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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Alian_Invader, Nov 17, 2004.

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  1. stupid_gizka

    stupid_gizka Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Found this when sniffing around aimlessly - Great!

    These old Rogues... :p A beautiful K/J anyway :D

    Ars Longa - ;)
     
  2. General_Karrde

    General_Karrde Jedi Youngling star 2

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    If Kyp and Jaina ever decide to run off and elope, I'm gonna have Wedge marry them. That would be really ironic. He'd probably rather eat his x-wing, or french kiss Ysanne Isard. <oops my evil writer side is showing>

    [face_laugh] LOL!

    [face_devil] That's pretty evil. :D

    Uppers!
     
  3. Jesina_Dreis

    Jesina_Dreis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I wanted to show the part of Wedge that holds a grudge. I mean he did hunt down the people who killed his parents, with some help from Booster. The moral of the story is... don't mess with the people Wedge loves.
    Alian, I will be doing that in my story "Bitter Reunion." *crosses fingers and hopes no one reading that reads this*

    I look forward to more. Wedge is one of my favorites, too.

    Jes
     
  4. Senator_Leia73

    Senator_Leia73 Jedi Master star 4

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    Takes cookie...hmmm nice warm and chewy... :D

    Up :)
     
  5. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I meant to reply to this story before. Very good post! :)

    I liked the rivalry between Kyp and Wedge. It?ll be interesting to see Jaina?s reaction to Kyp?s good deed.

    Ams [face_love]
     
  6. General_Karrde

    General_Karrde Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Up!

    When's next post Alian?

    :) Like my new icon?
     
  7. Senator_Leia73

    Senator_Leia73 Jedi Master star 4

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  8. Alian_Invader

    Alian_Invader Jedi Youngling

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    Kyp was ready to call it a night. He hated crowds, and even though Jaina considered him a friend, he didn?t feel comfortable among the pilots here. Word of his Sabaac loss to General Antilles was spreading faster than a bioengineered plague, and he couldn?t stand anymore whispers and considering looks. He started to make headway toward the door and then a hand caught his wrist. He looked up and saw the smiling face of one of his former Dozen pilots, the most attractive, female one.

    ?Hello, Min.? Minda Eltoras was a good pilot from a rough Rim world, and she truly deserved it when she was offered a commission of Major and a top slot in one of the best squadrons. Kyp was happy for her. ?Nice to, um, see you?? He looked her up and down and realized that he was seeing a lot more of her than usual. What was with the women showing so much skin tonight?

    ?You?re blushing, Durron. I didn?t think you were capable of turning that shade of red.?

    ?You?ve become a comedian, great, who?s your CO, Major Janson??

    Min beamed up at him, ?How?d you guess??

    ?And you were such a nice, normal girl, too. What a Sithing shame.? When she took his hand and started to tug him in the direction of the dance floor, Kyp bit back a groan.

    ?Come on, Durron, dance with me just this once? Who knows when I?ll get to cover your six again?? Her tone implied that she wanted to cover more than just his six.

    Kyp decided he would give her a single dance, and then he was going to do what any good Jedi Master did when confronted with a willing woman in a very skimpy dress, he would make some plausible excuse and run like hell. He didn?t need another woman, he had enough trouble keeping away from the woman he did want in his bed.

    Kyp led her to the edge of the dance floor and pulled her into his arms for the slow dance. ?One dance, Min, then I need to get some sleep. I?m leaving in the early hours for Mon Cal.?

    ?Right?? Min didn?t look convinced. In fact, she looked pretty kriffing smug. ?If you?re saving yourself for a certain Trickster Goddess, Durron, all you have to do is say so? I?m all out of love spells powerful enough to work on an aging, hopelessly smitten, Jedi Master.?

    ?Hey!? Kyp blinked at her. ?I?m not aging. I?m in great shape for my age??

    ?Honey, when was the last time you got some??

    He frowned. ?Some what??

    Minda laughed, ?If you have to ask, then you?re worse off than I originally thought. I rest my case.?

