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Beyond - Legends How to Deal (NJO AU, angst and romance) J/J, A/T, Jacen, Kyp, L/M, H/L *COMPLETED 1/22*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by NYCitygurl, Jun 2, 2005.

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  1. Valley_Lord

    Valley_Lord Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm not satisfied, he still has sins to answer for. Throwing love at an unborn child does not excuse infeidelity. He is still a dishonorable coward, who sook shelter in the arms of another woman. At least Jacen had an excuse for his actions.
     
  2. oldjedinurse

    oldjedinurse Jedi Padawan star 4

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    The way Anakin checks on his family at night is very sweet. 'Bout time he decided to talk to Tahiri - good grief, I thought Jacen could be "slow"....

    And Jag crawled in with Jaina after her parents were asleep? [face_thinking] I wonder if Han will find out (I'm sure Leia probably knows)...

    Great update, as always, Nat!

    oldj
     
  3. RedGold

    RedGold Jedi Master star 4

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    I guess I can forgive you for having this all turn out okay... :p

    Anakin is doing the right thing for once... so I can't really fault him for that...

    Still wish Jacen was dead... but I have sence Destiny's Way... :(
     
  4. DreamingIce

    DreamingIce Jedi Knight star 3

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    I have to talk to her, or I?m going to lose them both.

    So now he finally gets it? Give him hell Tahiri! ;) :p

    ...but do take him back eventually.

    Great post Nat!

    ~Misha
     
  5. Jek_Windu

    Jek_Windu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Good post. Can't wait for more.
     
  6. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I have to talk to her, or I?m going to lose them both.


    Well about bloody time. He finally grew some common sense.



    ~Sam
     
  7. FelsGoddess

    FelsGoddess Jedi Master star 5

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    Now that Anakin has decided to talk, let's hope Tahiri listens.

    Great update.
     
  8. Handmaiden_Rabe

    Handmaiden_Rabe Jedi Master star 5

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    Kin-Kin's decided to learn common sense! W00T! Maybe Tahiri'll pick some up from him...? [face_hopeful]

    Very sweet, Nat. I absolutely loved it.
     
  9. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    About time Anakin.

    I kind of agree with Valley Lord. It's going to take more than loving your child to redeem yourself.

    Let's hope that talking to Tahiri will put you on the right track.
     
  10. Valley_Lord

    Valley_Lord Jedi Master star 4

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    Agreed, his redemption is entirly up to Tahiri.

    Sorry if my reaction seems harsh but I am a proponent of honor codes. Like West Point
    "I shall not lie cheat or steal, nor tolerate those who do."
    I guess being in the Air Force(ROTC) has limited my tolerence of the honorless.
     
  11. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    :)


    :D Thanks!!! :D


    :) [face_laugh]


    [face_laugh] Yeah . . .


    [face_laugh] She does :) :) Thanks!!! :D


    :D


    Yeah, but give the poor guy a break. The baby needs a father.


    :) He's a sweet guy . . . sometimes. [face_laugh] Oh, Jacen is without a doubt the slowest Solo . . .

    :D They'll do everything to keep Han from finding out . . .

    Thanks!!! :D


    [face_laugh] It took you that long? I barely made it through Traitor . . .


    [face_laugh] There will be hell-giving (sort of) but I can't promise the other . . . Thanks!!! :D


    Thanks!!! :D


    [face_laugh]


    Maybe . . . Thanks!!! :D


    [face_laugh] Thanks!!! :D


    Yeah, he has to make it up to them.


     
  12. Valley_Lord

    Valley_Lord Jedi Master star 4

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    Tell the ground pounder that Army sucks
     
  13. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    [face_laugh] He and his friend were having a friendly fight on New Years about which is better, army or navy.
     
  14. Valley_Lord

    Valley_Lord Jedi Master star 4

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    Navy, just getting on and off base is easier. Marines and Shore patrol do their job. At an army base your luckey if half the grunts arn't soused with beer. At least the Navy does it off base.
     
  15. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This is really short . . . but it'll be worth it.


    ~~~~~~

    Anakin found Tahiri the next day in a lounge. She was staring out a window into the darkness of space. Anakin sat down next to her on the couch.

    It was a few minutes before she acknowledged his presence. ?I thought you were avoiding me,? she said stiffly.

    ?Not so much avoiding you as figuring out how to talk to you.? Anakin sighed and ran his fingers through his already unruly hair. ?This is all wrong. You?re my best friend. I should be able to tell you anything.?

    ?But you?re not,? she concluded.

    ?No, and that pains me,? he replied softly.

    Tahiri sighed and turned so that she was facing Anakin. ?Anakin, I??

    He silenced her with a finger over her lips. ?No. You?ve always been the one who talked. Now it?s my turn.? He took a deep breath. ?I love you, Tahiri, and I love Zavad. I don?t know what I would do without the two of you.?

    ?Anakin, you say you love our child, but would you really take an active role in his life??

    ?I already have.? Anakin reached out to her with their Force bond and led her down to the presence that was their son. Tahiri was shocked when the baby recognized both parents.

    ?You?you??

    ?Have been going behind your back and getting to know our son, yes. For months, actually.?

    ?Why didn?t you tell me??

    ?I couldn?t think of a way to. But this is stupid. I love you both, and I?m not letting you get away,? Anakin said, with a look of fierce determination on his face.

    ?Anakin.? Tahiri sighed as she said his name. ?I don?t know about this. Are we really meant to be together??

    ?Would we be getting Zavad if we weren?t??

    Tahiri stood up. ?I?ll need some time to think,? she said. ?I?ll let you know before Zavad is born.? She started to walk away when she felt something flow down her legs. Oh, Force, what is this?

    Anakin turned white. ?You don?t have much time,? he commented,? because your water just broke.?

    ~~~~~~
     
  16. Valley_Lord

    Valley_Lord Jedi Master star 4

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    Um, isn't that a little early? uh-oh, this is not good.
     
  17. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Yeah, it is, but it's not too unusual, and the baby can still be perfectly healthy.
     
  18. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    Come on Zavad. Be healthy. [face_praying]

    Glad to see he fessed up about doing that behind her back. Hopefully during the anquish of childbirth she'll forget about his mistake.

    Great post. Hope they get to Cighal in time. Wouldn't want to have to deliver that baby right there. Or would we?
     
  19. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    He'll be okay :)

    Thanks!!! :D [face_laugh] That would be funny, but no.
     
  20. Jek_Windu

    Jek_Windu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Cliffies...are evil, EVIL! Can't wait for more.
     
  21. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    [face_devil] Tomorrow or Monday :)
     
  22. mavjade

    mavjade Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    YAY! The baby![face_dancing]

    I'm so happy Anakin talked to her...finally!

    "I?ll let you know before Zavad is born.? She started to walk away when she felt something flow down her legs. Oh, Force, what is this?
    Anakin turned white. ?You don?t have much time,? he commented,? because your water just broke.?

    [face_laugh] That really cracked me up! Ah, the irony!

    Great update Nat!
    Can't wait for more!

     
  23. RedGold

    RedGold Jedi Master star 4

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    Despite the fact that I have been rooting for horrible things to happen...

    I do hope that Zaavad is born healthy and all that.
     
  24. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *waits to see how truly evil Nat can be*


    [face_mischief]


    ~Sam
     
  25. goddess45

    goddess45 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    HA!! I wanna see this next chapter.... Tahiri.. in Labor... hows Anakin gonna deal with that?

    great job nat!!
     
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