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Saga I Killed Her

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Cil, May 23, 2005.

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  1. Cil

    Cil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Apr 5, 2005
    Title: I Killed Her
    Time Frame: End of RotS
    Summary: Vader thoughts after RotS

    I Killed Her.


    I Did this to Save Her.
    But In the end I killed her.
    My Wife, my child,
    My Life.

    I should have never listened to him.
    I should have killed him when I knew.
    I should have put aside my fears
    And did the right thing.

    But I did the wrong thing.
    And Now I?m paying for it.
    I?m paying for it, in the way I have no Family
    No Children
    No Wife
    No Life

    Yet I still Live.
    With nothing to Live for.

    As you may know I have written a whole series of these sort of Vig?s, here are the links to them:
    Anakin Where are you?, - http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=20117193&replies=4
    Just a Senator - http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=19916571&start=20023302
    My Baby Sister - http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=19562076&start=20023342

     
    Cil, May 23, 2005
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  2. SilSolo

    SilSolo Jedi Knight star 5

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    Mar 5, 2004
    Oooh so beautiful and said *sniffle sniffle*
     
    SilSolo, May 23, 2005
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  3. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Mar 26, 2001
    Nice handle on the despair that we know he was feeling.
     
    DarthIshtar, May 23, 2005
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  4. Gina

    Gina Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jun 3, 2003
    Yet I still Live.
    With nothing to Live for.

    So heartbreaking.

    Nicely done!


     
    Gina, May 23, 2005
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  5. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Beautiful! =D=

    I just want to kick Anakin the butt and ask him what the heck he was thinking?!!!

    Loved it!
     
    VaderLVR64, May 23, 2005
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  6. Cil

    Cil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Thank You For the Reviews, everyone.
     
    Cil, May 26, 2005
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  7. Ani-maniac

    Ani-maniac Jedi Knight star 4

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    Jul 5, 2005
    Woderful! =D= Very close to poetry, and an amazing view into Anakin's thoughts.

    Ani-maniac
     
    Ani-maniac, Aug 17, 2005
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  8. FelsGoddess

    FelsGoddess Jedi Master star 5

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    Sep 5, 2004
    Beautiful!
     
    FelsGoddess, Aug 17, 2005
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  9. DarthAJ

    DarthAJ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Dec 9, 2004
    Very tragic with using so little words. Basically it sums up all of what Vader's been through the past month? week?

    Good job!
     
    DarthAJ, Aug 17, 2005
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  10. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 1, 2001
    that was really good.

    ~aeryn
     
    AERYN_SUN, Aug 18, 2005
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  11. JOINME

    JOINME Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 25, 2005

    Very very haunting.
    The minimalist style really adds to the hollowness, Anakin has lost everything.

    Yet I still Live.
    With nothing to Live for.

    :_|

    Can't wait to check out your other viggies. :D
     
    JOINME, Aug 18, 2005
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  12. Palpy560

    Palpy560 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Feb 11, 2005
    :_|
    Poor Vader!:_|
    Poor Padme!:_|
    Poor Luke!:_|
    Poor Leia!:_|
    EVIL PALPATINE!:mad:

    Nice Job![face_batting]
    Now to go back and read the others.

     
    Palpy560, Aug 18, 2005
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