she gathered the piece in her arms and headed towards the exit of her quarters.

"And where do you think you're going, young lady?" The droid chirped, making it's way over to her to try to cut her off.

"I'm gonna show Mama my picture."

"Your mommy is busy right now. She'll be back soon. You just stay here and draw her some more pictures, does that sound alright?"

There were a few blinks of her large brown eyes before she ducked under the droid's legs and scrambled out of the room, clambering down the corridor as fast as her body would let her. The picture was clutched in one hand as the other hand was clasped around the fabric of the annoying skirt she had to wear.

She could tell the nanny droid was behind her, she couldn't tell how far. But that didn't matter, as long as it didn't catch up. The girl closed herself off from the Force so the nanny droid couldn't find her -- she had remembered figuring out how to do that. She just could never remember the fact that not everyone had the Force -- especially droids.

A giggle escaped her lips at her clever little trick.

Arriving at her mother's chambers, she squeezed between the crack in the partially open doorway and bolted in, her head turning back and forth in search of the Queen Mother. She was about to call out when she heard talking from the refresher. Pausing for a moment, the girl listened.

"...beautiful."

Another murmur.

"...have no idea how much it hurts not... able to... and talk to her... tell her the truth."

Hugging the picture to her chest, the little girl crept to the entrance of the refresher and peeked her head in.

It was her mother and the bodyguard man. They seemed to be in a heated conversation, her mother leaning against the far wall, dressed in an airy blue casual gown. The man was pacing in erratic circles until her mother said something and he stopped, looking over to her.

What the little girl saw next almost made her scream out, but she stopped herself when she realized how much trouble she would get in if they knew she was there.

He just grabbed Mama and began kissing her!

She couldn't watch anything after that because the nanny droid had finally caught up and grabbing her arm, had begun pulling her out of the chambers. She wanted to say something to the droid, but was too focused on trying to weasel her way out of the nanny's grasp.

Out in the corridor, she dropped her picture to the carpet to free up her other hand for struggling -- and as they went, she could only repeat the same thing to the nanny droid.

"What about daddy?!"


Back in the refresher, the protector had the Queen Mother pressed up against the wood paneling, his hands running up her sides. She had whispered something to him when he pulled his lips away from hers, which caused him to inhale deeply and lessen the space between them even more. His lips landed under her left ear and moved to her neck, where they lingered, while her hand tensed against the back of his head, her fingers lost in his messy brown hair.

His hands had moved up now, one to a shoulder and the other behind her, the palm splayed out on the wall. He ripped his lips from h

 

OMG I LOVE YOU!


Cuteness factor is too much... overload.. can't... handle...

AHHHH

*SPLAT*

 

*weeps gently for what should be in profic*

I simply adore sweet jacen/allana/tenelka fics.

Why oh why must profic torture us this way?

Thank you for giving me a few minutes of TK/J/A goodness!

 

-TK-:

I enjoyed that - and not a Dark Jedi plot against J/TK in sight!!

- The Imperial Ewok

 

Awwwwwwww, you got me. That was satisfyingly angsty and sweet! Loved it!

 

Aaw, that was so beyond sweet!!!!! Nice to see a DN Jacen that's not a Sith Lord in training. And you wrote Allana perfectly, too. Love her little drawing, there.

 

OMG, I loved this.

Absolutely fantastic. Great job -Tenel-Ka-

A perfect family, well, sort of anyway.

 

AHH! *glomps you* I love happy J/TK/A fic. Allana was adorable and J/TK are awesome, as usual. This was so sweet and wonderful and I loved it.

 

*melts into a puddle of mush*

Tenel-Ka... there is a reason I love your J/TK fics and this is just one of them... how utterly adorably heart-wrenchingly-sweet!




This gets a big AWWWWWWWW

 

YOU'RE ALIVE! Up and I'll be back with a review!

 

Definitely cuteness factor! TK, you've a way of keeping me on teh edge of my seat! The way Jacen revealed himself both intentionally and unintentionally was awesome! I love the mush.

 

I tried to tell you this story would be awesome.


Now do you believe me??

 

OH EEM GEE, SO CUTE!!1

Lovely job, as always, man! Maybe becasue you, like, own J/TK? And Allana, now, too, cause she was adorable! <333

Although I must admit, I'm stunned. TK writes a fic on Hapes and Gadell doesn't make an appearance? Guess he was busy with the handmaidens or something.

 

TCR!: Heeehehe! I caused a splat. ;-; Awww. BUT AT LEAST IT WAS A CUTE ONE. And I love you too. XD I'm glad you liked it! And I hope I didn't kill with the cute.

pregnantpadme: You are very welcome! I'm glad I'm not the only one totally hoping upon all hopes that the new little crazy family gets at least a couple moments like this in the canon world. That would totally make my fandom life (although Allana herself came very close -- now they just have to top that by giving us some cute family bonding! Heeehe!)

