heres my Episode III screenplay i made my self

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  1. COMMANDERSKYWALKER00 Jedi Knight

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    STAR WARS
    EPISODE III:
    RISE OF THE EMPIRE

    IT'S BEEN FOUR YEARS SINCE THE CLONE WARS HAVE BEGUN
    THE REPUBLIC IS ON THE VERGE OF FALLING AS WELL AS
    THE JEDI ORDER. PADME AMIADLA NO LONGER SENATOR FOR NABOO LIVES
    A NORMAL LIFE WITH HER HUSBAND ANAKIN SKYWALKER WHO IS THE CHOSEN ONE
    AND APPRENTICE TO OBI-WAN KENOBI.
    COUNT DOOKU'S FORCES ARE PLANING A FINAL ATTACK ON THE REPUBLIC.
    SENATOR BAIL ORAGONA HAS ASSISGNED OBI-WAN KENOBI AS HIS GENERAIL AND BODY GUARD.
    THE FATE OF THE GLAXAY LAYS WITHIN ANAKIN SKYWALKER.

    THE SEEN PANS DOWN ON ALDERAAN SPACE.

    OBI-WAN: SENATOR ORGAONA THE BATTLE IS NEAR ITS END.
    BAIL: GOOD JOB GENERAL KENOBI.

    23 DORID FIGHTERS COME OUT OF HYPERSPACE AND SHOOT AT ORAGONAS SHIP.

    PLOIT: WE'VE BEEN HIT GENRAIL KENOBI
    BAIL: MASTER JEDI, DO SOMTHING
    OBI-WAN: FIRE AT THE FIGHTERS
    PLOIT: YES GENRAIL KENOBI.
    ORAGONAS SHIP SHOOTS AT THE DORID SHIP.
    OBI-WAN: THIS WAR HAS TO END SOON OR THE REPUBLIC WILL NOT HOLD ON MUCH LONGER.
    BAIL: WELL AGRREED. I WILL MAKE CONTACT WITH CHANCELLOR PALPATINE.
    BAIL STEPS IN THE HOLO CIRCLE.
    BAIL: MY LORD, WE ARE OUT NUMBERED.
    HOLOGRAM OF PALPATINE: I WILL SEND COMMANDER TARKIN AND SOME HELP ON THE WAY.
    THE HOLOGRAM FADES OUT.
    BAIL: ALL WE NEED TO NOW IS TO WAIT.

    THE SEEN CHNAGES TO CORUSCANT PALPATINES PLACE.

    PALPATINE: COMMANDER I NEED YOU TO TAKE YOUR STAR DESTRYOR AND YOUR STROMTROOPERS
    TO HELP SENATOR ORAGONA.
    TARKIN: YES MY LORD.
    TARKIN BOWS AND LEAVES PALPATINE'S OFFICE.
    PALPATINE: YOU CAN COME OUT NOW, LORD TYRANUS.
    DOOKU: THANK YOU, MASTER SIDIOUS.
    PALPATINE PULLS UP HIS DARK BLACK HOOD AND HE AND DOOKU WALK OUTSIDE THO THE BLACONY.
    DARTH SIDIOUS: THE REPUBLIC IS ABOUT TO FALL, BUT ONLY ONE THING REMAINS IN MY WAY.
    DOOKU: WHAT WOULD THAT BE, MY MASTER?
    DARTH SIDIOUS: THE JEDI ORDER. THEY HAVE DESTROYED MY MASTER.
    NOW ITS TIME FOR VENGENCE.
    DOOKU: I SHALL GATHER UP ALL OF THE TRADE FEDERATION AND WE SHALL ATTACK.
    DARTH SIDIOUS: GOOD, LORD TYRANUS. VERY GOOD.
    DOOKU: I MUST BE LEAVING SO I CAN WITNESS THE FINAL BATTLE OF THE CLONE WARS.
    DARTH SIDIOUS: SO BE IT THEN.
    DOOKU LEAVES.
    DARTH SIDIOUS: ALL I NEED IS SKYWALKER KNEELINGS BEFORE ME AND I WILL CRUSH THE JEDI ORDER.
    WITH ONE HIT THEY WILL BE FINISHED.

    THE SEEN CHANGES TO ALDERAAN SPACE.
    OBI-WAN: SENATOR, WE SHALL GET OUT OF THIS.
    BAIL: THANKS, MASTER KENOBI.
    OBI-WAN: PLEASE CALL ME OBI-WAN.
    BAIL: OK.
    PLOIT: VICEROY, WE CAN'T TAKE ANOTHER HIT FROM THE DORID SHIPS OR WE WILL BE BLASTED INTO NOTHINGESS.
    BAIL: CAN WE GO INTO LIGHTSPEED?
    PLOIT: NO. THE FIGHTERS DAMAGED OUR LIGHT SPEED ENGINES.
    BEEP BEEP
    OBI-WAN: SENATOR ORAGONA, IT SEEMS WE HAVE A MESSAGE FROM COMMANDER TARKIN.
    BAIL: PLAY THE MESSSAGE.
    HOLOGRAM OF TARKIN: VICEROY ORAGONA YOU HAVE NOTHING TO WORRY ABOUT. I WILL BE THERE AS SOON
    AS I CAN TO WHIP THEM OUT.
    THE HOLOGRAM SHUTS OFF.
    OBI-WAN: I WISH ANAKIN WAS HERE. HE WOULD KNOW WHAT TO DO.

    MEANWHILE AT NABOO THE SKYWALKER HOUSE.
    ANAKIN: PADME, I WILL BE BACK. I AM GONNA GO GET SOME FOOD.
    PADME: OK. AND TAKE R2 WITH YOU.
    ANAKIN: OK. COME ON R2.
    PADME LOOKS OUT HER WINDOW.
    C3PO: ANY THING WRONG, MISS PADME?
    PADME: 3PO, I FEEL LIKE I HAVE DONE THE WRONG THING BY QUITING BEENING A SENATOR AND
    MARRIED ANAKIN.
    C3PO: ITS OK. YOU'RE GONNA BE ALL RIGHT.
    PADME: I SURE HOPE YOU'RE RIGHT 3PO.

    THE SEEN CHANGES TO NEMIDOA
    NUTE GUNRAY: THIS HAS GONE TO FAR.
    LOTT DOD: WHY DO YOU SAY THAT. THE TRADE FEDRATION SHALL BE THE RULERS OF THE GALAXY.
    NUTE: I JUST DONT TRUST THIS JEDI MASTER, DOOKU. HE'S SO MUCH LIKE LORD SIDIOUS.
    LOTT: HOW CAN YOU BE SURE OF THIS? DOOKU WILL HELP US GAIN THE POWER WE DESERVE.
    NUTE: IF HE WAS HERE I WOULD...
    COUNT DOOKU WALKS IN.
    DOOKU: YOU WOULD WHAT, VICEROY GUNRAY?
    NUTE: YOU DONT SCARE ME, JEDI.
    DOOKU: NO?
    NUTE: I COULD WIN THIS CLONE WAR WITHOUT YOU.
    COUNT DOOKU CLOSES HIS FIST SLOWILY. AND IT KILLS NUTE GUNARY.
    DOOKU: WOULD ANY ONE ELSE LIKE TO DIE AS GUNRAY, HERE?
    LOTT DOD: NO... NO, WE WILL SERVE YOU.
    DOOKU: GOO
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