Saga Hope Lost

This story is a story through a survior of the raid at the Jedi Temple. The life after the raid.
The character's name is Maria Last name is unknown

"Run Maria Run." Master Adi shouted just before she was shot through the chest by the Clone troopers that invaded the Jedi Temple.
I ran as fast as I could before I ran into Him.
I looked up to Him as a brother and now he betrays me and his family.
"Anakin Skywalker, why are you doing this to me?" I said as I punched him in the stomach.
He doubled over in pain and looked at me with his yellow eyes.
"Get out, Maria, I don't want to hurt you." He said as he grabbed his lightsaber.
"Where can I go?"
"Go to Alderaan." He said as he disappeared into the smoke.

I woke up in deep sweat.
"Milady are you okay?" Tina said as she helped me up.
"I am fine." I said as I went to the closet.
"You have a meeting with the Emperor and Lord Vader in a few mintues."
"I should wear my blue dress."
"Milady that is volation of the code."
"If they think that we should wear only white and black, I should burn all my colored dresses."

 

Very touching. Well done.

 

THE BELOW IS MY HONEST OPINION. DO NOT HATE ME. I AM NOT TRYING TO BE NEGATIVE.

Confusing, short, not much of a story, and uncreative.

 

UMMMMMM???????

 

Sara Kenobi Thanks for the input
Sword-of raditz This is just the beginning of the story and it gets even confusing later on but I will explain it.
Maria had a nightmare of what happen to her 17 years in the past. There is a volation of what colors to wear now that the empire has taken over the trade routes to Naboo and to the Hapes cluster where Maria was born. Anakin is like a brother to her and she is very disappointed in him.
Genimay see above post