Thrawn: I KNOW. IT'S SO NOT ME. ! I'm glad you enjoyed it though! *runs off to come up with dark plots* Heeee~

AvenKiel: Thank you so much! *hugs* Hopefully I can post more stuff here and catch up. I've been so busy lately. >_<

Healer_Leona: Aww! I didn't mean to make the eyes tear. I guess it just happened that way -- although I'm glad they're happy/sweet tears!

Striker: Heeee! Thank you soooo much! *hugs* I was reeally worried about writing her. I guess I've never been good with writing kids -- so I was worried about Allana especially, since she's Jacen and TK's. XD

Star_Angel: LOL! As perfect as they can get, I guess. What with all the crazy extended family and such. Heeehe! I'm glad you liked it!

TrillianTK: Eeeee glomp! Thank you so very much for your comments -- and especially the comment about Allana. I was so very worried about writing her. O_O

Jade_Max: Awww thank you soooo much! *huuugs* I'm glad it was good and not overly sweet, which is what I was afraid of. I guess I was paranoid cause usually they aren't this sweet. Heeeheh! And big AWWWWWWs are always welcome. They let me know I'm doing something right, LOL. XD Thank you again! ^___^

SilSolo: LOL! I'M ALIVE! That makes you sound like a mad scientist, which is awesome. ;D Thank you very much! I hadn't tried my hand at mush for awhile so I'm glad I can actually do something with it! Heehehe! I'm also glad the way he revealed himself worked -- I wasn't sure if it would work out in the end or not. But I'm happy it did! Thank you~~

Jasa: Kay, I guess I do. XD Thanks for beta-ing, yo. Heeee~~

Luuuuuusa!: Thank you, darlin'! Heeehehe! AND OMG I KNOW. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HARD IT WAS. "Must... not... put... Gadell... mustnotdoit." Poor thing was screaming at me the whole time. I was all, "YOU DON'T HAVE A PLACE." And he said he could be the babysitter but I knew that wouldn't work cause he's a punk.

... and I'm totally out of it now. I have to go to bed. Heehe!

Thanks again everyone! !

 

I really enjoyed this. I'm anxious to see what becomes of this family in the new books and this was a lovely piece to tide me over. Great job.

 

Awwwwwww! You've captured my heart!

This was so sweet Heather, I loved it. It's nice to see Jacen and Tenel Ka so angsty, they didn't show any emotion between them in TUQ, even though Tenel Ka's just given birth! I think someone should rewrite 'introductions', and I think it should be you.

Loved it so very sweet

 

Muuuuuuuuuuuuuush.

I am now very happy. It's too hard to find good J/TK mush.

That was one of the sweetest things I've read recently. Definitely tops DN. Great work!

 

That's just... wow. Cute! (and yes, I'm saying that, even though I'm a fanguy)

You might recognize me from the Kriff This boards. I finally got a TF.N account to post my fics! OMG fun!

 

I loved it I def agree that profic needs more moments like this. I can't wait till the whole secret of Allana's dad is out

 

obi_ew: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it~ and I'm glad I could provide some material to tide you over -- I just hope I'm tiding you over for something good. Cause if the stuff that gets put out in the books is sad then this piece will just tide you over for sad, which is no fun. ;D

Goddess_Solo: Awwwww! I don't know if I could pull that off -- although I could certainly try! Thanks for having faith in me~! And thank you for your comments -- I'm really happy you enjoyed the story!

Mirax_Corran: ^____^ Thank you! I'm happy that I could provide good J/TK mush! Heeehe! I'm also happy I still have the mush bug somewhere in me. I haven't wrriten mush in awhile. XD

FanakinSolo: Hey!! Yesss, I know you! ;D And being a fanguy is perfectly fine~ thank you for the wow, wows are always good. And yes you must post your fanfiction -- as you noticed TFN has massive fanfiction boards. XD

KillerRomance: Heeehe! I agree with you that profic needs more moments with relationship stuff, not too much. But just a bit more! And yesssss, everyone finding out about Allana is gonna be awesome. Heeehe!

 

Haven't been on these boards for a while, nice to see the quality is still there.

Of course I have a nasty feeling about what would happen in Cannon if Allana was revealed... Moments like this one I feel are the biggest problem in SW fiction. There aren't enough of them... Too often when there could be instead the authors fill it up with a random piece of action that doesn't do anything to further the story...

-Tenel-Ka- for pro-fic president!!

 

I can't believe i didn't reply to this one when i first saw it a couple of week's ago.
well, anyway, since it's moved back up the list, time to correct my oversight.
This is one of my very favorite J/TK fics. It shows each character being true to themselves. and the situation is completely believable. Bravo!

 

This was really good

 

Aww! So cute!

It's been linked in the Allana index. If I've missed any of yours, let me know and I'll add them.