darth seti, ok one section. "iii. TIE Defenders also pose a serious threat to capital ship's shields. They have two warhead launchers, four laser connons, and two Ion Cannons. Defenders also can mount one mini-tractor beam projector, a jaming device, a "sensor cloak," which renders the ship invisible to most sensors, or a chaff counter-measure system, which releases liquid metal which warheds will lock on to. There are very few Defenders as they are very expensive and difficult to produce in mass numbers." just so you know chaff(liquid metal) and and stubble(mini-rockets) countermeasures can be mounted on "any fighter", and are not dangerous to a capship except that they keep the fighter alive longer. as the case of the tie defender, it useally has countermeasures added, along with one of the above "beam weapons", which you forgot to list the one that acts like a mag pulse, which If I remember right was called System disabling beam, or system suppressor. I will try to get back with you with the information. beam weapons can be mounted on "any fighter" but it's seldom done. second problem I see It seem less pushed to have the ion cannons section listed near the laser section. The way you have it right now it seems to be an almost ignored issue, and is a bit confusing. overall good job. From what I get out of gamer, you cannot publish a story unless you were a previously published scifi writer. But You may have a chance at an article or letter in the to the editor section.