    Kyp didn?t like where this conversation was going. ?You?re terrible. Janson deserves someone like you,? Kyp grumbled, ?I hope you give him grey hair.?

    ?Oh, I certainly plan to try. He?s fine to look at, for an old timer, and thanks to your glowing report, he?s made me his XO. It?s? cozy.?

    Kyp rolled his eyes. ?Force help us all.?

    ?You keep your Force to yourself, Durron. I?ve got my own spell to work on men??

    ?I don?t want to know.?

    ?What you need is a good spell to work on a Goddess? I know just the thing?? She grabbed Kyp?s face between her hands and planted a long, wet kiss on his mouth. He opened his mouth to protest and got was some serious tongue play. The other couples dancing stopped to cheer them on and Kyp could feel his face burning hot.

    He finally unlocked her lips from his and sputtered, ?What the kriff do you think you?re doing, Min??

    Min gave him a blinding smile, but she kept her voice low. ?Jealously works wonders on reluctant Goddesses.?

    Kyp threw his hands up in frustration and turned to stalk away, only to run full into Jaina. Great. Just great. ?Jaina.?

    ?Kyp. Could I have a word with you??

    ?Well, I was just about to go back to my quarters and get some sleep??

    ?I won?t keep you very long.?

    Kyp eyed Jaina for a minute, his brain debating where the safest place to talk would be. He didn?t trust himself enough to offer to escort her to her quarters. He also didn?t want a repeat of the kissing match that happened in his quarters. ?Lead the way, Goddess.?
     
  9. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Kyp is in trouble *lol*

    nice post
     
  10. Jesina_Dreis

    Jesina_Dreis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Janson's an old-timer. *shakes head* wonder if he feels like he's "a conservative old man in charge of a group of insane young pilots"?

    Jaina wants to talk...this should be interesting.

    Jes
     
  11. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    There goes Kyp's vocal cords down the drain. There's nothing like a worman scorned ;).

    Good post :).

    Ams [face_love]
     
  12. stupid_gizka

    stupid_gizka Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Yub yub!!!! Update!

    Nice to see Wes and Kyp is indeed in deeeeep trouble ... ;)

     
  13. General_Karrde

    General_Karrde Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Word of his Sabaac loss to General Antilles was spreading faster than a bioengineered plague,

    hmm, reference to any other bioengineered plagues perhaps? [face_thinking]

    He started to make headway toward the door and then a hand caught his wrist. He looked up and saw the smiling face of one of his former Dozen pilots, the most attractive, female one.


    Dun Dun Duuuun! [face_worried]

    ?Hello, Min.? Minda Eltoras was a good pilot from a rough Rim world,

    oooo a new character1 [face_dancing]

    [/i]?Nice to, um, see you?? He looked her up and down and realized that he was seeing a lot more of her than usual.[/i]

    [face_blushing] [face_love]

    What was with the women showing so much skin tonight?

    This is a test of the emergency faithfulness program. I repeat, this is a test....
    [face_laugh]

    ?You?ve become a comedian, great, who?s your CO, Major Janson??

    Min beamed up at him, ?How?d you guess??

    ?And you were such a nice, normal girl, too. What a Sithing shame.? When she took his hand and started to tug him in the direction of the dance floor, Kyp bit back a groan.


    [face_laugh] ROFL [face_laugh]

    ?Come on, Durron, dance with me just this once? Who knows when I?ll get to cover your six again?? Her tone implied that she wanted to cover more than just his six.

    [face_whistling] wow

    Kyp decided he would give her a single dance, and then he was going to do what any good Jedi Master did when confronted with a willing woman in a very skimpy dress, he would make some plausible excuse and run like hell.

    Jedi Master running? :confused: When does that happen? [face_laugh]

    ?Honey, when was the last time you got some??

    He frowned. ?Some what??


    [face_laugh] Kyp is so hopeless. [face_laugh]

    ?You keep your Force to yourself, Durron. I?ve got my own spell to work on men??

