i hace a few questions. (sorry if this is in the wrong forum . :) thanks for your help. :)

1. is the title "The Beginning of a Saga." an appealing tile? if not why.

(check this story out, its in my profile, and tell me if it needs a better title, if it does whaty title might be sutible?


2. those who are not pawdawans yet are they called iniates or imaites?

 

Padawans are called initiates (you'll have to check the spelling for yourself) before they become padawans.

Kit

 

From their point of view, they're probably "inmates"...

 

ok, now what about my first question?

 

i would suggest you, changing it to something else, something that happens in your story, like: battle of coruscant (Or something like that anyway)

btw. i havn't read your story so the examble title is proberbly not the best title for you story...