I'm rather enjoying this. Dooku's character and emotions are clearly there. I also enjoy the way this is written, the perspective and writing style works perfectly. The only thing negative I must add is Yoda's voice. His voice sounds a little off or maybe you intended to write his voice as you saw fit? If that is the case then okay, but if you're sticking to the original Yoda voice I would advise checking over his dialogue, it sounds odd at times. Other then that, I'm looking forward to the next update. Nice work.