    ?What you need is a good spell to work on a Goddess? I know just the thing?? She grabbed Kyp?s face between her hands and planted a long, wet kiss on his mouth. He opened his mouth to protest and got was some serious tongue play. The other couples dancing stopped to cheer them on and Kyp could feel his face burning hot.

    Min gave him a blinding smile, but she kept her voice low. ?Jealously works wonders on reluctant Goddesses.?


    [face_love] She certainly is a go-getter. [face_laugh] [face_love]

    Kyp threw his hands up in frustration and turned to stalk away, only to run full into Jaina. Great. Just great. ?Jaina.?

    ?Kyp. Could I have a word with you??


    [face_whistling] Wow, that sucks....

    ?Well, I was just about to go back to my quarters and get some sleep??

    Can't talk your way out of this way son.... [face_devil]

    Nicely done Alian! =D=
     
  14. LadyAngelic

    LadyAngelic Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Kyp decided he would give her a single dance, and then he was going to do what any good Jedi Master did when confronted with a willing woman in a very skimpy dress, he would make some plausible excuse and run like hell.

    Oh...I love it! :p LOL! Great post!
     
  15. Alian_Invader

    Alian_Invader Jedi Youngling

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    Thank you for your replies, but Darth real life is acting Sithly tonight so I have to do one group reply.

    To All: Oh yeah, Kyp is screwed. Can I say screwed on this board Dana? The whole thing wasn't even his fault. Poor Kyp the guy can't catch a break. Just wait, it's always darkest before the dawn, or so they say...


    Alian_Invader



     
  16. Senator_Leia73

    Senator_Leia73 Jedi Master star 4

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    LOL Jaina is gonna kill Kyp! Oh he's in trouble now! LOL [face_laugh]
     
  17. Dantana Skywalker

    Dantana Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Heeee! Poor Kyppie. :p "Some what?" *dies laughing* I so love this story!

    Yes, you can say "screwed". :) The list of words you can't say is in Fan Fiction Resource, in the FAQ, which is the third sticky from the top. :)


    Dana
     
  18. Alian_Invader

    Alian_Invader Jedi Youngling

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    Jaina led Kyp to a small, drab grey conference room, with a small table, six chairs and a decent viewport that showed the star lines of hyperspace. It was probably the only place, besides their respective quarters, where there weren?t currently people milling about. Kyp wasn?t surprised to see Jaina key in a code to lock the doors behind them. The Force only knew what she wanted to talk with him about, and with the door securely lock he didn?t see much hope of an easy escape.

    ?Jaina??

    At the sound of his voice, Jaina turned to him, an unreadable expression on her face. She put a hand on Kyp?s chest and pushed him back until he bumped up against a chair. She pushed him down onto it. ?We are going to have a talk, now. No interruptions.?

    Kyp nodded. With the buzz he had going, and the way the room seemed to want to spin, he realized that wasn?t the wisest course of action. The last thing he need was to say or do the wrong thing, but he was still embarrassed by the way Min tried to make Jaina jealous. ?Jaina, if this is about that kiss??

    Jaina rolled her eyes, ?Oh, please. I know what she was trying to do. I?m not an idiot. Your former Dozen are very protective of you.?

    Kyp snorted, ?Right??

    ?I?m serious. In the last two months, there have been five brawls started by former Dozen pilots. I had to go bail their sorry butts out of the brig myself.?

    ?You did that for them??

    ?No one else was going to do it. And, I had a strong suspicion the fights had something to do with you. If some ignorant pilot made a remark about you to me, I would?ve been thrown in the brig myself for decking him.?

    ?Not you, Goddess, you would never sink so low as to get into a brawl like some drunken Flight Officer on a three day pass.? Kyp?s tone was playful rather than mocking. ?That would be beneath your dignity? what about your pristine military record??

    Jaina scowled down at him, ?My record isn?t as pristine as you think, Durron. I?ve thrown some punches, or at least I did back when I was a Rogue.?

    ?I?m shocked.?


    ?Yeah, well, you?ll get over it. Speaking of shocked, Colonel Darklighter and I had an interesting chat while we were dancing. Apparently, he and Colonel Celchu are under the mistaken impression that you?ve broken my heart. Did Colonel Celchu come to you? Did he accuse you of hurting me??

    ?Yes.?

    ?And??

    ?And I told him I had no idea why you were upset. It was the truth because I?ve never felt you shielding so hard in your life.? Kyp let his rebuke hang in the air between them. He was still smarting from the way Jaina created barriers to keep him from sensing her breakdown. It made Kyp doubt Jaina?s friendship, and that was like a knife in his gut.

    At least, Jaina had the decency to look embarrassed. ?I didn?t know he?d blame you. I told him you didn?t do anything, and about what Aunt Mara said, and how I feel pulled in different directions. He was so nice about it. He offered to take back my resignation if I wasn?t really sure I wanted to leave. It was hard to explain what I was feeling, because both options felt wrong. When you told me about looking for new Jedi, I could tell you were excited. I envy you, at least you know where the Force is leading. I?m in the dark. I heard you tell Minda you?re leaving in the morning, am I going with you??

    ?If you want to.?

    ?I do. Good, at least that?s settled.? Jaina took a deep breath. ?Did you ask to buy my X-wing from General Antilles during a Sabaac game??

    Kyp groaned and dropped his forehead onto the table with a solid thunk. With so many people watching, he knew it would get back to Jaina. ?Not exactly.?

    ?What exactly did you do, Kyp??

    Kyp thunked his forehead, again. The pain was refreshing, and it cleared a little of the drunken numbness out of his brain. ?I offered my X-wing in trade for yours.?

    ?Why?? Jaina asked suspiciously.

    Kyp opened his mouth, and his soul poured out, ?Because you wanted to keep your X-wing and it was such an easy thing. I?d give my life for you, Jaina, an X-wing is nothing compared to that. You d
     
  19. AvenKiel

    AvenKiel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *hops up and down on seat*

    Yes Yes Yes Yes YES!!!

    OH, that was wonderful!!!

    More mush please! *holds out bowl*
     
  20. stupid_gizka

    stupid_gizka Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Squeeeee! That was good! :D :D
     
  21. Jesina_Dreis

    Jesina_Dreis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Kyp let his rebuke hang in the air between them. He was still smarting from the way Jaina created barriers to keep him from sensing her breakdown. It made Kyp doubt Jaina?s friendship, and that was like a knife in his gut.
    Awwww, poor Kyp. I like nice, sweet, sensitive Kyp...

    Kyp stood up, grabbed Jaina by the upper arms. ?Don?t you dare cry! I really kriffing hate it when you cry.?
    You're the one who said something that might make her cry.

    ?You listen to me, Kyp Durron! Don?t you dare apologize for what you just said, unless you didn?t mean it. And, if I hadn?t wanted you kissing me, oh Great Jedi Master, I would?ve kneed you in the groin. I?m a Jedi too, and I?ve been trained in hand to hand combat. I can handle myself.?
    Boy, that sounds a lot like Wedge and Iella in Adumar...

    That was so cute!

    Jes
     
  22. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    wow

    me like it!
    they are so cute!

    Mag
     
  23. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Min gave him a blinding smile, but she kept her voice low. ?Jealously works wonders on reluctant Goddesses.?


    Loved that line.

    Good job, Kyp! Yes! Another kiss!

    And the next morning they're leaving... all alone...;) [face_devil]
     
  24. Senator_Leia73

    Senator_Leia73 Jedi Master star 4

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    Yes! That was great! And we have another kiss! To bad in a way I was waiting for Jaina to kick his butt because of the kiss. ;)
     
  25. C3SoloP0

    C3SoloP0 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!


    I freakin' loved these last 2 posts!!!

    at first, i thought jaina was gonna get angry about the kiss *pheww!!*
     
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